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§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments 030 Hi there. How are you doing?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Good :) any ideas?


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments Yes! It's not too complicated, but I think it may be interesting.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ok :) I have nothing


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments I had an idea for a for of toss up of The Adams Family and Dark shadows.
Where a brother and sister (or character(s) of your liking) are hired as house keepers for this mansion out in the middle of the woods. And once they get there, the family is totally insane but welcomes them with open arms. 030


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Yeah that would be cool :)


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments I've got lots in store. I was thinking I'd play the insane family and you could play the people who are hired for house keeping.
I don't care if you want to do double or whatever. :/ I think it's silly telling people what their characters have to be like. But I've got a few people who I think you'll find interesting.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ok good because I don't think I can play crazy. I mean I might act it but not write it.


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments Nah it's cool, I got the crazy family.
They clan will consist of Stella and Valentine, (The head of the house.) Jesse, (He's not related to them, no one knows where he can from.) Gale, (adopted little boy.) Billie (Jesse's little sister.) And Luna, (stella's adopted little sister.)
And they're all weird and crazy in their own way.


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments I've got all of those guys.
And I was thinking, you'd have the people who're hired.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Yep

I got Lillian she's quite shy smart and pretty.
Danny her older protective brother.


Do need more people to be hired?


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments Did you want to do character bios?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments No I'm bad at that. Really bad i mean I come up with things but it takes a while.:)


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments That's fine. You want me to hitch it off then?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Sure and thank you :)


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments It's all cool. Can I use your characters just for this first part?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Sure :)


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments ok one moment


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments Clouds brushed through the sky, rays of sunlight began to dance as morning rolled to mid day.
Lillian clutched the newspaper, holding her brother's hand as they stood on the side of the road. Danny held out his thumb looking, looking to catch a ride. The news paper crumpled between Lilian's hand and the handle of the suite case. The highlighted job opening began to bleed through the page from the sweat of her palm.
A pickup truck pulled off the highway a little further from the two hitchhikers. Danny gripped his sister's hand a bit tighter and ran to the truck. A few boys sat on the bed holding surfboards and in their swim wear. They took the luggage, setting it in the bed, then helped Danny and Lilian up to sit. Once everyone was settled, they took off once more down the highway.
Lillian stuck the newspaper through the window to the cab of the truck, and showed the driver the highlighted job offer and address.

Stopping at a dirt road on the edge of the woods, the boys helped Danny and Lillian off the truck, hanging them their suitcase and bid them good luck.
They walked, hand in hand down the dirt road to a huge house with an amazing fountain in the front surrounded by a luscious garden.
Walking up the steps and to the big front door, Danny took his hand from Lillian's and gave a few might knocks.
(Is this alright?)


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Yeah))

Lillian watch her brother knocked. She was waiting for the people to answer. She was afraid that so something was wrong. She missed the comfort of her brothers hand as he left it to knock in the door. She tapped her foot as her impatience grew. She saw and heard movement in the house. It didn't scare her she wasn't good with people. Her brother thought it would be good if they took this job. She took a deep breathe. She never thought she would take a job this far away from home. Ever thought her brother said that home was where ever he was. She believed that every step of the way. "Maybe they aren't home?" She whispered shyly as she looked at the ground.

"Home they better be." He said angrily. To make things worse it started to rain. He wasn't going to home. There was no home or family left for them. He knew how hard it was for her to move. They had no choice. They needed this job. It had the best pay everywhere they looked. He was nervous for her. She didn't do well in front of new people. It took her forever just to say a word to him. He knocked on the door again. "You got to be telling me these people can't see to strangers on their front porch?" He saw that she looked down. "Hey there Lily. Everything will be ok. "Either though she hated that. She didn't mind it so bad when he called her that. She nodded her slowly in the response.


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments As the sky began to sprinkle droplets of water, the door swung open, blowing Danny and Lillian's cloths back.
Before them stud a more than average, tall women. She wore dress pants and a neatly ironed blouse. The heels of her boots were somewhat high and professional, though this didn't dismiss her real tall height. Strawberry blonde hair trickled off her shoulders, all the way down, just a little above her knees.
"Evening." Her voice broke through the air like a siren's sweet song. "You both look famine. Come on out of the rain."
She stepped out of the way, holding the door open for them both. The air from inside wafted them with the swell of fine herbs and a sort of mildew, being quite an old house.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Lillian looked at her brother. She took his hand afraid of the person. She was afraid of everybody. She only liked her brother. This lady looked like she had power. She waited for her brother to lead the way to the house. She nodded her head at the lady. Then looked back at her brother.

"Thank you." He smiled and held in all the rude comments he had about these people so far. "I'm Danny and this is my sister Lillian." Lillian didn't say a word. She just looked at her brother. He walked in. She followed. He looked around at the house. It was beautiful. He thought this people must be loaded.

She looked around in awe. She was amazed by everything. She looked back down at the floor. Not wanting to get caught for staring.


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments "Yea' are here for the job offer." The women inclined. She shut the door behind them with nice, smooth glides. From the way she spoke, it could be assumed she wasn't from around there. "Not everyone is here at the moment, but I suggest yea' eat."

