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message 1: by Yanberry (new)

Yanberry | 6 comments Hey guys! Im here to help you guys with feedbacks on your stories! All stories are welcome!
Just paste your link and story name under my wattpad and I'll help you out!

http://wattpad.com/story/11284490?utm...

Check out my first story as well! It's titled "it happened in Vegas"

My username is Yanberry incase you have a problem with the link. good luck!!


message 2: by almas (new)

almas (almashashmi) http://www.wattpad.com/story/10888684...
A Simple Story of Love :D


message 3: by Emily (last edited Oct 18, 2014 11:20AM) (new)

Emily Beaver (emily_infinite) http://www.wattpad.com/story/19923593...
The Shadow Slayers

Ceyln Reese had been struggling to cope with her anxiety. Until it reached a point where her father could not stand the pain it was putting him through. Moving out, with her mother, to a new town, attending a new school, and meeting new friends somehow clicked. Poof. Celyn's anxiety had reached an all time low and her mother could not have been happier. Meeting new friends was a piece of cake. Outcasts, like herself, conquered each day with the help from each other. It’s Celyn’s first and last summer with her friends. The days of summer are narrowing down, and the items on the ‘to do’ list keep multiplying. Life was going great for Celyn, until the ‘visions’ returned.
Her life soon takes an unexpected turn when Celyn's reckless friends venture into a mysterious manor. After witnessing a mysterious group of teenagers strike down her friends. The teens claim they are Shadow Slayers, a group of hunters that track down and capture nuisance shadows. Celyn promised herself that she would not get involved. But after discovering her mother is not who she appears to be, Celyn has no other choice but to join the Shadow Slayer team.
At the Archipelago, founded by the famous genius Dr. Rick Clarke, Celyn uncovers secrets that could shatter worlds into thousands of pieces. The mere priceless condominium serves as a safe harbor for those who have been plagued by shadows since the beginning of their existence. Celyn is like them. Her ‘visions’ grow stronger at night. The shadows have found her again and will continue to terrorize her until they receive their rightful prize.

I could really use some feedback, thank you!


message 4: by Nina-s-henette (new)

Nina-s-henette | 1 comments http://www.wattpad.com/27882213-pirat...

Prologue:

A troubled mind was looking for safety, yet she finds him instead. Maybe if she had joined the masquerade earlier that day, she would have never met him— but then, the fairytale would have never come to life.


message 5: by Joshua Israel (new)

Joshua Israel | 1 comments Wattpad Work Link:
http://www.wattpad.com/story/11104793...

Guys!I would many feedbacks, suggestion and opinions about Eywa! because this is just a test story, the real one will be posted when i reached chapter 10! so i need those feedbacks, suggestion and opinions to make the real version better, enigmatic and beautiful!

Just pm me in FB to submit your feedbacks, suggestion and opinions :
https://www.facebook.com/JoshuaKitsune


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Mah story: http://www.wattpad.com/35597030-cry-f...
Comment, vote and all that other good stuff? I'll do the same!


message 8: by Jennifer DC (new)

Jennifer DC | 7 comments Tittle: Lawbreaking Mobster
Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/11916854...


message 9: by Basma (new)

Basma | 4 comments http://www.wattpad.com/32670141-the-l...
thats my story
it isnt finished yet. i have only posted the first five chapters and it would be awesome if you guys could read it :)


message 10: by Deborah (new)

Deborah Hey I'm actually a new writer I usually prefer reading but check it out.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/12120632...

Thanks.


message 11: by SoupIsMyName (last edited Feb 05, 2014 09:51AM) (new)

SoupIsMyName | 3 comments http://www.wattpad.com/27142611-jace-...

I lived a normal, typical life. You know, experiencing a breakup, practicing for the swim team, practically eating my weight in Sour Patch Kids and foot long sandwiches.


