I am a long time Goodreads member but new to this group. I checked with Sheri & she said it was okay to ask for feedback on my latest horror short, "Elijah's Phone." This is first in a series. So I really, REALLY need unbiased feedback to determine if I should continue with it.
I will gladly provide a free copy to the first 35 people that graciously agree to help me. I have .mobi, .epub, PDF, and other formats.
My only stipulation is that I ask that a brief unbiased review be left on Amazon.com. Please just PM me here on Goodreads or email me at hargis.kelson@gmail.com. The story is designed to be just long enough to introduce my style & it has already garnered one great review! The Amazon plug is below. Thanks!
Thirteen-year-old Elijah finds a smart phone in the yard of his South Central L.A. home. Ruthless gang bangers, crooked cops, and Mafioso tune into the tracking signal heralding dire consequences for his family. The seemingly magical properties of the device offer Elijah more temptations than clues about its real value—that is until he discovers far more about true evil than he ever wanted to know. (Warning: some mild adult content.)
I am a long time Goodreads member but new to this group. I checked with Sheri & she said it was okay to ask for feedback on my latest horror short, "Elijah's Phone." This is first in a series. So I really, REALLY need unbiased feedback to determine if I should continue with it.
I will gladly provide a free copy to the first 35 people that graciously agree to help me. I have .mobi, .epub, PDF, and other formats.
My only stipulation is that I ask that a brief unbiased review be left on Amazon.com. Please just PM me here on Goodreads or email me at hargis.kelson@gmail.com. The story is designed to be just long enough to introduce my style & it has already garnered one great review! The Amazon plug is below. Thanks!
Thirteen-year-old Elijah finds a smart phone in the yard of his South Central L.A. home. Ruthless gang bangers, crooked cops, and Mafioso tune into the tracking signal heralding dire consequences for his family. The seemingly magical properties of the device offer Elijah more temptations than clues about its real value—that is until he discovers far more about true evil than he ever wanted to know. (Warning: some mild adult content.)