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message 301: by Lidy (last edited Jun 15, 2018 11:18AM) (new)

Lidy | 7 comments Hi all,

I'm still writing a collection of four romance novelettes but will love it if you can take the time to read, comment, vote and share with others.:

Foreseen 1-4

A collection of four erotic romance shorts about four mystical friends. How does two fortune tellers, an empath and yogi, and a psychic travel the murky waters of love? With a little help of black girl magic.:

Layla been in love with her best friend's older brother for seven years. And after spending one magical night together he runs away. To get him back she'll have to convince him they're perfect for each other. But can he ever stop seeing her as a littler girl but as a woman and return her feelings?

Bea's fighting the regentrification project for her neighborhood. Too bad her enemy happens to be her one night stand. But she's going down fighting no matter how good or how many orgasms he gave her.

Jenna's doing the most daring thing she's ever done. Consenting to blackmail by the sexy marine from her yoga class. Soon sexual lust has turned to love but both are wary of confessing their feelings considering how their relationship started.

Felicite' never thought her first time in cuffs would be because she was arrested. Even worse, the man who cuffed her is the destined man she's been waiting patiently for. But they'll have no future, unless Felicite' and her friends could figure out the real person behind the theft of a priceless object.

Bonus*
Keisha Anders has had it with fine-art photographer Alejandro Vaga. But when she comes up with a plan to stick him to like glue until his art showing she never expected to get roped into finding him his one true love. Will she be able to keep himself focused on his pictures, get her promotion and play matchmaker without getting her heart broken?

No cheating. HEA approved.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/1316586...


message 302: by Bupton1968 (new)

Bupton1968 | 1 comments


message 303: by Silvia (new)

Silvia (SillySilvia13) | 1 comments Hey guys, if you're a fan of the originals, come and read my story.

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/1161950...

Title: Tragic Love

Genre: Vampire/Romance

Description:
She was beauty and elegance and a heart of pure gold

He was a mischievous boy who turned into a beast

Lydia Rose and Kol Mikaelson was the type you don't describe as love at first sight. They formed a special friendship, where a love had been built. And it was more of an epiphany when they had realized their feelings for each other. They had gone through the stages of denial through acceptance. And realized at the end that they were a goner.

But of course there are still some obstacles lovers have to face together, and although there are times when it's just so easy to just give up, Lydia and Kol doesn't. They had lost count on how many times they had been separated but that doesn't stop them from giving up. One look at each other, and they already see all the reason worth fighting for.

To you this may seem like a story that has been told way too many times. But that is exactly the type of love Lydia and Kol has. A story that will be forever remembered in our hearts


message 304: by Daniel (new)

Daniel Bylsma | 1 comments I would love to see some more activity on my story, A Rider's Fate featuring dragons and dragon riders.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/1580414...

Thousands of years ago, humans made a pact with the mother of dragons. She granted them the ability to use spirit magic and in exchange the humans would keep the kingdom safe by developing bonds with her offspring. These humans became known as dragon riders.

In the present time a man named Merrick craves the magical relics of the past. Leaving chaos and destruction across the kingdom, he will stop at nothing to get what he wants. Even if it means killing anyone who stands in his way. Every day he is closer to fulfilling his ultimate goal: to rule the kingdom.

But fate intervenes in a young girl called Alexis. Surviving an attack on her village, she joins forces with the riders of the academy in an effort to thwart Merrick's plan. Because if he succeeds, the kingdom could be plunged into an eternal darkness.

The current plan for publishing new chapters is on Monday, Wednesday and Friday.

Thanks for taking a look and I welcome critiques. Just be sure to be polite please.


message 305: by laika (new)

laika (laikah) Hello! I just posted my new story on wattpad.


Looks can be deceiving.

Tracy Graham goes back to her hometown after ten years of absence. Now free of the stress of college, she plans to enjoy her summer with her two best friends and revisit this old town that holds so many of her childhood memories.

But there's Yann...


https://www.wattpad.com/story/1555433...