Until, of course, I died. Well, kinda.

http://www.wattpad.com/27142611-jace-...

http://www.wattpad.com/user/SoupIsMyName


message 12: by Ladybooksalott (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) | 4 comments

Hello guys! It would be so awesome if you would read my stories on Wattpad!

http://www.wattpad.com/user/ElkeCremers

MY STORIES:

UNRAVELING (Werewolf/YA/Romance):

"He stared at me with those hungry, dark eyes of him, and I felt like I was tearing apart under his gaze. Gulping, I shakily pushed a lock of my brown hair back behind my ear and watched him carefully. Why was I feeling this way? Why was I feeling like he was the only thing that mattered?"

Rosemary Evans had a normal life up until now, being the average girl next door. But that all changes after a drastic move to small, ghost town called Alamery. No one’s ever heard of it, adding to the cliché Rose knows it will be. It’s small and rural, the town people all know each other, secrets and lies are hidden in the cracks. .

Everything changes with a simple day of school, when she meets him. Her new literature teacher, Mr Samson, she is drawn to him, needs him, but she doesn’t understand why.

More and more strange occurrences begin to happen in the town, making Rose even more confused. What are the sounds coming from the forest, and why is it dangerous to go into the woods at night.?

Fearful and determined Rose begins to uncover the truth

Everything is unraveling, but what will it show?

http://www.wattpad.com/story/7139329-...

SPEECHLESS (YA/Fantasy/Romance):

"Savannah, look at me," he breathed, looking at me with those beautiful eyes of his. But I wouldn't face him, I was too busy with eyeing my surroundings, trying to look for a threat. I bit my lip as he turned me around and looked sincerly into my eyes. A shiver ran through me and I stilled slightly, feeling dizzy. "Savannah, I promise you, I will protect you. I will keep you safe."

Savannah has been speechless for her whole life; having no voice isn't easy. When Savannah decides to take a chance and goes on a vacation on her own, her trip takes a different turn. She turns up in the Hills, a paradise, where no human has set foot in years. No one expected a voiceless girl to turn up. Carson, a guardian, promises to keep her safe and hidden from the villagers who threaten to kill every trespasser. When she gets deeper and deeper involved into this hidden world, everything will change... and she has to make a big decision. Will she go home, to her sad and lonely life? Or will she stay, in a world she isn't supposed to?


http://www.wattpad.com/story/8131830-...

FORBIDDEN TIDES (Mermaid/Romance/YA) :

Kat has always felt like an outsider, like she doesn't belong in the mermaid world. Everyone expects her to live up to who she really is, a healer, a mermaid, but Kat has other ideas. Kat loves to go exploring... but one day... her trip takes a different turn when she gets captured by pirates... A journey of love and conflict begins...

http://www.wattpad.com/story/6127133-...

I hope you'll enjoy my stories on Wattpad! Thanks!



message 14: by Nikki (new)

Nikki Cool | 3 comments http://www.wattpad.com/story/13181316... first attempt at writing a story


message 15: by Gráinne (new)

Gráinne Hamill (grainnehamill) | 2 comments So I just started a wattpad all for like my writing, not fanfics and stuff but just stories ya know? So if anyone wnats to maybe read some, follow me, ask me to read some of your stuff that would be cool! (': http://www.wattpad.com/user/Grainneha...


message 16: by Yasmani (new)

Yasmani | 1 comments Hey, guys I was wondering if you could read and check out my story. I'm having a little bit of a hard time getting it out there and I would be so grateful if you could, I really need the help.

Born to Die
http://www.wattpad.com/story/10588138...
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A group of 16 year old's friends who live in Miami are all sick of there boring lives. Living in Miami is not as fun as everyone makes it out to be. It's actually pretty boring especially when you are a teen that can go no where. But when one of the teens gets a drivers license and they all start to explore Miami for what it is. They start lying about there age and having to much fun. Soon enough they are so wrapped up in there own little game that the damage they have done is irreparable. Lies, sex and even death will turn these teens lives upside down.


message 17: by krisusnoona (new)

krisusnoona | 1 comments i write poems , it means a lot to me , if you'll visit and read some of my works =)) thanks

http://www.wattpad.com/user/krisusnoona


message 18: by Paul (new)

Paul Monk (pcrmonk) | 7 comments Hi everyone, I have just published part 3 of my short story on Wattpad. Hope you enjoy, and please vote and follow :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/13542441...




