Need honest review for fast-paced, action-packed Fantasy Adventure novel

[W.O.]

Heir Of The Blood King

When I originally released my book in April, I didn't believe in the work I released. I neglected to have a good book cover and didn't have it professionally edited.

I've spent the last 3 months correcting my mistakes and my editor has helped me to fine tune my story and I'm very confident it will be an enjoyable read.

I'm looking for honest reviewers to delve into my world where people are controlled by their destinies and moved like pawns of the gods. It is kid friendly and delves into the concept of Fate vs Free Will.

I have set up a free promo for the week so anyone who is interested can simply download it and read. Be honest, be brutal. It's the only way I can hone my craft.

http://amzn.to/1dlX6Qw

Thank you,
Will