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message 201: by Fabiola (new)

Fabiola Castillo (httpswwwfacebookcomsagaelemental) | 6 comments acabo de publicar el primer capitulo de Vestigios (Niebla) la segunda novela de la tetralogia de la Saga de los Portales. Es la primera secuela de Elemental, gratis en wattpad


https://www.wattpad.com/story/6966418...


message 202: by Chyanne (new)

Chyanne | 1 comments https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/68105...

i really would like some more votes on my book. PLEASE READ IT.

When Chrysanthemums mom remarried, her step dad traveled alot and her mom wanted to go with him so she went to live with her aunt for a while. Did I forget to mention that she has a twin cousin and that they had a fight? To see what happens read and find out.


message 203: by Vale (new)

Vale | 3 comments Hi! Can you help me? The story is Italian https://www.wattpad.com/247702020-la-...


Burn After Reading  (ellibees) | 6 comments Not my story but my boyfriends please give it a read and feel free to critique it. 2138 AD http://my.w.tt/UiNb/JwQ1jLMEht
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message 205: by Tiffany (new)

Tiffany Daune | 1 comments Hey fellow Wattpad lovers,

If you love, ya urban fantasy, check out Coral & Bone https://www.wattpad.com/story/6206958...

I'm on Wattpad all the time, so stop by & say hi!

Halen knows the sparks igniting under her fingertips are dangerous. She has spent her entire life trying to quell the tingly feelings that make her destroy things, but now that she is back in Rockaway Beach, where she watched her father drown, the flames have become impossible to tame.
Halen is trying to hold on, but when she is thrust into a mysterious new world, the underwater realm of Elosia, she unravels the secrets of her past and can't help but ignite. As she explores Elosia, she realizes her life has been a lie. And when those who have deceived her come to her for help, Halen must choose—walk away or unleash the magick that could destroy them all.


message 206: by Samara (new)

Samara (maramaraa) Samara My friend Libba is writting a book and she would really love some feedback.This is her first book and belive me this book is amazing and has alot of twist and turns.

The Frailty of Dolores

I wake up to a raspy beeping on the radio of my dad's truck. Warm fluid bubbles up into my throat and begins to pool out of my mouth. I try calling out, but all that comes out is a sick gargling. I can't even recall what happened, can't feel anything. A voice crackles over the static on the radio announcing a tornado...

http://my.w.tt/UiNb/dedUG0rfBt


message 207: by aru (new)

aru (beartown) Hi Wattpadians,
If you love ya novellas with a handful of comedy, check out Call Ended

https://www.wattpad.com/story/7262415...

"Help, my cramps are killing me"
"Do you usually call strangers to discuss your menstrual cycle?"
"Who are you? Did you kidnap Ellie ?! "

In which two strangers communicate via phone


♥️♥️ Lanae ♥️♥️  (ramboramblernae) | 7 comments Check out my story please! Vote & comment if you're interested.

Title: Kid Sister

Synopsis: Xavier cannot fall in love with Cassandra Carrington.

She's his new boss' daughter.

She's his best friend's baby sister.

And the scars from his past make it impossible to see a future with someone who hates the career he's committed his life to in his own brother's honor. It doesn't matter how intelligent, how funny, how frustratingly beautiful she is.

Cassie just isn't worth the heart ache-or the headache.


Xavier Henderson works for the enemy.

He's the embodiment of everything she hates about the judicial system, in a perfectly tailored Armani Suit. The clients he fights so hard for open barely healed wounds from a love she lost at the hands of injustice.

She's determined to ignore the flutter in her stomach when he flashes her the dimpled smile that always seems to get him whatever and whoever he wants, wherever he wants.

They're the opposite that should never attract. And a relationship could jeopardize both their futures. So, one-night stand be damned, because there is no way anything is ever going to happen between them again. It can't-because it shouldn't.

... And that's probably why it does.


[**This is New Adult** Please be advised that some or all parts of this novel is probably best suited for ages 17 & up]


message 209: by Sahdyah (last edited Jun 02, 2016 09:58AM) (new)

Sahdyah (misssdmhere) Check out my new interracial romance novel!
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https://www.wattpad.com/story/7366899...