Please leave me your thoughts on the first chapter. It would be kind :)


message 306: by Grace (new)

Grace (thegoldfishwholived) https://my.w.tt/LFHqGisGJP
Never Forget. It's not finished yet but it's only to end up being 9 chapters


message 307: by Angel (last edited Aug 27, 2018 05:27PM) (new)

Angel | 13 comments I have four books posted on Wattpad. Two are completed-Grieving Oxygen is a romantic letter for a teen fiction contest and the other is Beneath the Pink Iron Veil which is a teen horror thriller short short story. The other two-Traveling Salesman: Astronomgonist has the first 27 chapters posted and it is ongoing. It's a steampunk, fantasy, multi-species, multi-racial, multi-cultural, interracial, disabilities, teen, young adult, adult, speculative fiction, romance, magic-sword-sorcery, mystery, thriller, suspense set in the late 1950s-1960s. The last one Singular Sin: Rothman Society has the first two chapters posted and is ongoing. And its a fantasy fiction. Please read, vote and comment. Thanks!

https://www.wattpad.com/story/1500276...

https://www.wattpad.com/story/1598025...

https://www.wattpad.com/story/1521412...

https://www.wattpad.com/story/1500231...


message 308: by Majety (new)

Majety Chakradhar | 2 comments (this is my first book on wattpad. So, please show some love and support. Comment and vote. Thank you. :) )

My Girlfriend is a WITCH.
Akhilesh a.k.a akhi is a graduating student in his first year and a wannabe writer. In the process of writing his first book he happens to meet a beautiful girl and fell in love with her only to find out later that she is a WITCH.
Will akhi give up his love and sets back to normal human life? or will he keep loving his 'witch' girlfriend? If he does, what consequences are awaiting him? Will his life be normal again? Are witches there for real ? Is it just the witches or there anymore surprises waiting for him? Does his 'witch' girlfriend really loves him? or is he just another sacrifice she's luring to slaughter on the eclipse night?
Read on to find out!


To read the first chapter, click here: https://www.wattpad.com/615506265-my-...


message 309: by T.L. (new)

T.L. (tlryder) | 18 comments Majety wrote: "(this is my first book on wattpad. So, please show some love and support. Comment and vote. Thank you. :) )

My Girlfriend is a WITCH.
Akhilesh a.k.a akhi is a graduating student in his first year ..."


Let me offer you an unofficial Welcome to Wattpad!


message 310: by Savannah (last edited Sep 04, 2018 05:00PM) (new)

Savannah (skyswriting) | 3 comments Hi, everyone! I posted my first story on Wattpad a few weeks ago. I'd love to share it with more people and receive feedback on it.
I would be more than happy to return the favor!

Below is my story:
https://www.wattpad.com/608502736-ope...

This is a new-adult story with a mixture of drama, humor, romance. It's about one girl struggling to make her dreams come true. After a lifetime of wishing and dreaming, she finally snapped and left for New York with the hopes to one day be on Broadway. Just a quick summary -- still smoothing out the blurb LOL


message 311: by Maeve (new)

Maeve Shawler | 1 comments Hey everyone! I thought I'd try this out. :) I'd love some feedback on my Wattpad story, Trickster. It's an LGBT Romance/Fantasy novel. https://www.wattpad.com/story/1538030...

Leithan's city needs saving. Both from an outside threat, and from corruption on the inside.

But it isn't just the city that needs saving. Leithan's mother has been in jail for ten years. He's been coerced into voting for a man he hates at the elections. He's stuck in an abusive arrangement with his spiritual leader. And now, his boyfriend of two years has betrayed his trust.

Add to that some cheeky new guy, waltzing into his life and turning everything even more upside down. Because on top of trying to save his city - and himself in the process - Leithan must now deal with a pesky infatuation for this new player in the game, whose name literally means trickster.

And how do you even trust someone with a name like that?


message 312: by Yara (new)

Yara Ashraf | 4 comments Read,Vote & comment I’ll do the same for u
https://my.w.tt/35hFcsshnQ


message 313: by Grace (new)

Grace (thegoldfishwholived) I would love feedback on my new story! It only has 5 parts right now but I wanna know how I'm doing! It's called "The Part-Time Sidekick".
https://my.w.tt/KE1fhhtwnQ


message 314: by Lee (new)

Lee Henry (fangyboyhenry) | 5 comments Hey guys, I'd love more feedback on my story. I just started working on it, so if you read it let me know what you think. It's a dark fantasy about magic and dumb, queer boys, who get into far too much trouble than they can handle.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/1611297...


message 315: by Lee (new)

Lee Henry (fangyboyhenry) | 5 comments Maeve wrote: "Hey everyone! I thought I'd try this out. :) I'd love some feedback on my Wattpad story, Trickster. It's an LGBT Romance/Fantasy novel. https://www.wattpad.com/story/1538030...

Leithan's ..."


That sounds really interesting. I'll have to check it out!


message 316: by Hush (new)

Hush (hushush) | 2 comments Hello fellow authors and readers!
So, after five years of contemplation and self-motivation, I have decided to write my first book. Please have a look at it (link provided at the end) and share your opinions.

