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message 10101: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Srry! I have to get off! I'm only allowed on for an hour for now.))

Patrik grinned
"You guess?! That hurt."
Emmy laughed


message 10102: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((kaykay))

"I'm sure Emmy can fix that hurt," she joked.


message 10103: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Kay!))
Patrik raised an eyebrow then turned to Emmy
"Can you?" he asked playing along with the joke
Emmy rolled her eyes
"You just HAD to say something Salem."


message 10104: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Of course I did," she was smug now and it showed clearly.


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments "Okay. I am TOTALLY lost here. Are you guys having silent conversations?..and then not telling me about them?" Teeghan smiled. She knew them too well for them to do that kind of stuff.


((omgosh guys i am SO sorry i have not been on in like FOREVER! I havent really been going on the computer a lot. im sorry :]))


message 10106: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((it's okay Kenn. Hannah wasn't on for a while either. :P))

Salem chuckled. "Of course we were."


message 10107: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy was shaking her head and Patrik leaned over to her and whispered in her ear. Her eyes widened
"Patrik!" She smacked him, laughing all the while.
"Yeah of course we were Tee." Patrik winked


message 10108: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem chuckled and got a glass of water.


message 10109: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "And Emmeline, I in no way meant it like that." Patrik said partially seriously.
"Oh please! You have the dirtiest mind ever Patrik." Emmy replied
"Oh please, you thought of it like that."


message 10110: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Coudl you two stop? I don't like being in the middle of this, and I agree with Emmy." Salem said lightly.


message 10111: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik smirked and shut up
"Jesus." Emmy said shaking her head and sliding off the counter rummaging through the cabinets.

((We need drama Kenny...))


message 10112: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((yes we do. Emmy and Salem and Patrik should fight in front of Waverley so the little girl gets worked up. :P))

"Don't use the Lord's name in vain," she said offhandedly.


message 10113: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((YES!! Srry I dissapeared my mom was yelling at me XP))

"Sorry." Emmy said over her shoulder.


message 10114: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((it's kay))

"Don't apologize to me," she laughed. Hey Em. You know, about that plan...we should start it soon. You know what I mean right?


message 10115: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Oh I love the way you think.
"So, Patrik, You up for a little fighting?" Emmy asked turning to face him.


message 10116: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem grinned. "I am."

Waverley was eating a bowl of Cheerios.


message 10117: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik smiled
"Oh hells yes."
"And we all know I always am." Emmy nodded


message 10118: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem smiled, "Waverley, want to come outside?"

The little girl, not nervous about their unchanged emotions, nodded happily in agreement and went to Patrik.

That upset Salem a little bit. All the more better..


message 10119: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Hey Sweets." Patrik smiled at her

"Come on." Emmy said walking to the door.


message 10120: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Waverley grinned up at him and took his hand.

Salem went outside, brushing past Emmy.


message 10121: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Wave has favorites.))

Emmy rolled her eyes, which were already turning silver, and walked outside. She took one long look then started marking the perimiter off. When she was done she stood in the middle and flicked the hair out of her face.

Patrik was next to her withing seconds.


message 10122: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((haha. yep: she's scared of Emmy and Salem now))

Waverley was sitting a metre or two away from the fighting space. Salem took her own sweet time going in.


message 10123: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I bet she is. Salem and Emmy tend to be Scary.))

Emmy used this time to allow herself to get calm. ((Weird right?))


message 10124: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((indeedy do!))

((hah ya))


Salem stepped in and was already agitated.


message 10125: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik looked around then said
" Alright. Salem you and Emmy first. I verse the winner. And it's only untill surrender, prefferably not to the death. Go at it." He finished stepping out of the circle.


message 10126: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem nodded, a grim smile on her face. "First move?"


message 10127: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah you go for it." Emmy said eyes now back to normal, this all seemed backwards. Shouldn't she be getting herself all worked up? All in good time...


message 10128: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "That's not what I meant," she frowned, but she simultaneoussly made a whipping wind curl around Emmy.


message 10129: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy smirked and made a fist then releasing it, the wind died instantly. With a flick of her eyes she caused black fire to move towards Salem.


message 10130: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem brought the wind back to life again, depleting it of oxygen and partially extinguishing the flames.


message 10131: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy's eyes finally flashed back to sliver again and she used a new Shadow trick. She made a motion with her hand that looked like she was tossing an invisible ball to herself and simultaneously the ground beneath her feet split open and let the fire at the center of her earth escape its circular prison.


message 10132: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I love how Emmy's eyes go silver when she's over the top and Salem's just are. Funny. Ironic?))

Salem scowled. Using new tricks now? Fine. She called clouds with the wind and they were pregnant with rain. Acid rain and it fell in large droplets. ((not the acid that burns skins though))


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments Teeghan came outside. She looked at Waverley and then at Emmy and Salem in front of her. "What are you guys doing? Your scaring her."


message 10134: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem chuckled darkly. That's the point.


message 10135: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Lol ikr? My prophesized Emmy and Patrik's eyes do that in my book. Bc they are the powerful pair.))

Emmy smiled smugly
"It's gonna take more than that."
The rain had no effect on the flames, they just drank in the rain and burned higher and hotter.


message 10136: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((it's coolio))

Salem shrugged and changed her tactic, not yet stooping low enough for mind-fighting.


message 10137: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Oh yes. :D thanks))

Emmy brought the flames back to their place and tried something else. She used the heat in the air and made what Liv would classify as a Fire Tornado.

Patrik leaned forward, noticing some new tricks Emmy was using.
Liv and Rife had wandered outside, drawn to the sounds of fighting.


message 10138: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem grinned and siphoned the heat out of the air, using it to make her own fire-sheild for the fun of it.


message 10139: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy grinned adn killed Salem's shield.


message 10140: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Oh well," she said nonchalantly to herself. "Are we playing dirty now?" Salem asked, amused.


message 10141: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You don't know the meaning of the word." Emmy smirked


message 10142: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Oh I do." Salem first sent memories to Emmy, ones of the people she loved and happy times, accompanied by utterly realistically fabricated scenes of those same people being brutally killed: by Emmy.


message 10143: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy put her hands to her head trying to shove the unnwanted thoughts out of her head.
"CRap, I forget about this." Then Emmy let her eyes and tattoos fade into silver and threw fire at Salem trying to get her to lose focus.


message 10144: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem didn't stop, just made it worse.


message 10145: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments The fire that made up the boundries reacted accordingly, infact, everything that Emmy could control and manipulate reacted acordingly.


message 10146: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem refused to stop, no matter how uncomfortable it was. She showed Emmy killing children she had known and she was getting close to her finale: Patrik. But she didn't do it yet.


message 10147: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Oh it' sgonna be intense when she does that. I can't wait can we say MAJOR freak out?))

Emmy tried to focus on bringing fire to her but everything was just so jarring. The fire was still freaking out around her.


message 10148: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((haha. I thought so))

Salem put her hands in front of her and directed images of love to Emmy, pictures and scenes of her and Patrik together. Fit with children later on. She was building up to their deaths.


message 10149: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((hehe))

She seemed to mellow out with those scenes, they weren't something she hadn't thought of before. They were just so Tangible, so like reality, it was incredible to her. She had to fight to remind herself that they weren't real.


message 10150: by Ky (last edited May 09, 2010 03:33PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Then she went in for the finale. Scenes played out like playworks: perfectly executed and so real. Even Salem believed them momentarily. She sent Emmy the scenes of Patrik's death. It was slow and painful. Every sound and sight magnified.


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