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LilYrikha Rabuya | 5 comments Hey umm...ok..Writing and reading were never my thing when I was a child. But when a relative of mine introduced me to novels, I got hooked up. Through the following years of admiring those works with powerful words, i discovered the passion of writing. But my writing apparently hmmmmm lets just say I just use it for expressing and stuffs. :) Till one day someone have read a poem of mine, and there started the career and everything. Ahahaha, though I don't know what they found in my scribbles and writings. Ahahaha. Well feel free to suggest and express


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LilYrikha Rabuya | 5 comments Here's a poem I made last July 17,2012 :)

UNSEEN

You are the reason why I exist in this world
The day I first stumbled and crawled
The part of my existence filled with agonizing rain
And You were there erasing all my pain1

With You the waves of my life are nothing
For I am in Your boat that never fails in sailing
I am always lost in the middle of a mist
But still You look and find me in my deepest midst.

When tears pour in my blinking eyes
And You hug me tight, and felt joy in cries
I may be blinded in half
Behind the blazing light, my eyes can't see you enough.

I may not see You, but I know You are there
I may not be able to hold You, but I know You are just in an unseen lair.


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