Thanks for reading,
Paul C.R. Monk


message 19: by Saki (new)

Saki | 1 comments http://www.wattpad.com/story/9886994-...

Hi everyone could you review/comment on my story? So far I'm getting good responses and I would like to see what you think :)


message 20: by Dee (new)

Dee | 2 comments Please help me read and vote my stories ♡♡♡ :)

"Why am i me ?" http://www.wattpad.com/story/14901157...

"UnWinged" http://www.wattpad.com/story/14356357...

"Why do I still love you?" http://www.wattpad.com/story/14325475...

♡♡♡♡♡


message 21: by Regan (new)

Regan Fairley (reganf) | 2 comments http://www.wattpad.com/story/11717436...

Please read, comment and/or vote :)

My story is called unconditional. Thanks for reading. Love y'all! <3


message 22: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Wood | 3 comments http://www.wattpad.com/story/15345390...

Ardiana, a typical naughty brat, whom is brought up in a carehome with her bestfriend Landon, who's a total prince charming. When Ardiana is told Landon was killed in a tragic car accident, she spends the rest of her growing up days feeling that Landon is still around.

Ten years later, Ardiana is twenty-one living with her newbie boyfriend. But when she comes across someone whom she thinks is Landon her world is suddenly spinning out of control, she has a major problem.

Watch as Ardiana re-lives her friendship with Landon, full of laughs, smiles, tears and more as she attempts to get Landon to fall back in love with her.


message 23: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Wood | 3 comments



http://www.wattpad.com/story/15345390...

Ardiana, a typical naughty brat, whom is brought up in a carehome with her bestfriend Landon, who's a total prince charming. When Ardiana is told Landon was killed in a tragic car accident, she spends the rest of her growing up days feeling that Landon is still around.

Ten years later, Ardiana is twenty-one living with her newbie boyfriend. But when she comes across someone whom she thinks is Landon her world is suddenly spinning out of control, she has a major problem.

Watch as Ardiana re-lives her friendship with Landon, full of laughs, smiles, tears and more as she attempts to get Landon to fall back in love with her.


message 24: by Alyxandria (new)

Alyxandria Ang  (alyxandriaang) | 3 comments Natalie wrote: "



http://www.wattpad.com/story/15345390...

Ardiana, a typical naughty brat, whom is brought up in a carehome with her bestfriend Landon, who's a total prince charming. When Ardi..."


Can't wait to read the story!


message 25: by Alyxandria (new)

Alyxandria Ang  (alyxandriaang) | 3 comments http://www.wattpad.com/story/15452109...

Jacqueline Elaine Howard had learned a few things over the years.

Rule #1- The dream would first come to you in a series of flashes.
Rule #2- The same dream could never be repeated.
Rule #3- You could not wake up until the dream was over.

Fainting at random times and falling asleep in class is not what a 16-year-old girl calls "favorable." Ever since Jackie was a young girl, her dreams have been abnormal. Her psychiatrist, Linda, has seemed to help her overcome most of the lucid dreaming, but not quite all of it. Now Jackie suffers between falling asleep from time to time when she least expects it. It's not until she meets Tyson- a popular rebel- does she begin to realize just how precious her dreams are. But is Tyson all that he seems to be? As Jackie begins to fall in and out of reality more, Tyson seems to be hiding a dark secret. Are Jackie's dreams really the problem or will Tyson's secret prove to be even more injurious?


Please check out my story and blog at thebooksbuzz.blogspot.com


message 26: by Denisse (new)

Denisse | 1 comments I adde it to my library. Can't wait to start reading it:)


message 27: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (mikaialia) | 1 comments http://www.wattpad.com/story/16045283...
thanks for checking it out! (if you even click the link I'll be happy)

There was a corrupt government.

