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May 21, 2014 03:48PM
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(Mars- Want to RP with sol or luna somewhere else)
(Nephilim, when are you going to p-post?)
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(I don't know, if i can RP with Mars some where else it would be good.)
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(Nephilim's but there was this debate about if they were staying)
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(then it's your turn since what your Character last said makes no more sense. also, isn't Mio already somewhere else? somewhere with chocolate covered roast marshmallows?)
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(time paradox)"I-I don't like Party's." Ashata stumbled as Her Shugo collapsed in exhaustion.
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Mio knelt down and looked at Ashata (can't remember if Ash is kneeling or standing). She tilted her head curiously, "why?"
"it's how I died, my first party." Ashata mumbled, she was holding the closed book in her hands as she sat on the library chair.
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"when I was Human I died when I went to my first party, I was then reborn as an Angel and haven't gone to a party since." Ashata said clearly for once as tears began to go down her face, "and the person who convinced me to go died as well, but he wasn't reborn." Ashata said as she dropped the book and put her hands on her face, "none of them, out of all of us who died I was the only one Reborn. all the others had lives to live, Goals to strive for. I never had any of those yet I was the one to live, what did I do?" Ashata asked as tears ran down her face and past her hands.(this might change it)
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"Well...someone thought you deserved a second chance, if the memories hurt you...I can take them away," said Mio oblivious to Ashata's distress since she was looking out the window, watching the clouds.
"no, these memories might Plague my mind. they will haunt me till my second dying day, but.....I couldn't want them taken no matter how much distress it causes, these memories help me fight when I need to and help me through. these Memories are not only my burden, but they are my strength." Ashata said as she tried to stop crying and wiped her eye's with the sleeves of her cat ear jacket.
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"i guess you right." Ashata agreed as she accepted the tissue and wiped her eye's, "but I still don't like party's."
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"i said I don't care." Ashata repeated as she regained her composure and opened her book again.
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"I prefer the more educational ones." Ashata informed her, Ashata hadn't read a fantasy book or did any leisure activity really. That party was meant to change that, give her more confidence to enjoy life but it backfired and now Ashata doesn't think twice about rejecting an invitation.
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"Is there anything else?" Ashata asked.
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"Then why are you still here?" Ashata asked.
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"Have fun then." Ashata muttered as she flicked to the next page in her book without looking up.
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Ashata got up and borrowed the book so she could read it in a spot where she was less likely to be disturbed.
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Herana had followed Estienne through the school grounds, the books that littered the shelves were just pieces of paper to her. she didn't have a need nor a want to read them at the moment.
(ps, you seem like you've got time-https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...I finished the second chapter)
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Herana straightened her skirt along her legs and sat down opposite as she looked at him, her face remained so emotionless that it was kind of on the creepy side.
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Estienne felt like a cigarette, not really to smoke, but to have something dangling from his mouth to keep it busy. He lifted the lid of the box and lifted the deck out, putting it face down on the table.
(critique in the comments please, read both chapters)Herana looked at the back of the cards as he placed the deck down, she pulled out a box of pocky and placed one of the chocolate coated sticks in her mouth as it dangled out. before putting the box away she held it out for Estienne to take one, there were five still left in the box.
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(harsh criticism is a valuable resource in improving, and I fixed that part)
