Winter's Tale
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Anyone else thing this book was terrible?


Yes, it mixed a mystical world into the storyline. I normally enjoy a good fantasy/sci-fi/mystical story if it is done well. However, the author was so long winded, and switched paces so suddenly, that it made it hard to care. And to be honest, I went and watched the movie because the previews made it look like they actually portrayed the theme better than the book. But beware, there are some strange aspects added to the movie as well, that had nothing to do with the book.
Just my opinion, but I don't think I will pick up another Mark Helprin book up in the future.
Great concept. Poorly executed.

I can see that someone who doesn't like fantasy would not like the book but the reader still appreciate its complesity and novelty.


I agree with the comments previous that state they love the writing- I did, but only to a point. Further agreement with the comment that it was 'too long for the payoff'. Nothing outstanding happened. The bridge didn't get 'thrown'- but the book did!

I haven't seen any of the movie previews - and have no desire to see the movie - but my take on the story line was very different. While there were love interests, I didn't see it as a love story at all; I saw it as having parallels to Biblical stories. The Tower of Babel, good vs. evil, self-sacrifice, a promise of life after death, etc. But, to be honest, by the time I got to the end of the book, I didn't care to evaluate it or my take on it too much.
However, since no book or exchange of ideas is ever a total waste of time, I'm sure that, at some point, an opportunity may arise when I will find a greater value in something I took from this book. Right now, though -- not so much.


Yesterday I turned to reviews on the book for guiding advice on whether or not I should steady on through the novel. In reading the reviews, I discovered there's supposedly a villain in this story. Yes, the character has been reference two or three times in the first section of the book, as a mysterious bridge builder. Oooohhhh. And as of the end of section two (more than half way through the book) that is all that is known about the "villain". There is yet no indication that he is good or bad, just that he builds bridges. Apparently, he's a fallen angel, something something dark side, blahblahblah, this book is so boring, and maybe it's because the antagonist is an evil bridge builder who more than half way through the book HASN'T DONE ANYTHING. I hope his eventual role is to build a bridge that every character in the book jumps off of. Some magical-evil-rainbow-cloud-bridge that attracts white horses, people with consumption, newspaper columnists, and people who fall in love through walls.
This is the worst magical realism book I've ever read. This isn’t even magical realism, it’s a poorly executed mash-up of magical elements held together by nothing more than the front and back covers. Should an actual alter-dimensional-cloud wall exist, I would throw this book into it and Helprin as well. If you are at all curious about the actual story, if there even is one, then just wait for the movie to come out. This is one of the few cases in which I'm sure the movie will be better than the book. If Russel Crowe's face can't fix this mess, then nothing can.

In reading some of the views above, one thing that strikes me is the number of interpretations that I don't recall having. True, it's nearly 27 years since I read it, but perhaps I just belly-flopped into the scenario's Universe and wallowed whole-heartedly. Whatever happened, it worked for me.

I couldn't do it. It was confusing, te..."
I am with you Stacey. I was excited to start reading this...but barely made it half way through before giving up and putting it down. It was too disjointed.





Not that agents are the best critics, or are the most insightful arbiters of literature, but when I attended a conference some years back, I spoke with one whose agency received the manuscript. She said it was passed around the office, and everyone's breath was taken away after reading it. Mine was, too.
One reviewer called it (paraphrased) "Possibly the finest novel ever written without a plot..." I laughed when I read that. Yeah, probably true on both counts.
I bought the book in its first edition for three reasons. A) The title struck me. B) The image of the horse flying over New York City was astonishingly beautiful. C) The opening paragraph knocked me out. "There was a white horse..." It was a great choice.
If you like...no, love...words, and their possibilities, if you love characters...Peter lake and Pearly Soames are classic...then you must read Winter's Tale. The only time I said, "Whaa...?" was the narrative short history of the Woola Woola Boys. Nearly mindless in a novel that stretches the imagination. The gathering of the Short Tails in the city's Harlem River siphon and the demise of Mootfowl are priceless, as is Peter's first sojourn to the Penn Mansion.
The movie? I cringe.