FlA·vor.
noun.
A distinct taste. A new nightclub. Attraction. Addiction. Adrienne.

When 21 year old Adrienne Michaels broke up with her boyfriend, Darren Smith, she couldn't believe how everything they built together crumbled.

She decided that she will take back her newly-found single life with the help of her best friends. Adrienne didn't realize that she would be consumed into the nightclub with the panty-dropping owner named Blaine Harrington, and the drama that lurks in and outside the club set in NYC.

Her ex-lover wants her back at all cost and at extreme measures. Her new lover will do anything to protect and cherish what's rightfully his.

Because now that they got a taste of her, they'll stop at nothing to have her, completely.


Burn After Reading  (ellibees) | 6 comments My story is called Descension its a psychological thriller about a girl struggling with mental illness and depression. Please give it a read and maybe leave a critique/comment. This is my first story and I would really like feedback so that I can improve my writing. Thanks in advance. http://my.w.tt/UiNb/n4a2PuVrTt


message 211: by Sahara (new)

Sahara (saharageek) | 3 comments Peace of the Forest

Colin dislikes his family and everything to do with them until one tragic day when everything changes.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/7419752...


It's a completed short story. Please read, vote, comment, or whatever. Thanks!!


message 212: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 1 comments Hi guys I'd love some feedback on my book. The One That Got Away.

I'll R4R F4F V4V

It does need some TLC to it tho grammar nazis it's a warning lol

But I think the storyline is good I'd just like a bit of feedback

https://www.wattpad.com/user/A-N-Will...

Thanks and plz let me know so I can return the favor.


message 213: by Jim (new)

Jim (jimtheauthor) | 1 comments Hi, everyone. I'd like to let you know about my YA Fantasy book. Thanks in advance for taking a look at it.



Tales of Asentus: Soul Gate

A glittering mist in the sky signals the imminent rebirth of a giant desert serpent. Rulers from around the continent gather to plan for the greatest battle ever to be fought. But, they fear that only one man has the powers to slay the dreaded Sirocco Dragon, and he has not shown his face in years.

Join Troye and his friends as they explore a magical world that is becoming more and more dangerous. They will discover new places and uncover long-lost relics, all the while battling fantastical creatures. But when a stranger appears and tells Troye his estranged father needs his help, his journey will take a turn towards a dark path that will test his strength and courage.

Elsewhere, an unknown evil is brewing inside the soul of one man.


message 214: by Kim (new)

Kim (grimalkim) | 3 comments https://www.wattpad.com/story/7666216... Daughter of The Frozen Flame

"You are Xylia Ileana Alewyne, born in the endless winter, and the first daughter of the frozen flame."

After escaping Lyris in the midst of chaos, Xylia revealed her secret to Prince Taiden and Captain Julius; she is the Phryensh'a of a long forgotten kingdom far beyond the northern mountains. Now, she must return to the home she never knew, the father she never had, and the people she can't rule, to take her place in the Xeo City Palace. Only then can she plan her next step in the fight for a free world.

For this war has only just begun, and Xylia's battle is far from over.

The Sequel to The Poison Prince.


message 215: by Divina (new)

Divina Divine (Lostdivine) | 2 comments I was terrified, fear boiling up in my veins. What if they catch me? what will they possibly do to me? rape and sell is what they do, what I have heard about them. I stared for a place to hide and then a hand grabbed me behind the door to the cellar. It was dark, my heart got stuck in my throat.

His chest touched my back, his strong arms held me by my waist. My lips pressed against his palm.

''Zayn'' I mumbled but not cleared enough to be heard by anyone

''sshh'' he whispered in my ear, that sent shivers down my spine. What was Zayn up to? I've been told that he had raped a girl from his neighborhood and I would never want that for myself.