And a revolution.

A successful one.

After the rebelling faction takes over the Department, Niel Hauser led a crumbling nation. Out of the ashes, the Nation rose, and a manifesto was written. The manifesto stated that everyone had equal rights, and a plan for government was drawn—a single-party plan, with a full economic system, based on the ideals of Julian Spacks, the one who inspired the Revolution.

Sticking to a plan, however is hard when no one remembers what it is.

Melinda Cartier is a hacker, diplomat, and former council member of the Revolt. She fled the Nation when she realized her socialist views were trumped with Communism, the "Just Third Way". Now, months after being kicked into the fringes of society with nothing to live on after her protests, she's back for blood.

This is a story of a Revolution.


message 28: by Rachel (new)

Rachel  Dawn | 1 comments Hello, I'm Rachel. I've been writing a werewolf fantasy romance book. You can check it out http://www.wattpad.com/story/8666037-... . It's not finished but I'm serious about this. I'de like some advice on my story. :)


n&#x1faf6;&#x1f3fd; I need votes, comments AND reads :3 Here is the summary of my story: http://www.wattpad.com/52320227-untitled
It's a paranormal/supernatural romance. I've just started it so only the first chapter is up. It'll get better, though, promise ;)

If you read/comment on my story, I'll do the same to yours! (If it's in a genre that I like :3)


n&#x1faf6;&#x1f3fd; Just read it! :D I do find it interesting and I enjoyed it. I know some people don't like grammar and spelling mistakes, so I think if you cleaned that up a bit, it would be almost perfectt :D Just some friendly advice :)


message 32: by Andreea (new)

Andreea Beatrice | 3 comments http://www.wattpad.com/story/17355348...
this is my first book, I hope you'll like it! :)


message 33: by Quinn (new)

Quinn | 1 comments hi my name is Quinn . and yes im a newbie here and also watt pad :)
so can you guys please check my fic ?
here the link :
http://www.wattpad.com/54024262-betwe...

and follow me on wattpad k ? ill follow back ofcourse :D
and vote it if you liked it .


message 34: by Fraffee (new)

Fraffee http://www.wattpad.com/story/17637445... <-a refreshing collection of poems that will surely bring a smile to your faces

A vote would be much appreciated! And a comment would be so amazing :)


message 35: by abberant (new)

abberant | 4 comments Killjoy wrote: "

Hello guys! It would be so awesome if you would read my stories on Wattpad!

http://www.wattpad.com/user/ElkeCremers

MY STORIES:

UNRAVELING (Werewolf/YA/Romance):

"He stared at me with those h..."


Cool summary but your profile link doesn't work?


message 36: by abberant (new)

abberant | 4 comments Alexandria wrote: "http://www.wattpad.com/story/15452109...

Jacqueline Elaine Howard had learned a few things over the years.

Rule #1- The dream would first come to you in a series of flashes.
Rule ..."



Cool story, but maybe longer chapters? :)


n&#x1faf6;&#x1f3fd; I started a new storyy…feedback would be greatly appreciated :D (I don't really have a summary, so I just put the first few lines in the book as the description.)

We Were Fugitives: We were fugitives. The four of us. My two best friends, Jordan Walker and Jaliece Bray, Jordan's idiot brother Danté, and me. I'll start by explaining exactly what happened.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/18066244...


message 38: by Amelia (new)

Amelia Depaul | 3 comments Please read my story and leave a comment.

Alyvia Warren was on a summer trip with her best friend Melody when she learns that her grandmother has been murdered. When she gets home her life starts to change drastically. She is starting to see ghosts and have visions of the past.

One night she finds a long lost family amulet. She learns that it is an important part in a plot to resurrect the man that almost caused a war between the Elementals and humans. He was also the cause of her great grandmother's death.