Title: The Kingmaker
Genre: Dark Mafia Romance
The Kingmaker is the first installment in a two-part series.
Though categorized as a mafia-romance, this book (and the series) is not your average mafia fairytale.
It is a story of haunting lies, cold blood, and potent love. It is a tale of survival.
There will be secrets that will break families, plots that will overthrow kings, and tragedies that will fracture souls.
In the end, does love conquer all?

Read along to find out! New chapters will be published every weekend (most probably on Sundays).

My wattpad account: @RBKhan93
https://www.wattpad.com/story/1619291...
The Kingmaker by R.B Khan


BlackStarYTC {Formerly 103} (blackstarytc) | 4 comments So a dark romance with a sprinkle of mystery.


message 318: by Hush (new)

Hush (hushush) | 2 comments BlackStar103 {Smother The Flames With Gasoline} wrote: "So a dark romance with a sprinkle of mystery."

More like an unusual romance nestled in a dark mystery! ;)


message 319: by Victoria (new)

Victoria (justvictoria175) | 2 comments Hey guys, I've just started out with a new book and I'd love some feedback!
https://my.w.tt/cpEbVsIk1Q


message 320: by Grace (new)

Grace (thegoldfishwholived) I'll check it out Victoria!


message 321: by E. L. (new)

E. L.  (elcalloway) | 4 comments UNRAVEL

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Jaelinne Suarez's family is picture perfect.

A retired football coach as a father,
A genius accountant and consultant as a mother,
Straight honor roll student as an older sister,
And star athlete as an older brother.

And then there's Jaelinne, living in the shadows. From the outside looking in, Jaelinne has every person's dream home and family; but her best friend, Cassandra, knew that was far from the truth. Cassie has not only been Jaelinne's only form of support for as long as she can remember, but also her anchor. While Jaelinne has breakdown from her battles with OCD, Cassie is there by her side. And with Cassie not having the ideal family life, the support is mutual. They are all the each other has.

When Cassie moves away, life for Jaelinne gets a bit shaky.
When Cassie disappears, life for Jaelinne starts to spiral.

The police don't seem to be looking hard enough. Their parents don't know where to look, or so they say. So, with the clock ticking, help from an old friend and some unlikely allies, Jaelinne takes the search into her own hands as any best friend would. Though, She soon realizes that the web of secrets around her run deeper than she'd ever imagine.

Will she uncover the truth of her best friends disappearance and finally emerge from the shadows?
Or will she soon need to find herself somewhere to disappear to?

Link: https://my.w.tt/GFt8KklVRR


message 322: by Puppet (last edited Dec 19, 2018 11:41AM) (new)

Puppet (nobody160) | 3 comments It was 31st December when it happened...
A thick black fog covered the world, killing millions of people,
But there were people who survived, changing in the process.
Now the world is just a giant free for all and no matter who you are,
You have to kill to survive this hell hole.

Keep Breathing: https://www.wattpad.com/story/1452834...

Elizabeth Crime is rich and missing for over a year. Why? Well, let's just say her father made some bad deals and is now a failed human experiment who is about to die unless she takes the deal that she has been given.

Error In The Program: https://www.wattpad.com/story/1693732...

What's a god to do when their board, well mess with mortals of course.
Generation's game is something that happens every few generations, pick four mortals and test their limits to see if they're worth the god's time and if they can help them in the future.

Generation's Game: https://www.wattpad.com/story/1657305...


message 323: by Grace (new)

Grace (thegoldfishwholived) I'll check them out! @Nobody160!


message 324: by [deleted user] (new)

Sorcery on Ice (complete, 40 parts)
https://www.wattpad.com/story/1669206...

Sorcery Ice Slayer (ongoing)
https://www.wattpad.com/story/1692959...


message 326: by GC (new)

GC | 1 comments My fanfic is Hogwarts Marauders.... It's an Marauders era fanfic for potterheads... I hope you like it, though I haven't written much right now...
I hope you like it.... I ship wolfstar and Jily...
https://my.w.tt/1Fuse3sP8T


Author MaryEllen  (httpwwwgoodreadscommcampc65) Yes please. I need to move my book.


message 328: by Brittney (new)

Brittney | 3 comments Mary Ellen you didn’t leave a link, a title, or anything that would allow us to view you work.