He lowered his face on my neck, his breath brushing against my skin. I ceased to struggle because the other gang could be seen from the half parted door. I gasped and jumped in terror, his lips slightly touched my skin, they were soft and wet.

he was breathing profusely and so was I................
............................................
{{*.*Ashley moves into a new town. She soon realises that the town is not a regular one but is filled with mysteries and dark pasts. She gets caught in a loop hole of mysteries, lies and murders, all these hinting towards only one person, Zayn Malik. She had never thought that she will end up falling in love with a criminal*,*}}
here is the link to it

https://www.wattpad.com/story/5805575...


message 216: by Lidy (last edited Jul 14, 2016 06:19AM) (new)

Lidy | 7 comments I've just entered my first adult romance, Dreaming of You, into this year's Wattys. An introduction is already up and will be uploading chapters (chapter 1 should be up by the end of the week). Hope you enjoy it and leave comments about what you think of the characters and such.

http://w.tt/29xZuCW

Dreaming of You - #Wattys2016


message 217: by Phoebe (new)

Phoebe (fizzbangwhallop) My story is Queen of peace. Princess Willa Kal is faced with a dilemma, join the rebellion and go against her Father, the King, or stand by as he burns buildings to ash, chops off the heads of innocent men and women, and murders children in their beds for no reason. When she meets Bill a young artist in the rebellion, with strange foreign parents, he opens her eyes to the works of the rebellion. And he shows her that she can make a difference and become a Queen the Kingdom will never forget. She will be the new dawn for the Kingdom.


message 218: by Chloe (new)

Chloe James | 3 comments Heyy everyone :)Im a new author.Please check out my new story and tell me your opinion wither it was bad or good i will appreciate it! no worries your opinion will be in safe hands :)♥Dont forget to vote :)

https://www.wattpad.com/292760608-the...


message 219: by Batul (new)

Batul | 4 comments Hi, I am a new author and it would be really nice if you check out my work.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/8244031...

Here's a quick blurb-
A tale about first love.
When 'Myra Evan' falls in love with the new guy 'Luke Carter', she is ready to cross all the limit just to get his attenttion and his love, but will she be succesful in making him love her ? or will this love ruin her?


message 220: by Patricia (new)

Patricia Elliott | 9 comments I've posted a new story on Wattpad called "The Blues of Atlantis."

"Nerina Winters is a living, breathing ghost, or so you would think with her white hair and pale skin. Her parents couldn't tell her why she looks the way she does, other than to say she's as healthy as a horse.


After accidentally uncovering a secret buried deep within her genes, she learns that there's more to her looks than meets the eye. Now, she finds herself thrust between two worlds, one she knows and one that's been long since forgotten.

Will she still love the man in her life when she finds out how deep the secret really goes?"

http://my.w.tt/UiNb/hPfeRkeSIw

I hope you will stop by and check it out :) Please and thank you.


message 221: by Patricia (new)

Patricia Elliott | 9 comments Chloe wrote: "Heyy everyone :)Im a new author.Please check out my new story and tell me your opinion wither it was bad or good i will appreciate it! no worries your opinion will be in safe hands :)♥Dont forget t..."

I'd be happy to check it out :)


message 222: by Mallory (new)

Mallory Shelton | 5 comments I have a new project I'm working now, just one chapter available at the moment, but I'd really like to get some kind of feedback or opinion on it.. seems as if it's invisible, but that doesn't tell me if it's decent or garbage.. link is right here,
http://my.w.tt/UiNb/ZPwzns6mSx


message 223: by Elise (new)

Elise (elisefromtheinternet)  photo myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyythicalittttttttty_zpsrfg6kzjt.jpg

https://www.wattpad.com/story/5084927...



"What is the mythicality of seeing Big Foot in your backyard? What is the mythicality of the boogeyman hiding in your closet? What is the mythicality of falling in love with your teacher...?

