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message 15601: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((oki))

"What if it's too late, Patrik?" she asked in a tone of voice that was so dark it scared the sane part of her buried deep inside. "What then?"


message 15602: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Back,))

Patrik looked back at her
"Then there isn't much we can do is there?"

Josiah's breathing quickened
"That's Salem they're talking about!" he hissed
"And that's Patrik saying it!"
"That's not Patrik, Emmy. You can tell as much."
Emmy glared at him,, eyes flashing silver
"I'm protecting him as much as your trying to protect Salem."


message 15603: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Hola mi amiga))

Farrow glanced over at the siblings, disregarding Patrik for the moment. "Listening in?" she asked, scowling.


message 15604: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Hola chika!))

It was Emmy's turn to meet her gaze
"You didn't expect us to not be in on the action did you?"
Josiah was silent

Patrik looked at them, his eyes raking over them.


message 15605: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*chuckles* Salut mon amie!))

"Action?" Farrow smiled slowly. Darkness radiated out from her. "No. Just a conversation, Emmeline."


message 15606: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Haha Battle of the languages))

The siblings tattoos flared up in responce to it.
"And are we not allowed to listen?" Josiah asked smoothly

Patrik chuckled cooly
"See? Her's burns. And his is lost."
Emmy and Josiah knew just was he was talking about


message 15607: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((It's awesome!))

"I noticed," Farrow replied, ignoring Josiah's question. Ink dripped from her fingers, pooling on the ground in tiny puddles that disappeared quickly. She slipped past them and glided over to the cribs, picking up Logan and holding him gingerly, close to her chest.


message 15608: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((heck yes. I just wish I knew more so that I could keep it going..))

Josiah whipped around
"Farrow, put my son down." every ounce of anger he had in him was put in to those five words.

Emmy watched as Patrik's own tattoo was laced in blue. It was a small change but she knew it ran down the length of his side, from hip to jawline. It was the most change that mark had seen in the seven years she had known him.


message 15609: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo))

Farrow shot Josiah a withering glance. "He's my nephew." The creepy smile returned. "And I love him. I'm being gentle, aren't I?"


message 15610: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah moved towards her, the Shadows convulsing around him.
"Put him down."

Patrik finally looked at her then, a slow smile took hold of his lips.
Emmy exhaled, she knew what was going to happen long before it actually did. Her breath clouded around her face.
"Patrik.." She breathed, gentley and calmly. Just as he had done for her.
Patrik looked at her and chuckled
"Emmeline, come on. You know how this works. Better than most as a matter of fact. Leave it alone, for once in your life."


message 15611: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "The dark inside won't hurt him," she said, standing still, her hair falling into her face as she lowered her head to kiss Logan's forehead. "It can't get him anymore. But you're empty, aren't you, Josiah?"


message 15612: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah stared at her his eyes flicking to his son every now and again.
"No, Farrow, no I'm not."

"Patrik, I know how this is. You're not this, you'll regret it. There are things you can't go back from. This is one of them." Emmy said firmly staring right back at him.
Patrik laughed again
"And how many times have you forced me to watch you become this? Hmm?" There was a pause, it wasn't long enough for to her answer
"Too many. Emmeline, far to many. You can deal with this once." There was anger in his voice, harsh unbridled anger that was something she had not expected of Patrik.
She shook her head, her copper hair falling into her eyes.


message 15613: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Logan awoke to the animosity filling the house. He began screaming. Farrow bounced him lightly and looked at Josiah angrily. "This is not my fault."


message 15614: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah raised an eyebrow
"Oh it's not is it?"

Patrik glared at her, something sparking to life behind the sharp blue. Emmy knew just what it was too, it was every ounce of powerful emmotion that had ever been placed in that steel box next to a persons soul for safe keeping. Patrik had been right, she went through this enough to know how it worked
"Yeah? How many times have you called me back from that ledge? Huh? What you want this? You want to have absolutely no control over what you can do? You shouldn't want that Patrik. Remember? You made me promise that I wouldn't let it happen to you. Remember?"


message 15615: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Not just mine. Yours. Theirs." Farrow put Logan down gently and then stalked back to the kitchen. "Don't be more stupid than you already are, Patrik," she spat acidly.


message 15616: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah watched her angrilly

PAtrik acted as if he couldn't hear Farrow. The ground around her froze, ice creeping ever toward her. In the confusion Emmy moved next to him and placed a burning hand on his chest, then against her better judgement, knocked him out.
Emmy glared up at Farrow
"Shut up." she said simply.


message 15617: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Farrow wasn't looking at them anymore. She felt heavy as she watched the ice covered floor. She knelt down to touch it, trailing her fingers over the surface and then laying her hands flat. "Cold. Dark. Fiery. Empty. What else?" she murmured.


message 15618: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy looked off in the distance and sounded far off when she replied
"Whole, Farrow, Whole."

