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The Waves - February Group Read

The soliloquies that span the characters' lives are broken up by nine brief third-person interludes detailing a coastal scene at varying stages in a day from sunrise to sunset.
The novel follows its six narrators from childhood through adulthood. Woolf's novel is concerned with the individual consciousness and the ways in which multiple consciousnesses can weave together. Woolf herself wrote in her diary that the six were not meant to be separate "characters" at all, but rather facets of consciousness illuminating a sense of continuity.
The 21st-century author and critic Becky Nordensten has described The Waves as a "beautiful novel with language and imagery unmatched in 20th-century English literature".

Sounds great, thanks!

Karen

I'm so glad that you're reading this with me.

I'm so glad that you're reading this wi..."
Thanks! This will be my first group read- and with women! I wish I had that right now for my reading of Absolom, Absolom! A formidable book, I didn't have trouble with As I Lay Dying or Sound and the Fury!

I don't know if it matters but I'll be reading this version: The Waves. I do like the colours on the cover. :D
When I read the first section (a couple of years ago), I was floored at the wonderfulness of what was happening and how it was written. I'm not a fan of stream of consciousness but it's growing on me.


If The Waves is half as good as The Sound & The Fury, it'll be great.
I just finished Cain last night. It's stream of consciousness but easy to follow. I thought it was good. Not fantastic but interesting, humorous and a good story.

This is the one section that I've read before and I had forgotten how much was in it. Because of all the details, I thought we might like to discuss Section 1 in a bit more detail to help us get some bearing for the rest of the book.
First, I love the descriptions of the sea & sky and how it ties into the life-stage that the children are in.
The sea & sky are described as one (before the sun rises). One cannot distinguish between the sea and the sky. They are one, for the time being. Slowly, the sun rises and slowly the individual features appear and we see not only the sea & sky but also the trees, the leaves, the birds, the worms. We see the detail and the individuality found in the world. The items separate and become individuals, with lives of their own.
The children, too, are one, in a sense. They aren't fully individuals yet. They are in the garden together, in the classroom together, they go for walks together. Yet, they have thoughts, ideas, fears and these are slowly being shown to us.
There's talk of them separating even more when they go to another school. They are on the first part of separating, becoming individuals and having a life of their own. But, in Section 1, they are still a group of one, more or less.
Second, the kids & their personalities.
What do you all think of the kids? What characteristics do they show? Can you see the potential adult in them, through their personalities?
We're getting only a glimpse of who they may become. They're still young but their basic personalities are there, I think:
Louis is very insecure because of his background and his accent, both of which set him apart. There was that passage where he mentions that his father is a banker in Australia (working class), while Neville & Bernard are "sons of gentlemen". There's a class distinction here, which may have been an issue in Woolf's time.
He's afraid of the others but sees Rhoda as an equal ("I do not fear her as I fear the others").
His first words were "I hear something stamping. A great beast's foot is chained. It stamps, and stamps, and stamps". A chained animal fights against his reality. Louis, too, seems to be fighting his reality (a working class background).
But a chained animal doesn't try to fit in and I get the feeling that Louis would really like to fit in ("I know my cases and my genders...But I do not wish to come to the top and say my lesson").
Bernard - he seems to be a comforter. He ran after Susan into the Beech woods because he noticed she was hurting. He seems very imaginative (lots of words & stories).
Neville - he seems rather proper, precise and punctual. Somewhat sickly, too. A kind of unimaginative, prim kind of kid.
Jinny - she seems rather light and free. At the same time, things are blind to her.
She sees blinds in front of the windows (things are hidden); she burns in the sun, freezes in the shade. She seems almost uncomfortable with her surroundings and maybe with herself(?).
She would like "a fiery dress, a yellow dress, a fulvous dress to wear in the evening", which makes me think of a Princess-girl who likes to play dress up.
Susan - in love with Louis. She seems very emotional. She balls her anger up into her handkerchief, trying to encapsulate it; she throws herself onto the ground in her anger.
Rhoda - She seems to be a loner but maybe not by choice. She sees herself as buffeted but not sinking (the scene of the petals in the bowl), yet she needs an anchor to keep her from sinking ("I will assure myself, touching the rail, of something hard. Now I cannot sink..."). If she needs an anchor, is she truly a Loner?
Lastly, I find that there's a lot of colour being mentioned throughout this section. Any thoughts on how the colours are a part of the story? Or are they just part of the "dawn" idea of this section, with the many colours of dawn being illuminated?

"My eyes are hard. Jinny's eyes break into a thousand lights. Rhoda's are like those pale flowers to which moths come in the evening." (page 9)
Susan = hard eyes = practical, salt of the earth?
Jinny = sparkling eyes = fun loving, party girl?
Rhoda = welcoming eyes = people/men are attracted to her?

This passage may relate to that:
"But when we sit together, close, we melt into each other with phrases. We are edged with mist. We make an unsubstantial territory." (page 9)
Could this be interpreted as saying something like, alone we are words, in small groups/twosomes we are phrases and as a group/humanity we are complete sentences?
Meaning, in a way, that as a group we represent the entire but as individuals we can only represent something incomplete?


