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((G2g))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Me too ttyt))


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Catie  | 243 comments Rose were staring fear radating out of their eyes.


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Andrew looked up at Gwen, "Now you'll never see your precious little Grant. I told you you'd regret the day you chose him over me." He collapsed to the ground, seemingly dead. Gwen burst in to tears forgeting the wound in her leg


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "What the hell just happened?!" Patrik yelled whriling around. His eyes almost entirely silver. Emmy swore, Rife stood up slowly and Liv leaned on the truck bed. They were all wounded, but rife was the one who spoke "Andrew," He pointed to him "is evil, and most likely holding Grant. Both of which are connected to Gwen."


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Gwen tried to stand up and put to much weight on her wounded leg causing her to cry out in pain and fall back to the ground.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife walked over to her and helped her up.


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"Thanks," She said, tears still rolling down her cheeks as she leaned on him for support.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Anytime," He replied weakly


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She looked down at Andrew and thought that she could have prevented it at the very beginning, but then she never would have realized the she really loved Grant. She looked up at Rife, then back down at Andrew. Finding that he had disappeared, she gasped.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Damn it!" Rife said
"What?" Patrik said then stopped "What happened to him?" it was clearly evident that Patrik was pissed


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"That's not supposed to happen," Gwen said lamely, and a little chocked.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "No, it isn't." Patrik said "He is supposed to be DEAD!"
Emmy's tatto's glowed and she said "Follow him,"
"What?" Liv asked
"Patrik, he just Jumpd. You can follow him,"


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"Jumped," Gwen asked stepping forward the wincing at the pain. She would have fallen again without Rife's support.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah demension jumpd." Rife said. His back hurt where he'd gotten sliced.

((I gtg I start highchool tomorrow!!! I'll ttyt!!))


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((Have fun!))
"How can he do that, he's not a Lyr," She said a little wary of what the reply might be.


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Catie  | 243 comments "Great!" Lilly said sarcasticly "Now people can jump dementions.What-"
Rose had wrapped a vine around Lilly's mouth, "Did you know him?" she asked softly then yelped a Lilly burnt her vine.
Lilly stuck her tounge out as Rose rubbed the palm of her hand.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I have no clue," Liv said
Emmy looked at them all then said "He works with the shadows,"
"Or is one,"


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Catie  | 243 comments "The shadows?" Lilly asked.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yes, they are hunters. More or less." Emmy explained.


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Catie  | 243 comments "If they are hunter. What do they kill?" Rose ased warily afraid of the awnser.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Us," Liv said steely


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Catie  | 243 comments "Didn't we kill one of them?" Lilly asked to Rose
"He tryied to kill us first." Rose mentioned.
"True. It looked like suicide." Lilly said thoughtfully "No one thought two 4 year olds could do it."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv almost laughed, it just hurt to much to do so.


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"But, but," Gwen stuttered still looking at the place where Andrew had been. "He never seemeed like one of you."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "He isn't, he might be half shadow,"


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"How can you be half shadow," she asked.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "One of your parents is a shadow." Patrik shrugged


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"That might explain why I never met his parents," She said grimly


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah," Rife agreed nodding slowly


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"And now I'm thinking it's probably good that I didn't," She said
((sorry I have to go so soon, but I'm meeting Janette Rallison tomorrow!!))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah it is probably best," Rife said sitting down slowly "Hey Emmy? Can you check this?" Rife asked her pointing at his back.
"Yeah" She said walking over to him.
"Liv Patrik can check you okay?"
"Yeah."
((thats wicked cool! Have fun!))


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((It was a ton of fun, she is so awesome, and I learned a ton))
"Would someone also take a look at me leg." She was starting to feel woozy from the loss of blood


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Sweet!))
"Yeah hang on" Rife said kneeling as Emmy walked up behind him.
Emmy looked at his back she tapped his shoulder "Take off your shirt so I can see this better,"
"Okay," He said taking off his shirt "I just need your knife,"
"Ok," Emmy said handing it to him.
Rife looked up at Gwen "I'm terribbly sorry, but your jeans won't make it," he cut the bottom part of the leg off.


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"And these were my favorite's," She said lightly wincing a little.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Oh I think you'll live," Rife rolled his eyes
"But I have no clue as to what to do about this. Hey Patrik!" Rife called over to him
"What?" He replied not looking up from Liv's chest wound.
"When your done can you take a look at this?"
"Yeah hang on,"


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Gwens vision started blurring, "Rife," she said. "I'm going to faint." And she did.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife sood up and caught her as she fell. Patrik came running over.
"Patrik wash the bolld off my shirt,"
Patrik did so and then Rife put his wet shirt over Gwens leg. Trying to stop the rapid flow of blood.


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Even though Gwen was unconsious she could sense what was going on around her. Pursueders have heightened senses.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife was murmuring to her.
Patrik tapped his shoulder "I've got it,"


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Gwen watched the scene that had just occured over and over again in her mind, trying to puzzle it out. She tried to wake up, but was just pushed back into deeper unconsiousness


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik looked at the bullet hole trying to figure out how to take it out.


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The scene in her mind changed. She was in her fathers office and he was talking to someone she couldn't see. He stoped talking and turned toward her. "Ah, my daughter you're finally here. I wondered how long it would take you to learn this skill." Gwen stared at him.
"I'm not you're daughter anymore, you lost the right to call me that a long time ago."


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "It's made of metal right?" Rife asked.
"Yeah it feels like it," Patrik said
"I can get it,"
Rife concentrated on removing the bullet. It slid out and landed in his hand.
"All good. Patrik go to town with the healing,"
"Ok Emmy don't leave yet. You might need to sear it closed."
Thats what happened Patrik healed it and Emmy finished it off. Rife picked Gwen up and walked over to the truck and layed her in the bed.


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"Don't be like this Gwendalynn," He said coming over to her. "Come home and help me. I can teach you things My mother will never teach you." He put his hand on her shoulder.
Gwen shrank away from his touch. "I don't want to learn them." She turned away from him.
"Maybe you just need a little pursueding," He said a glint in his eyes. "Grant!"


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife sat down and Emmy looked over Patrik then Finished Rife. When they were all either healed or bandaged. They sat on the truck in silence.


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Gwen spun back toward her father. "What!" Grant emerged from the shadows. "Gwen, what he's doing is a good thing for us, for everyone." He took both of her hands in his. "Grant, you don't know what you're saying," Tears started running down her cheeks. "But I do, Gwen, I know." She yanked her hands from his. "What have you done to him!" She was facing her father now.


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((UH OH!!! NOT GRANT!!))


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((I know, why do my fingers always write what my mind says and not my heart!!))


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Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Ikr? I get the same problem))


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