Alyvia is now stuck with having to find out her grandmother’s murder, stop Gabriel and try to harness her new powers in order to save the lives of others and the future of the world, as we know it.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/18137066...


message 39: by jon (new)

jon (timothyfractal) | 5 comments http://www.wattpad.com/story/13063060...

A maleficent breed of vampires is threatening to overrun the city. Can the coven of witches who has sworn to protect the city cope with such evil? Not only do the vampires suck blood, they have at their disposal a magic darker and more fearsome than any seen in the history of the world.


message 40: by Trudi (new)

Trudi Hauxwell Carson wrote: "http://www.wattpad.com/story/13063060...

A maleficent breed of vampires is threatening to overrun the city. Can the coven of witches who has sworn to protect the city cope with such evil? ..."


Have left a few grammar and punctuation pointers on your first 3 chapters Carson.


message 41: by Trudi (new)

Trudi Hauxwell http://www.wattpad.com/story/6477830-...

The Wreck of the Talluak - a science fiction mystery with just a hint of doomed romance.


message 43: by Emily (last edited Jun 30, 2014 07:00AM) (new)

Emily
Subject: Never Forgotten

Short Story || Teen Fiction

Click the image to read!



Autumn Moore had continuously thought that she was always there for her best friend Chase Carter, and that he was always there for her before he moved away from their hometown, and away from her.

When they reconnect over email after three years of being apart, they figure out what happened between them. Autumn realizes that she has feelings for Chase, and she gets quite a surprise when he shows up on her door step after a break in their emails.

But he’s changed. Autumn has to deal with this new reality, as well as aspects of her and Chase’s past that are brought back up.

They realize that they can’t forget who they used to be. They can never be forgotten.



message 44: by Queen of (new)

Queen of Darkness (-bibliophagist-) | 8 comments Book Name - Married to my Forever Enemy

http://www.wattpad.com/story/19098589...

Genre - Romance

Introduction
Married to my forever Enemy!

What happens when you’re coerced to marry your enemy?

Especially to the one who chucked you around like some rag doll when you were in nursery, or where he pulled your hair for his own entertainment or where he scared the living shit out of you? What can you possibly do to such an Ass? Except be his enemy and forever plot revenge?

I was doing just fine when suddenly my nana decided to drop the bomb on me and marry me off… that too to my forever enemy.


Teaser

“Don’t you look where you’re going O’Brian?” I hissed brushing my hands along my back hoping the brown dirt from the ground hadn't ruined it.

“Where were you off to? Especially at this time?” he questioned ignoring my question.
“What is it got to do with you? I’m going for a walk” I crossed my arms keeping my head held high, I couldn’t stutter nor lose my confidence if I wanted to run away.
“A walk? 10 minutes before walking down the alter?” he lifted his brows in amusement.
“Excuse me I’ve got reason to be out here” I replied. “Why are you out here? Are you running away?”


message 45: by Alexandria (new)

Alexandria Hoang | 2 comments

Ruby, a senior in high school is ruthlessly bullied and sexually harassed. She is trying desperately to survive her last year and views her graduation as an escape. When she accidentally summons a demon and can't get rid of him, she turns to a Mystic to help her control what she's unleashed only to fall into a paranormal wonderland.

With a demon on her back, an angel on her mind, and a fortune-telling college senior along for the ride, who has time for bullies?

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Once upon a time, Breya, without knowing his title, saves a prince and what was left of his meager subjects. Though they were said to be fated by the Mothers of her clan, their paths separated them. He became a fierce and cruel King, aptly called The Beast King, to preserve what was left of his people. She became an artisan, a slave, and a legend surrounded in mystery and magic. Brought before him in chains, Breya must decide if she can save this man again.

An in-depth fairytale rewritten to satisfy the romantic in all of us. Can you spot which tale I've spun?


message 46: by [deleted user] (new)

Hey, guys! I've just started a serial and would appreciate it if any of you could take a look at it? Please? :D



"Slave, call me a king and treat me like a god."