She stepped around them, leading the two through the foyer, she took them to the kitchen. "My name is Stella," She introduced herself as she walked.
The paint of the walls were chipped here and there with hung paintings giving a more medieval vibe.
"The head of the house, my husband, Valentine, will be returning sometime tomorrow. I'd say till then, yea' make yea'rselves at home." She led them into the huge kitchen.
A wooden table perched in the middle of the room. On the firewood stove, a bit pot simmered with some sort of stew that made their mouth swell with drool at just the smell.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Danny nodded his head slowly. "Yeah." He smiled at the lady. His sister followed her to the kitchen. They sat down on the table. "Thank you." He looked at his sister. He could tell she was nervous. "It's ok Lilly." She nodded her head slowly. She gave him a faint smile. "My sister doesn't like people that much. She stays quite a lot. Don't take offense to that."


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments Stella gave them a polite nod, then turned, walking over to the stove. Opening a cabinet, she took out a couple of bowls and filled them with stew. "You want to tell me a little about yea'rselves then?" She implied.
Walking back over, she set a bowl of chicken stew, one each in front of the two. "Salt's here." she said softly, setting a salt shaker on the table.
She then moved back to the stove, taking the black kettle and filled it with water, also taking out some mugs for tea.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Well we she's my sister and we moved around a lot." He wasn't going to say anything else. His sister was afraid of most things because she got picked on a lot. His sister looked down. "It's ok they are bing very nice." He told her gently. He patted her on the back.

She looked up and nodded. She was afraid of people in general. "She says thank you." He paused."We have signals she does for certain phrases." He told her.


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments She hung the kettle over the burning fireplace. "Yea' won't get much of anywhere without speaking. I can give her a voice if yea' like-" She paused for a moment. Her lips tightened, thinking that may have been rube. "Em, well, maybe later."
She turned, dropping herbs and tea leaves into the various mugs. "There are a few of us here. Some yea'r age. I'll ask yea' to excuse them. We don't get very many guests. But yea'll grow on them in a few days."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Lillian sag in her seat. Her feelings were hurt a lot. She looked at him and frowned."She's sorry you know. She used to get picked on a lot." He paused."You know you have to speak sooner of later Lilly." She shrugged her shoulders. She looked down at the table."That's nice new friends Lilly."


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments "Family." The women corrected, taking the kettle off the fire. She paused again, thinking that may have come rude as well. She poured the hot water into the mugs promptly, then set one on the table for each of them.
She took a seat from across the two. "We will meet each and every one of yea'r needs." She wrapped her fingers around her mug, tapping on it with her nails for a moment.
"Each of us has come from a different family on the contrary of Jupiter and Billie who are blood siblings." She lifted her eyes looking at the two. "I hope yea' realize, that taking this job will take full commitment. On both sides here really. We take care of each other. And we'll take care of yea' as well. But, only if yea' accept." She kept an awful soothing tone, speaking her words carefully.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments He nodded interested in the story. "Ok." He smiled. He looked at Lillian. She still look down. "Lilly at least say hi." She shook her head no. "Come on you know we need this job." He said. "This is job is the one you picked out and now speak." He said calmly.

She still shook her head no. She was holding back the tears."She will warm up with you guys." He said. "I'm sorry if we don't get the job that's ok. I can't make her speak."


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments She gave a soft smile, standing up. "It's alright." She knitted her fingers in front of her, at her hip. "I don't care if yea' take the job or not. I won't allow yea' to go back out into the rain. Give me yea'r things and I'll take them to yea'r room. When yea're done eating, I'll send one of the boys in to show you around." She gave them a soft smile, being awful polite.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Thank you." He handed her his things. Then he handed her his sister things. She looked up at him and frowned. She finish eating her food. He finish eating his food too. "Please say a word." He begged. She shook her head no. "Excuse me we are done." He said nicely.


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments Stella took their things, then turned in the doorway, "I'll send one of the boys in in just a moment. Sit tight." she gave them a small nod, then walked out with their things.

After a minute or two, a boy bounced into the kitchen. He was maybe 13 or 14. His skin was a rich tan and his hair was dark brown like his eyes. He walked over to them with a big grin, "Will you being staying with us?" he asked, attempting to act charmingly.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Yes we will." He said. "This is my sister Lillian. She doesn't speak." He looked at her and back to the boy. "And your name is?" He asked with a kind and warm voice. She watched her brother talk.

She hated talking. She didn't know what everyone wanted her to talk. She didn't like it here so far. She felt like crying. Once she gets to her room she will do just that.


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments "Gale," He smiled, reaching out and shook his hand, "And you are-?" His voice cracked, concluding to a
you-OO
"Oh, and it's a pleasure to have you Lillian." He gave a huge grin, showing the neon blue braises, plastered to his teeth.
Stella had only mentioned people coming in, though he figured it would have been other family of some sort. But now that he saw it was a nice looking boy and a pretty, quiet girl, his expectations were brushed away.
He'd never been given such an exciting gift that is of new visitors!