Author MaryEllen  (httpwwwgoodreadscommcampc65) Sorry I didn’t think about that. Here is the link for my site https://my.w.tt/oQLkKDl8dU.


message 330: by Mira (new)

Mira (amira_edris) Hi, this my first book please check it out, i only published the prologue and first chapter but any early feedback is appreciated and I will update it weekly
The girl with hallucinations
https://my.w.tt/tE68qfRb9T
Thanks


message 331: by T.L. (new)

T.L. (tlryder) | 18 comments Fistful of Stars

https://www.wattpad.com/story/1290656...

Meet the crew of the Destrier. They each have their reasons for signing on to the United Planetary Authority's space force. But they'll all have to work together if they want to save the universe.

Willing to do read-for-reads!


message 332: by Marian (new)

Marian Balza (marianbalza) | 4 comments An spanish story about love <3

https://my.w.tt/Btimc45MrU


message 333: by Daniel (new)

Daniel Hall | 2 comments Hi everyone,

I've written a short story that I feel a lot of you will not only enjoy reading but it may offer you some advice that you can actually use in your life.

As a story description:
A social media influencer does live streams a session with her counsellor which talks about seeing peoples perfect lives on Instagram is making her depressed. The counsellor comes up with solutions to help stop depression (that readers can use too!). And there is a big twist at the end of the story.

https://www.wattpad.com/716006664-the...


message 334: by Sammi-Jo (new)

Sammi-Jo Grayson | 3 comments Hi I’m wondering if anyone knows what this wattpad book is called.
A young girl competitive horse rider along with her twin brother, are out from a concert (I think) and they get in a car accident on the way home she loses her brother and something happens to her legs, after a while she goes back to school and she meets a boy.
I know during the end of the book it is figured out that her brother had end up getting a girl pregnant.

If anyone knows would be really helpful

Thanks


message 335: by Library Nymph (last edited Apr 23, 2019 11:21AM) (new)

Library Nymph (librarynymph) | 7 comments I'm Bookishnymph on Wattpad. Feel free to check out my stuff. A word of caution, they're all Mature stories for an audience of 18+. Thanks!

https://www.wattpad.com/user/BookishN...


message 336: by Liyah (new)

Liyah | 2 comments Wattpad name: Swag133Girl
Story title: Dragon Fangs
https://www.wattpad.com/story/1826372...

This is my first time writing a story that I update frequently. Hope you enjoy!


message 337: by Library Nymph (new)

Library Nymph (librarynymph) | 7 comments My short story Paris Nights on Wattpad is complete! Feel free to spin by and read. (Caution: Mature 18+)

https://www.wattpad.com/717063872-par...


Kimberly Tanith Marie  (kimberlytanithmarie) My completed story The Heart of Moss has been ranked #1 in both adults only as well as interracial couple.

It's my first ever Wattpad novel, enjoy :)

https://my.w.tt/Fwe2XtxlnW


message 339: by Library Nymph (last edited May 08, 2019 12:13PM) (new)

Library Nymph (librarynymph) | 7 comments Here's my completed short story! (caution: mature 18+)

https://www.wattpad.com/717063872-par...

BLURB:

There's nothing like being loved by a sexy, mature man you know will protect you and pleasure you every way he can. . . .
She's given a trip to Paris by her lover for a birthday gift. But when she tries to thank him, he reminds her that a mature man really knows how to please his girl. After all . . .Daddy knows best.


message 340: by Monalijayelle (new)

Monalijayelle | 1 comments Hapless

https://www.wattpad.com/story/1897633...

"Women should be seen and not heard".
The problem all started with her boisterous outcry. Mon Humble is an amiable computer systems engineer trainee whose life-changing events has caused her various psychological conditions including philophobia. Can anyone save her from life torments? It only takes one misfortune to evoke a series of disasters in your life. Mon explores the fine line between good and evil as well as the stupidity and insanity that can exist in everyone.

Any feedback will be appreciated.


message 341: by Jeremy (new)

Jeremy Scharmann (scharmannj) | 3 comments Nigel Nelson a Hercules Poirot or Sherlock Holmes-Esque PI must find the murderer behind a classic whodunnit. Someone is painting pictures of their crimes. Can Nigel Nelson break the case?
https://my.w.tt/E4nkOT0qYX


message 342: by Kay (new)

Kay Maxmillion | 2 comments Hi I'm a new writer on Wattpad and would love Feed back on my story. It's called dauntless and no its not a fanfic to divergent. It's a new adult romance and only intended for mature readers

I only have 6 chapters so far. Working on the next one .

