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Can't wait to read your story, Maya. :-)
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Of course, it's a make believe story. There will be a make believe, city and state. Country, maybe.
Hero: Name: Michael. He's a nerd and a CIA agent.
Heroine: Angel. She's a masseuses.
They are childhood best friends. They live in the same Condo complex.
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Yes, a nerdy hero. I can't wait to write The Agent. I will have some fun writing it. I always have fun writing my stories.
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I hope that I can pull it off. I haven't came across any AMBW books yet.
Oh, I have forgot to share a picture of the way my hero will look in my previous reply. I've posted a link above and will put one here.
http://121.img.pp.sohu.com/images/blo...
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I had one liking me,when I was younger. He thought me how to play Ghost and Goblins.
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Ghost and Goblins is a Nintendo game. The old Nintendo. It's a game, where you have to kill ghost and goblins in a graveyard. If the game pass the graveyard I don't know. I haven't gotten far on the game.
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I played Aliens at the Main Event place Saturday. It was scary but fun. They get right up in your face. I had to go into surgery calm mode so I could shoot them.
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If I can ever get a old Nintendo again and the game, I will make sure to hold on to them.
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Yes, you heard all of that Rae and I can't wait to write it. Scenes are running through my head.
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Well Danielle, I know you love Asian men. They are on my like list too. I hope Michael is pleasing to your eyes. I hope he's believable.
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I will write a prologue this week or a first chapter.
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I so agree. :-D
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Reminder: Michael is Japanese and Angel is black. There is no description in the prologue. But, I did share a picture to show how Michael looks.
I hope the prologue makes sense:
The Agent – Prologue
Don’t do that!
“Do what?” Michael questions, side-glancing Angel.
“Rub your neck in the presence of a masseuses.”
Angel reaches for the remote control and turns the TV off. She gets off the sofa and goes to Michael’s stereo system, to find soft music. “Perfect.” She says, when she finds a station playing soft music. “Get on the floor mister and bring a pillow with you.”
Michael obeys.
When Angel brings her hands to the back of his neck, Michael closes his eyes. This is his first time ever experiencing a massage from Angel. She is good.
“Let me know if I am going too hard.”
“That would never happen.” Michael whispers. He has gotten a massage before and her strength is just right. Better than the woman who’d given him a massage two years ago. It wasn’t long before the soft music and Angel’s sweetly touches have put him to sleep.
“I’m done.” Angel whispers in Michael’s ear, waking him up.
“Already? That felt good and it went by fast.”
“Yeah, twenty minutes flew by.” Angel teases.
“Twenty minutes?” Michael repeats. He looks at the time on his wall clock. Sure enough, it has been twenty minutes, since Angel started massaging him. He turns to face Angel. There is something in her eyes - a bright, awareness display. Did he see this display before? He wouldn’t have ignored the display, right? “Thank you.” Michael manages to say hoarsely.
Angel’s responds is a soft kiss on the lips. Before Michael could respond, he finds his head against his pillow and his arms pinned down to the floor.
The soft kiss that Angel placed on his lips has intensified. He matches her kisses. There is no way that he was going to retreat from this moment. Angel is kissing him. Him! Her best friend!
If Michael knew that his evening would have turned out like this, he would have enjoyed working hard today. He would have been more than happy to let stress ride his neck and shoulders today. A Price Is Right winner’s prize isn’t worth more than the prize he is receiving from a stressful day.
In the midst of the intensified kisses, Angel entangles their hands. Michael manages to get his right hand free. He brings it behind Angel’s head. He wants their kiss to deepen.
Angel freezes. She ends the kiss and untangles their left hand.
Michael sees the surprisal look on her face.
Angel gets up fast. “I have to go!”
Michael reaches for her arm. “Angel, wait!”
“Don’t touch me!” She bolts for the door.
Michael goes after her. “Angel!”
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Sorry dreamwild1985! The story will be here before you know it.
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What do you think happens next?
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What? I've shared a prologue.
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Well, you will see when I get to that part of the story. Be patient!
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What? I've shared a prologue.
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Yeah but you left us all hanging Lol
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I have to admit, I like leaving cliffhangers and teasers.
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Thanks Danielle.
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It was in my head, so I had to get it out.
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That's a good feeling.
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When it's raining that's a good time to write, if you aren't sleeping. Rain relaxes me.Thoughts can flow freely, when it rain.
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I can be home.
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LOL, hey Eugenia. I've missed you. I didn't see you online yesterday.
Don't worry, you will get more of The Agent, but just the prologue right now.
How long do these writing challenges last?
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Danielle The Book Huntress , Sees Love in All Colors
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You do put warning Eugenia.