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message 9251: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Look at me Ellis," she said, more gentle this time.


message 9252: by [deleted user] (new)

He looked up at her and smiled sadly.


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments ((im back. wow i missed a lot.))

<1>Poetic Ingenius wrote: Salem laughed, "Aw come on Teeg, get over yourself. Hey? Is that Avery crying?" she was just trying to bug her friend, the baby wasn't really crying.1>

Teeghan smiled, "I should actually go check on her."


message 9254: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Hey Kenn!))


message 9255: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "He looked up at her and smiled sadly."

"you are not always wrong. You get a lot of things right...in a freaky way actually. Sometimes..you're too right," she winked at him. "Like knowing what Gibbs was telling you."


message 9256: by [deleted user] (new)

Ellis smiled a little wider and shrugged. "He's a good friend... I've come to know him pretty well. And other things-- it's just guesswork."


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments ((Hey Ken!!))


message 9258: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo- I replied to your message))


message 9259: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "Ellis smiled a little wider and shrugged. "He's a good friend... I've come to know him pretty well. And other things-- it's just guesswork.""

"That's good, I mean, that you have someone to talk to. I haven't been very social with anyone really." Anyone but Patrik and Emmy.


message 9260: by [deleted user] (new)

Ellis nodded. "You can talk to me, you know. Anytime you want, I'm all ears."


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments Teeghan came back into the kitchen. "Avery is fine. She's sleeping"


message 9262: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I know," she found herself smiling. "I'll keep that in mind."

((I'll make Salem go in soon Kenn, so Teeghan has someone online to talk to. lol))


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments ((Good lol..im feelin a little lonely. lol.))


message 9264: by [deleted user] (new)

Ellis nodded and looked into her eyes for a long moment, unaware that he was slowly leaning forwards, towards her. He reached out to touch her cheek, but then his hand fell away and he stood.
"I-- I'm sorry."


message 9265: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Teeghan-(Koodo-Girl) wrote: "((Good lol..im feelin a little lonely. lol.))"

((don't feel lonely!))


message 9266: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "Ellis nodded and looked into her eyes for a long moment, unaware that he was slowly leaning forwards, towards her. He reached out to touch her cheek, but then his hand fell away and he stood.
"I--..."


Salem blinked, Holy goodness, you almost let him do that. "It's okay," she shook her head, standing as well. "Let's go inside and get breakfast with the others."


message 9267: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((oh! introductions! Bell, this is Koodo, my FAB friend from real-life and the inspiration for Teeghan! Kenn, this is Bellie one of my awesome writing buds!))


message 9268: by [deleted user] (new)

Ellis nodded and sighed. "Okay."


message 9269: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Come on," she said quietly, going inside and making the wind hold the door for him.


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments ((yes! your coming back inside lol))


message 9271: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo, yup))


message 9272: by [deleted user] (new)

Poetic Ingenius- [Kenny:] wrote: "((oh! introductions! Bell, this is Koodo, my FAB friend from real-life and the inspiration for Teeghan! Kenn, this is Bellie one of my awesome writing buds!))"

((Hi! That's really cool.))

Ellis followed behind her, biting his lip and shaking his head. "C'mon, Gibbs," he said, and Gibbs ran in front of him.


message 9273: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((oh, Bell. Teeghan wants Limerick so I'm gonna ask Nephi how we can bring him [and Wave and Connie:] to this dimension. Then Ellis and Lim can be their normal selves and ...plot..olo))

When Ellis was inside she let the door close.

"So Teeg, how's Avery?"


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments ((Hey!))


message 9275: by [deleted user] (new)

((Okay... Awesome.))

Ellis looked down at the ground, refusing to meet anyone's gazes. Once inside he went to the living room and sat in his usual chair in the corner with a sigh.


message 9276: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem, after asking Teeghan the question, found Sean and stood by him.


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments Teeghan looked over to see her friend coming into the kitchen. "She's fine. She is just sleeping."


message 9278: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean looked up at Salem and smiled slightly. "Hey... You okay?"


message 9279: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "That's good," she said to Teeghan then turned to acknowledge Sean. "Yes, no, maybe so," she said it in the sing-song childhood way almost every first grader learned.


message 9280: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean chuckled. "Which one?"


message 9281: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Does it matter?" Salem asked, trying to keep it cheerful.


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments Teeghan giggled at Salem. She loved her friend to bits.


message 9283: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((tehe, Teeghan is so cute!))


message 9284: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean nodded and took her hands, a solemn expression on his face. "Everything about you matters to me, Salem."


message 9285: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Fine, ruin the cheer of morning," she said lowly, her fingers tingling at his touch. Is this love? "I care for you too."


message 9286: by [deleted user] (new)

"I'm sorry." Sean lowered his head and let go. "I-- I'm too serious lately."


message 9287: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem moved one hand to his face, forcing him to look up with a gentle push to his chin. "Sean, I was joking about the first part, but not the second." We're all too serious..except Gibbs and Liv and Teeghan. That's all. It's okay Sean.


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments Teeghan made a gagging noise. "Okay before i barf from all this lovey dovey stuff I am going to leave. I will be in the living room with Ellis if anyone wants me."


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments ((Dang straight Teeghan is cute :] lol))


message 9290: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ahahaha, you make me laugh out loud Kenn!))

Salem waved her other hand off-handedly to tell Teeghan 'whatever you say'.


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments Teeghan walked into the living room to see Ellis in his chair. "Hey. What's up?"


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments ((I know. I make me laugh too :]))


message 9293: by [deleted user] (new)

Poetic Ingenius- [Kenny:] wrote: "Salem moved one hand to his face, forcing him to look up with a gentle push to his chin. "Sean, I was joking about the first part, but not the second." We're all too serious..except Gibbs and Liv a..."

Sean sighed and nodded. "Okay..." He bit his lip and closed his eyes.


message 9294: by [deleted user] (new)

Teeghan-(Koodo-Girl) wrote: "Teeghan walked into the living room to see Ellis in his chair. "Hey. What's up?""

Ellis looked up and shrugged. "Nothing..."


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments "You okay?"


message 9296: by [deleted user] (new)

Ellis sighed. "Seriously? No. But you don't want to hear about it."


Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments Teeghan smirked. "Amuse me."


message 9298: by [deleted user] (new)

Ellis shook his head. "No way. It won't be amusing. And it's kind of personal."


message 9299: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "Poetic Ingenius- [Kenny:] wrote: "Salem moved one hand to his face, forcing him to look up with a gentle push to his chin. "Sean, I was joking about the first part, but not the second." We're all t..."

"Hey, heeey," she put her hands on his cheeks.


message 9300: by Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (last edited Apr 10, 2010 04:19PM) (new)

Aphrodite-(Koodo-Girl) (koodo) | 204 comments Teeghan smiled comfortingly at her friend. "Okay. But any time you wanna talk i'm here k?"


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