Charlie was the girl to stay to herself in times of need, but in the result of a test dropping her grade, she needed the help. Link was the man to keep fighting when things got tough, but when it was time to move on, he sure gave up the fight. And if the girl that sat in the front row by the window didn't make him skip a beat... No one else could."


message 224: by Joanne (Lyra) (new)

Joanne (Lyra) (sherbetnebula) Really appreciate it if you give feedback :)
Genre: Fantasy

Wearing red won't make you invisible,
Carrying an iron object won't make you invincible,
Hiding your nail cuttings and blood is useless,
Avoiding fairy rings and certain trees won't help evade us,
Using salt or rowan as protection won't hide thee,
Away from the night and the moon will not prevent 'me'.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/9171400...


message 225: by Elle (last edited Dec 07, 2016 10:06AM) (new)

Elle Jacklee | 2 comments In the spirit of the season, I'm posting my already-published MG/YA fantasy, The Tree of Mindala, on Wattpad.

Miranda Moon's vivid imagination has gotten her into trouble more times than she can count. This time, she's been suspended from school. So her straight-laced younger brother, Marcus, blames her when they're relegated to their late grandparents' old cabin over Halloween weekend. But when Miranda finds a curious trinket, they're mysteriously whisked away to Wunderwood, where magic flows through the trees and everyone already knows their family name. A place even Miranda never imagined.

Just as they arrive, a sinister warlock, Thornton Crow, is freed from a long banishment. He resumes his deadly agenda to find The Tree of Mindala, the source of all the realm's magic. As Miranda and Marcus discover branches of their own family tree that they hadn't even known existed, they learn that Thornton has a score to settle with anyone in their bloodline. Especially them... Though justice has always had a way of being naturally restored in Wunderwood, Thornton's latest evil deed just may be the tipping point.

When Miranda discovers her own role in Thornton's release, she knows it's up to her to stop him from stealing not just magic, but also hope. With travel companions that could as easily be foes as friends, and only the cryptic words of a prophecy to guide her, Miranda must decide if she can carry out the task that will either save Wunderwood... or doom it forever.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/9189141...

Reads and comments are welcome and appreciated! Thanks and Happy Holidays!


message 226: by Wren (new)

Wren  (wrenreaders) I just posted a new short story on wattpad, it is titled Lemons and it is set in a fantasy world with LGBTQ content. enjoy! https://www.wattpad.com/story/9381544...


message 227: by Grace (new)

Grace Shu | 3 comments Hey! If you enjoy historical fiction and/or poetry, take a look at my ongoing novel titled "No Such Dalliance"!

https://www.wattpad.com/story/6343610...

Dalliance: [noun] 1. a trifling away of time 2. a casual relationship

Harrison Travers is a bartender in 19th century Manchester, England. During a shift at the tavern, he meets a publication editor for the town newspaper who convinces him to begin writing again after having given up the dream. The daughter of one of the wealthiest families in Manchester, a Miss Adelaide Deveaux, joins Harrison in his efforts.

No Such Dalliance explores Harrison's journey as he transforms from a struggling bartender to a successful writer who has his poems in the newspaper, with original poems (by me!) in the novel itself, until a simple choice places his career and his own life in jeopardy.


message 228: by Madame Black (last edited Dec 28, 2016 06:20PM) (new)

Madame Black Rose (madameblackrose) | 2 comments The Tale of the Lightning Witch



Synopsis: "You are indeed growing into a woman if you are already mastering the art of persuasion. You'll be a dangerous one."

Livetira: the world ruled by lightning rather than sun. It is also ruled by lightning magicians, men who have learned to become as harsh and unyielding as their world in order to survive. As a result, though almost everyone possesses this magic, only the most aggressive and powerful rose to the nobility, who were these very men. Their women, meanwhile, are left to practice the gentler forms of lightning magic, such as healing and threading.

Vellurres Ursurlann, however, does not fit into this mold. With her five older brothers, she uses her silver tongue and charms to learn more about the stronger forms of lightning magic that have always fascinated her, as knowledge and power are both sides of the same coin.

But her father, the Duke of Ursurlann, embodies these very type of men that would constrain her. And the more she grows up in this society, the more she realizes he isn't the only one.

