Hi, everybody. I just posted my novel, Disintegration, to Inkshares a few days ago. I joined because of the Nerdist competition, although quite late into the game. Still, I'd really appreciate if you would take a look at the chapters and introduction I've posted, and provide some feedback.
Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated, on any and all points from minor editing errors to continuity and character development, and anything you think I could delve deeper into or even discard.
Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated, on any and all points from minor editing errors to continuity and character development, and anything you think I could delve deeper into or even discard.
Here is the link: https://www.inkshares.com/projects/di...
Looking forward to your comments!