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Authors Seeking FREE Betas > Beta needed for short story

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message 1: by TNae (new)

Feb 03, 2014 10:55AM

Brief:
George's wife asked him, after feeding him the best pie he's ever had, to kidnap a young woman--and kill her.

The story is about 5,000 words and I'd like feedback on pacing, plot and character. Let me know if you'd like a word doc or PDF.

*Warning*
There is talk of killing animals in the story. It's not much, and not graphic.

Thank you in advance.

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