On its own, it is a lovely movie and beautiful in its own rights.. I cried :'(


I thought I was going to die laughing when Hardesty got on that freight train..and then Jesse showed up.

ok, so that sounds bad but it was comical!


That is a relief since the movie actually looked really good.

Not that agents are the best critics, or are the most insightful arbiters of literature, but when I attended a conference some years back, I spoke with o..."
The opening paragraph as well as the horse were my favorite parts of the whole book, well the part I could actually get through that is...

Wow congrats if you don't mind could you message me on here and tell me how it ends?

I had only a third left and failed to finish it just gets worst and worst as it goes on as well as more confusing. I would not suggest finishing it just hit people up online for the spoilers and ending. No need for everyone to suffer lol

Me too I don't think you could pay me to read this book ever again lol

Stacey wrote: "I got 222 pages into this book. I had watched a trailer for the movie and thought WOW! so I picked up the books so I could read it before seeing the movie.
I couldn't do it. It was confusing, te..."
Stacey wrote: "I got 222 pages into this book. I had watched a trailer for the movie and thought WOW! so I picked up the books so I could read it before seeing the movie.
I couldn't do it. It was confusing, te..."

Marissa wrote: "Ashley wrote: "I stopped around the same point and every time I imagined going to back to it I shuddered. I finally had to give in and just admit defeat."
Me too I don't think you could pay me to ..."

Marissa wrote: "Rachael wrote: "I finished! Yaaaaaay!! I kept going and I'm glad I did. I have to admit there was a lot more in there than necessary, very dreamy and poetic, but I liked the characters (as strange ..."

I love mystery, ambiguity, and multiple planes of reality in books I read...but I just couldn't finish this. It was too much. I agree about his "beautiful prose" but it didn't keep me from continuing on with this story. The beginning of the book kept my interest....the horse, the girl, ....but close to halfway through...it just seemed to meander off to places that only confused me. Maybe I will try again some day...

I wish I saw this and read this before even contemplating picking up this horrendous book. Your review is spot on.






Not that agents are the best critics, or are the most insightful arbiters of literature, but when I attended a conference some years back, I spoke with o..."
Patrick, well said. Lovers of words and language will love this novel. BTW, the first few pages made me buy the book as well. Two other parts of the book were so powerful I must have re-read them a dozen times. His description of madmen and saints: "to be mad is to feel with excruciating intensity..." and the heartbreaking passage of the beaten dray horse: through the middle of the crowd came a mutilated and disfigured draft horse pulling a wagon loaded with refuse... This is a brilliantly realized novel.



You might not like Pete Hamill's Forever either, but it's pretty swell and magical too. And now a TV series.

Right on Patrick. Totally agree with you. And regarding the comments on this post about Helprin taking pages to write something that could be done in a paragraph - that is part of what literature is about. It's not a race to finish as quickly as possible, it's about savoring an authors style, use of language and appreciating the pictures he/she paints with words. Some books are economical with language others more detailed, both can be great art.



The entire novel was impossible. The idea of a horse that could fly. An orphaned Irish burglar trying to keep out of the clutches of a sometimes-nasty, most-times lovable gang leader. A genius bridge builder who appears in the city in order to start his latest masterpiece, a catenary to Heaven...magnificently impossible.
When I saw the movie, I cringed. Not because it was so badly done, but because it was SO far off the mark of Helprin's beautiful book. Russell Crowe cowtowing to Will Smith...the DEVIL? Spare me! And little Willa, alive and at the helm of The Ghost...even in a high fantasy, Willa would BE a ghost.

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I couldn't do it. It was confusing, tended to wander and made almost no sense. A large part of it could be that I expected some sort of love story but got a science fiction-love story combination. I have no idea. My mum also decided to read the book and had to put it down as well. She got further than I did. Some of the reviews I read were amazing so I thought it must be some book. Yeah, not so much. It isn't what I would usually read but sometimes I wander when it comes to books.
Anyone else feel the way I did?