https://my.w.tt/xgQG7dur3X


Kathryn just landed the job of her dreams as a journalist. Things are finally falling into place for her. She's soaring beyond everyone expectations at work and her rugged handsome editor wants her bad! Just when she's getting content with her new life here comes a few things to shake it up a bit.
1.Gavins back from the army and it's not a skinny little boy anymore . All Kathryn wanted was for her childhood best friend to come back home and now that he's here can she handle it?
2.She stumbles across a big story that can ruin her career but save lives. Will she be able to do what is right? Even if it means having everything she worked for be destroyed?


message 343: by Patricia (new)

Patricia R | 1 comments https://www.wattpad.com/story/1920907...
I started a new storyy…feedback would be greatly appreciated :D


message 344: by Sekai (new)

Sekai Saesang | 5 comments Hello everyone,

Please check out my story: https://www.wattpad.com/story/1834308...

It's a historical ancient novel. Please read, comment and vote!! Thank you😘

Synopsis: Lei Xing never expected anything from anyone and only believed and relied on herself to live well and succeed and aimed to enjoy life freely and untethered to anyone...She finally graduated law school and was on her way to truly accomplish her life of success and freedom...to commemorate this milestone, she decided to take a vacation...

"If I'm going to do it, I have to do in style!"

...and so she decided on a cruise and splurged her hard earned money on a luxury line...and then...Where the hell am I?!

No way! No way! This has to be a dream...I transmigrated?!!

Okay, at least I'm rich...I can still live happily and freely, it's a golden second opportunity at life and I will live it well!...maybe go traveling, start a business or something...but I am definitely not interested in any royal BS or fights, please keep your scheming lives to yourselves and leave me the hell out of it, NOT INTERESTED!!!

***
"Little chicken, as long as I'm alive you won't die."

"Nonsense, if anyone is going to cause my death, it would be you!!"

"Do you really feel nothing after all this time?" He asked as he looked at her with searching eyes, trying to see into her soul...

"...Who...would..." she mumbled under her breath...
***
"That stupid old man, I'm going to end him when I find him...You better hide well!!"


message 345: by Laura (new)

Laura Book | 2 comments https://my.w.tt/yqGZjM7QX6
Black Widow - LautheReader21

This story follows the first year of college for Jade Cross, a well known player from NYC, the very same one who seamlessly crushed Leon Stone's heart into tiny pieces, which may or may not have sparked a change in her totally emotionless character.

Such is her allure and her notorious ways, that she is known as the Black Widow, for she toys with guys at her will and once she's had her fun, she leaves them for dead, but not before planting a red kiss in the corner of their lips - her trademark.

Enter Jesse Saunders, an average-looking and at times painfully awkward guy. He's not the type Jade usually goes for, but a weird situation forces them to cross paths, and she's not one to turn down some good fun.

Or at least fun is what she thought it would be, but ultimately she has no idea what she is getting herself into. Mix these two extremely different creatures together, sit back and watch how they drive each other nuts.

But the question remains, will he be enough to make her call it quits on the game? Or will she destroy this naive kid's heart just as frivolously as she did to The Legendary Player?


message 346: by Rose (new)

Rose (goalchaser767) | 2 comments working on my poetry novel. check it out and leave a feedback. I'll be happy to know what y'all think. https://my.w.tt/E5viI258Y6.
Serlina's Self-Isolated Explorations


message 348: by Kamilla (new)

Kamilla | 1 comments Hello everyone!
Working on a girlxgirl story. It’s my first story ever, so I would appreciate any feedbacks and critics. https://my.w.tt/LXKYUSVWb8
Thank you in advance ;-)


message 349: by Wren (last edited Aug 05, 2020 08:45AM) (new)

Wren Kingsley (wrenkingsley) | 2 comments TheChronicleKeeper

https://www.wattpad.com/story/2314403...


"If you want answers, come and find me."
-Destiny

Aislin has awoken trapped, injured, and alone. When she discovers a mysterious note attached to her locket by one called Destiny, she escapes and ventures to find Destiny.

But when a stranger approaches her one night, informing her she must find the Chronicle Keeper first in order to find Destiny, and the only one who can help her is Nolan, her plans become a little more complicated.

Together, Aislin and Nolan embark on an epic journey to find the Chronicle Keeper and answers on where to find Destiny.

But when hidden secrets are revealed, can their growing bond hold them together, or will it split them apart?




*** This is a new book and I am posting chapters in two segments. And I post 3x/week. Monday's, Wednesday's, and Friday's. I hope to see you and get to hear your thoughts and feedback! Would love to interact with you all :)***

Also, if you follow me on Instagram (@authorwrenkingsley), you will also get sneak peeks into each chapter before it is posted through short chapter video clips :)


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