The adult voice is striking at first but then I just went with the flow. It must be hard to write in a child's voice/tone.
The quote in Post 2 states that Woolf was concerned with individual consciousness. Maybe (I'm guessing) she "adulted" the voices of the children to articulate what she wanted them to say. It may have been too hard to be so poetic and precise while using children's words and voices.
I agree that the book is beautifully poetic. I like that flow and ebb feel about it....just like waves. Woolf has gotten that element into every aspect of this first section.





I think Susan feels the most hmm... separate? individual? I dunno. I can keep track of her. The others blur together too much. But she's so angry! Why is she so mad all the time?

I have finished the first weeks reading, and unfortunately for me, I ended up feeling like I was sitting in peanuts cartoon, and the whole book was the adult lecturing me with that Peanuts cartoon adult voice "whah whah whah whah whah whah". It all blurred together! I cannot say I can really sit here and differentiate who any of the characters were, what they said, or what they did.

Susan likes Louis and she is mad because she was Jinny kissing Louis.


Completely agree. I read the second image of the sea & sky last night and it was as spectacular as the first.

I'm going to keep this in mind as I read on.
I find Susan to be an emotional child but not one that doesn't feel as if she belongs. She feels deeply (anger and love) and that leads to outbursts.
I thought Rhoda was more of a loner/outsider than Susan was.
But the book is still young and we've got a lot to learn about these children.

I'm looking forward to the changes as they grow. They are such different personalities that this has to play a part as they become individual adults. It'll be interesting to see how Virginia Woolf distinguishes them as they grow.

The first section deals with early morning, or childhood, when the six main characters are attending a day-school together. As each of the children awakens, he or she begins an internal monologue composed of thoughts, feelings, and impressions. The children interact in various ways throughout the day, and each begins to take shape as an individual in response to the stimulus provided by the world and by the presence of one another.
Although their thoughts are somewhat incoherent and mostly fixated on immediate experience, their distinct personalities begin to emerge: Bernard’s loquacity and obsession with language; Neville’s desire for order and beauty; Louis’s insecurity and ambition; Jinny’s physicality; Susan’s intensity and attachment to nature; and Rhoda’s dreamlike abstraction from ordinary life.

Same here, I'll see how it goes now that the children have left school
Karen


The first section deals with early morning, or childhood, when the six main characters are attending a day-school together. As each of the children awakens, he or she begins an in..."
This sums up the first part.


This quote is from Louis. He is referring to another boy, but the last line threw me off.


Karen, don't feel bad for not liking it. Believe me, I hate a lot of the books we read here in the group! LOL It is perfectly okay to say you don't like a style of writing or a book. That is what makes these discussions so great, seeing the wide variety of opinions that people have about a specific book. There will always be some who love something, and others who detest it. :-)

It's not the stream of conciousness that bothers me- I love Faulkner. I find this book uninteresting and depressing- I need some humor, this is sterile, there is no emotional depth. For me, thank you both of you for your support.





I understand that stream of consciousness is awful for many. It was for me for many years. I think it was Ulysses that started to turn that around. That book took me so much work to get through. I was pretty proud of myself when I finished it. Then the book started to grow on me and now I want to do a reread.
I still didn't like Mrs. Dalloway, so not all stream of consciousness appeals to me.
The Waves, though, totally resonates. I'm really enjoying it. I haven't been reading because I'm trying to stick to the schedule to help discussion as we go along. But, since you're all moving ahead, I'm going to get back to reading it and lets discuss it.
Irene is right. Let's see what it is about this book that we can learn.
First, I think it's important to get to know the kids. Let's talk about them. They've just separated into 2 groups and gone to school (that's where I am in the book). I'm sure there is more separation as they get older.
Could we discuss the kids while they are young? Do you mind sticking to this for a few days while I read and catch up with you all?
Who's your favorite kid? Who's your least favorite? Why?
What is your impression of any or all of the kids?
What are they doing in a school by the seaside? Where are their parents? Why are they housed in a school? How old are they?
Feel free to add any impression or thought about the kids....either one or the entire group or a subgroup.
Also, I asked about colours above. There's so much mention of colour. Any thoughts on the use of colour in this novel?
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Here is the schedule we decided on. It's a loose schedule but please use it as a guide when posting spoilers beyond the week's reading. Thank you.
This read starts on February 1st.
Week 1 (Feb 1-7) - read Sections 1 & 2 (pages 3-51), start discussion mid or end of the week
Week 2 (Feb 8-14) - read Sections 3 & 4 (pages 52-106), start discussion mid or end of the week
Week 3 (Feb 15-21) - read Sections 5-7 (pages 107-151), start discussion mid or end of the week
Week 4 (Feb 22-28) - finish the book (pages 152-220), start discussions mid or end of the week.
If this schedule proves to be too slow or too fast, we can adjust it. We'll play it by ear.
Stream of consciousness can take some time to read (sometimes). We'll see how it goes.