Josiah looked at them curiously


message 15619: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "((Really? That's awesome!))
((NaNo starts tonight right?))

Patrik looked startled as he walked to her side.

Emmy's eyes caught Josiah's
"Something's off." She commented moving towards the k..."


"No, it is," she said in the same tone.


message 15620: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan looked at her
"Is it now?"


message 15621: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "I think," she said, looking away.


message 15622: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Ok." Declan nodded


message 15623: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani looked away.


message 15624: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan lapsed into silence


message 15625: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments She glanced at him.


message 15626: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan looekd up at her


message 15627: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani half-smiled at him.


message 15628: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "Emmy looked off in the distance and sounded far off when she replied
"Whole, Farrow, Whole."

Josiah looked at them curiously"


"There is no whole," she countered. "How could there be."


message 15629: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy laughed
"Why not Farrow? Why the hell not? Maybe Salem is one of the lucky ones that is whole therefore she can keep everyone else whole."


message 15630: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Hannah!))


message 15631: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Farrow was silent for a moment. "Huh. Maybe you are right, Emmeline," she said, gradually getting less dark and more tired.


message 15632: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Sorry Emmie! I was working on my NaNo!))

Declan returned the smile

Emmy made a face
"Maybe." She dropped to the floor.leaning against the back of the couch.
Josiah sighed and sat onn the arm.


message 15633: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I need to do that...when I'm done my homework.))

Farrow sprawled out on the floor, resting her hot cheek on the ice-floor that was beginning to melt.


message 15634: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((No problem! I`m having a full panic attack because of my NaNo.))

Dani studied his face for a second.


message 15635: by Hannah (last edited Nov 01, 2010 05:08PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Haha. I know right? i've already started over twice... lol and I still have some homework to do. Isn't it great?))

Emmy rested her head in her hands, her hair fallign through her fingers and masking her face.

Josiah went and sat next to Salem. Stretching himself beside her he stared at the celing.

Declan just stayed still.


message 15636: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((my brother's back, apparently. *releived* The police were at my house and everything. I'm glad I wasn't there. I would've cried.))
((It is great.))

Salem curled into him, moving her cheek to rest on his chest.


message 15637: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Good, I'm glad he's back. And that you weren't there. That would have been so awful.))

Josiah put his arm around her, closing his eyes.

Emmy watched Patrik. The burn in the shape of her own hand had reached his skin. She winced, he was going to be mad at her about that.


message 15638: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*hugs*))

The power went out.


message 15639: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((*hugs*))

Emmy closed her eyes, that was pretty much the icing on the cake that was today.

Josiah almost laughed.


message 15640: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Skip to morning?))


message 15641: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "((Haha. I know right? i've already started over twice... lol and I still have some homework to do. Isn't it great?))

Emmy rested her head in her hands, her hair fallign through her fingers and m..."


Eventually, she smiled.


message 15642: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Sounds like a good plan to me.))

Emmy woke up sprawled on the floor. Weirdly the power was still out. But after a quick cursory glance, she realized that Patrik was nowhere in sight. Standing up lightly she went looking for him.
She didn't have to go all that far, he was sitting just outside the door out in the cool morning air. Comming to a stop behind him she stayed silent, unsure if he wanted to be by himself or not.

Josiah woke slowly, shifting ever so slightly as he did so.


message 15643: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan returned her smile. He loved it when she smiled


message 15644: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Farrow woke up with a start, completely unaware of why she was on the roof.


Salem woke up when he did.


message 15645: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani kissed his cheek.


message 15646: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik leaned back against her legs and looked up at her. Smiling softly, all traces of yesterday's Patrik long gone, he said
"Morning you."
Emmy put her hand in his hair
"Morning." She moved and sat down next to him.
"Now, why in hell did you have to burn me?" Patrik asked her with a teasing glint in his eyes
Emmy laughed and bumped him with her shoulder.
"No, seriously. Em, burn me? Knocking me out I understand, but really? Burn me." he shook his head still teasing
"Oh hush. It doesn't hurt."

Josiah looked down at her
"Hey beautiful." he murmured


message 15647: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Hey," she smiled, yawning. "Sleep well?"


message 15648: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan smiled and put his arms around her.

Patrik gave her a look.
"Okay, I'm sorry. But seriously, it doesn't hurt. I can tell." Emmy said looking at him
"Yeah well now I have your hand on my chest."
"I can take it off." she shrugged "If you want."
Patrik raised an eyebrow

Josiah inhaled deeply then let it out in a rush
"Yeah. You?"


message 15649: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I guess. Did something happen last night, Sneaks?"

Farrow scooted to the edge of the roof and jumped down.


message 15650: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Nah. Leave it, I'm just giving you a hard time."
Emmy smirked
"But next time, I'm getting you." Patrik decided
"Fine."

Josiah made a face
"Oh yeah."


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