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Secrets and Spies (MSTV #15)
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Sophie, The Joker
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Feb 08, 2014 02:05AM

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I was disappointed with the Lilian story line and I thought the Brendan/Maya story line was rushed.
Also, did anyone else find it weird how SO many of the characters were going into weird trances: Ivy, Brendan, Lilian, Maya AND Charles *Chaz* ;) Is it some kind of vampire emotion thing?




Because I don't want to ruin it! Surely you want to read it without knowing what happens!?!

*SPOILER ALERT* *SPOILER ALERT*
spoiler ;)
Maya turned out to be his cousin :0 huh
Yes I know. WHY DID HE KEEP STARING AT HER??
*deep, calming breaths*
Her mum had been banned from Franklin Grove for eating an artichoke........................ <--- ? This bit is SO weird!
That's all I'm willing to tell you ;) Hope that helps; tell us what you thought when you read it...
Ok, this probably made you even more confused!!! :)



Firstly, I am extremely glad that Brendan turned out not to be cheating on Ivy, and that he was so horrified by the idea, but it kind of felt like his reaction was a cover-up for the fact that although he may not have cheated, he did lie and go behind Ivy's back. For instance, the bit where Maya told Ivy that Brendan talks about her all the time, and when Brendan said Ivy would never lose him ("I'm yours, Ivy Vega") seemed almost like overdoses of relationship cuteness just so that we would forget all the complications that led to this moment which, in the light of Maya really being just Brendan's cousin, don't make much sense. I mean, when you think about what the real truth was, there really wasn't much reason for Brendan to lie to Ivy, let alone act all distant towards her. I really think this storyline should have been thought through a little more on Sienna Mercer's part.
Something I did like about the revelation chapter (Chapter 5) was the way that Ivy's vamp senses (and honestly, just her senses in general) went all funny in the light of her emotional stress over the possibility of losing Brendan. Also, even though I had some issues with the plot, I thought the writing in that scene was (for the most part, anyway) pretty good. I liked what Brendan said about their school being allergic to secrets - it just felt like classic MSTV dialogue, and I appreciated that.
I just got past the part where Olivia video chats Jackson on her phone and one of his fans comes and sees him so he has like a recorded message and speak backwards. That scene is totally golden! Perhaps one of my favourite Jackson scenes in the whole series. I do think the way Olivia and Jackson's relationship was done after they got back together in Double Disaster (MSTV #13) is really good. I seem to criticize these later books a lot and they do have their problems but you know, maybe they're not so bad. ;)

I think the main problem with this book (apart from the strange plot lines) was that the characters acted out of character. Ivy was obviously distressed about the situation with Brendan, so I can understand her acting strange but Brendan? I can't see him being that mushy.