Warren Wolff's estranged brother, Wendell, had a mission--to bring another baby vampire back to The Authority to help find their leader's daughter and Wendell's lost love, Helena. Thinking of no better companion than his brother, Wendell went to Chicago to pay Warren a visit.

Wendell had a plan and he intended to stick with it, until he caught a whiff of the exquisite scent of Warren's executive assistant, Gwendolyn Wilkins.

Gwendolyn had long harbored feelings for Warren, and just when she thought he was to reciprocate her affections, a sinister replica of his image caught her off-guard, awakening inside of her the talents she never knew she possessed or ever even thought was possible to do.

Story is here:
http://www.wattpad.com/story/19142544...

Thank you so much!


message 47: by Tionna (new)

Tionna | 1 comments http://wattpad.com/user/TOP_PARSINA?u...




Any one of my stories u can check out... please read vote and comment and i PROMISE i will do the same!!! Thanksss


message 48: by Keegathehuman (new)

Keegathehuman | 5 comments Hopefully it gets noticed :S

Beth

http://www.wattpad.com/story/19791941...

Beth Morgan has everything. At least, that's what everyone else thinks. Adrian Parker has nothing. At least, that's what everyone else thinks. When their worlds unexpectedly collide after many years, neither are the same person they were at twelve years old. Adrian hasn't spoken a word in nine months and Beth constantly struggles with her suicidal tendencies. With Beth's 'perfect' boyfriend, Oscar, and her two best friends making life difficult, Beth ventures down a road she never thought she'd end up on in an attempt to escape. She's not sure what she's looking for, but neither is Adrian, and they quickly begin to realize that sometimes letting things get a little out of control is exactly what they never knew they needed. Can Adrian teach Beth to appreciate life? And can Beth show Adrian that not all bad memories need to be kept in the present?

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message 49: by jon (new)

jon (timothyfractal) | 5 comments When a coven of wily witches, a clan of voracious vampires and a pack of Lycans occupy the same space, stuff hits the fan pretty quick. Hence Kaia, a new recruit into the witches' Fraternity finds it hard surviving and the fact that the leader of the witches doesn't like her very much doesn't help the situation.

When her mother is kidnapped, Kaia's world is turned upside down. Dealing with the mysterious disappearance of her mother, a witch comes to visit her and all hell breaks loose from there.
Drafted into the coven: "The Fraternity", she learns magic beyond her wildest dreams. But then she realizes she is being pursued by both the Lycanthrope and Vampire faction and that her mother's capture is related to an ancient prophesy involving a most powerful witch.

http://www.wattpad.com/40078459-odd-b...

Read! Enjoy! Become hooked! Vote!


message 50: by Trudi (last edited Jul 26, 2014 09:29AM) (new)

Trudi Hauxwell

The Applewood Glass

"I did not know until last night what Heaven looked like, or that angels slept in beds just like ours."

England, 1898. Thomas Gray was a gifted artist who lived on the edge of madness. When his father, industrialist Richard Gray is found brutally murdered Thomas is accused of the crime. But he's disappeared and the events of that summer night at Gray Blaise Manor gradually fade from memory. Only rumours and hearsay persist. That Thomas haunts the Manor still, his restless spirit trapped between two worlds.

England 2010. Gelsey Fynes survived The Warlock, the only one of his victims to do so. Four women died after her ordeal came to an end and Fynes has never recovered from the guilt of not being able to save them. Desperate for peace she accepts an offer to house sit in the remote Warwickshire village of Buxton Travers. It's only after she arrives at Last Cottage that she realises she is not alone in her grief. Another soul is seeking a way out of its torment.

Two people, separated by over a century, are brought together by a power that neither of them can understand. Beyond their terror lies the chance of redemption and the opportunity to correct a terrible crime.


I've not written paranormal romance before so any feedback would be much appreciated.
Story is here
http://www.wattpad.com/story/19735907...


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