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "I'm Danny and nice to meet you." He smiled at the young boy. He looked at his sister he knew she wanted to cry. He didn't mean to have the harsh tone earlier. He sighed. "Excuse me sister from her quietness." He asked. He didn't want anyone to be offend by that.


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments Gale blinked, finding the man's comment strange. "Oh, I didn't notice." he murmured softly. The smile quickly returned to his face, showing his dimples, "I can show you around if you like. Or I could take you right to your room." He offered, though wondered if the girl was going to be alright.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments He looked at his sister then to the boy. "Please show us to the rooms." He said trying to be nice to his sister. She didn't looked up, she looked at the ground. He wanted to say something else to him but he didn't want to hurt his sister feelings. Sometimes he got really mad at her. For not saying anything all he wanted was to know if she was ok. He couldn't help her.


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments Gale motioned his head to the door, "Follow me then."
He led them out and into a twisting hall. Taking them around, through mind bobbling paths, threading through the halls, he took them up a few flights to the 3rd floor.
There seemed to be one last floor above them, though it could be assumed there was nothing much up there.
Gale stopped a smaller hall with only fours doors. He walked over to one door opening it a little, "Here's your master bedroom."
He then moved over to another door across the hall, "A more smaller bedroom."
Then the other door, "The bathroom."
Then the other door, "And here's your spare closet."
He smiled at them politely.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Thank you so much." He smiled. He looked at his sister. "Lilly I'll take the smaller bedroom." She nodded her head. She sat on the master bed. Staring holding back the tears. She looked and stared. She didn't move an inch.

Danny saw her era action. He wished he could make her speak to him for more than a few words. He's afraid of flipping out on her. He held in today, he walked into the small bedroom. He hoped she will be ok for awhile by herself.

She wasn't afraid yet. Then fear of the place started to sink in. She sighed and looked at the never changing room.


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments Suddenly,a head popped in the doorway.
Leaning in the door frame and man stud with a smirk and his arms crossed. He had long blonde hair, wearing a tight white shirt with the sleeves rolled up to the elbows and baggy jeans. "You must be the new maid." His voice was heavy and smooth.
He looked over his shoulder at the smaller bedroom door that was closed, then back at her. "Hm, what's your name, sweet?" he smiled slyly.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She felt uncomfortable. She looked up and smile. He was kinda cute. "My name is Lillian." She smiled. It felt good to speak. She was glad she did it in front of a cute boy. No matter what he thought of her as a maid or a servant he was cute. "What's yours?" She asked curious. She would have to make an exception to him.


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments "Jupiter." He replied, "But you can just call me Jesse. What do you think of the place?" He smirked faintly, "Has anyone shown you around yet?"
His sun kissed hair was quite long, going down to his waist. A rosary hung around his neck, though it was hidden faintly under his shirt. Aside from his muscular, tall figure, he had dazzling blue eyes. They literally sparkled like a sea of diamonds that could swoon any girl right into his bed.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Hi nice to meet you Jesse. Um no they actually haven't showed me around." He was so cute. She looked up and fell into his eyes. She knew right then and there he will become her boyfriend. He just didn't know that yet. She laughed in her head at that. She smiled. Her blonde hair and her blue eyes looked up at him with a happiness. Her sun kissed body looked like it would stay that color. She didn't know what else to say or do. She wonder how her brother would thought about her talking to someone else.


§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments Jesse stud up right, letting his hands down, "You've got a brother right? I can show you both around if you like."
He couldn't decide yet if you like her yet. She didn't speak vibrantly or loudly, and she didn't look very comfortable. She seemed awful shy, and with his experience with shy girls, they were often very conflicted and a lot to handle. She was awful pretty though, that alone steering his thoughts to a more luring tone.
Ah man, I bet she's still a virgin though.
He pushed those thoughts away quickly.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She pushed her hair out of her face. "Sure that would be nice." She got up and walked over to her brothers door. He answered it. "This is Jesse he says he will show us around." She turned over to him.
"You spoke to him?" She nodded her head slowly. Figures first sight of a pretty boy she speaks. Should of tried that one years ago. "Thank you this is my lil'sis." He made an emphasis on that. Like any older brother would do.
She looked up at him."So how old are you." She asked."I'm 18 turning 19 and my brother is 25." She smiled at Jesse.


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§†êl͓̽l͓̽åꝈนຖå (fallaciousgod) | 2208 comments "Of age." Jesse answered blandly and fixed his eyes on her brother, "Name?" he asked.
He stud slightly behind Lillian, standing loosely, looking quite comfortable. He put his hands in his pockets after shaking his hand.
He sang in his head.

You need someone
Older and wiser
Telling you what to do
I am 27 going on 28
I'll take care of you

She is 18 going on 19
She is naive
Fellows she meets may tell her she's sweet
And willingly she believes



onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "I'm Danny. Are you going to answer my lil'sis question." He asked snoty. He didn't didn't people being so rude. "Come on Lilly our tour guide isn't being so kind."

"You told me to be nice and polite. Same should go for you." She said.
"I'm going to the room."he walked out of the back into his room.
"sorry about my brother. So how old are you?" She looked up at him curious. "It's ok of you don't want to tell me."


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