The Tale of the Lightning Witch


message 229: by Megan (new)

Megan | 5 comments this is such a great idea!


message 230: by Beth (new)

Beth Green (thegreenauthor) | 5 comments I'd love some feedback!

One Last Stand

Three young men embark on a hiking trip to commemorate the last vestiges of summer when then encounter a sinister creature deep in the forest. What began as a simple adventure quickly escalates into a fight for survival.

http://my.w.tt/UiNb/Q5enllZmCz


message 231: by Megan (new)

Megan | 5 comments I'm currently writing a short story for the wattpad #justwriteit alternate ending thing. The link to it is: https://www.wattpad.com/story/95080037 I would REALLY appreciate it if anyone checked it out, pm me on wattpad if you want to read for read or anything!

Prince Charming was all ready to settle down. Nice girl, nice house, MASSIVE inheritance - what could go wrong? Everything it seems. What happens when everything you thought to be true turns out to be a lie? And the worst thing of all? It wasn't even her shoe.

New story from wazzupitsnothing for wattpad #justwriteit #altending


message 232: by Megan (last edited Jan 03, 2017 08:02AM) (new)

Megan | 5 comments I'm currently writing a short story for the wattpad #justwriteit alternate ending thing. The link to it is: https://www.wattpad.com/story/95080037 I would REALLY appreciate it if anyone checked it out, pm me on wattpad if you want to read for read or anything!

Prince Charming was all ready to settle down. Nice girl, nice house, MASSIVE inheritance - what could go wrong? Everything it seems. What happens when everything you thought to be true turns out to be a lie? And the worst thing of all? It wasn't even her shoe.

New story from wazzupitsnothing for wattpad #justwriteit #altending


message 233: by Michelle (new)

Michelle | 5 comments I have three stories posted on Wattpad, two are fantasy and one paranormal fiction. I'm looking for readers, and I'd appreciate it if people took a look at my stories. They're new, but I'll be updating two times a week.
https://www.wattpad.com/user/RebecaMarz


message 234: by Angel (new)

Angel | 13 comments Here's the link to a sample of the first 1-4 chapters of my new novel released in full version on Amazon, Kindle, BarnesandNoble, Booksamillion, etc. in paperback and e-book. I wouldn't mind comments, votes on what you liked so far in the sample on Wattpad. In the near future I'll be uploading more stories of mine strictly for Wattpad members to read in full version.

https://www.wattpad.com/354158912-wee...


message 236: by Beth (new)

Beth Green (thegreenauthor) | 5 comments Something sinister lives deep in the woods...


http://my.w.tt/UiNb/PANXgdP0Uz


message 237: by Beth (new)

Beth Green (thegreenauthor) | 5 comments Something sinister lives deep in the woods...

http://my.w.tt/UiNb/UDvHwHa1Uz


message 238: by Kawther (new)

Kawther (kae98) | 1 comments it would be great if you could check out my friend's story !
or leave a vote and a comment if you like it

https://www.wattpad.com/story/5815904...

reply to me so i'll do the same!


message 239: by Joao (new)

Joao Couto | 1 comments If anyone's interested in poems,check out my little poem book please.
It's called "The little sad tales of a young storyteller"
I'ts an ongoing project,and I'm open to suggestions and critiques,thank you for your time and kindness

https://www.wattpad.com/365578632-the...


message 240: by Bray (new)

Bray  Knox (brayknox) Hi I love this group, such a good idea! If anyone is into Fantasy/ Adventure, here it the book I am working on right now:

https://www.wattpad.com/story/9045793...

To live in a world separated by ability, Aspyn finds herself alone.

6 markings. 6 abilities. 6 classes within one race.

In the kingdom of Kortana, people are separated by the markings they bare from birth.
Sight, Song and Swift,
Mind, Matter and Motion.
Those marked with one of the three E(m)blems, are of the noble people that rule Cortana, while those marked with one of the three (S)ymbols are the working class of the kingdom.

Born baring no marks or ability, Aspyn struggles to hide a secret that could have her sent to war. However, following her nineteenth birthday and a noble encounter, Aspyns life is changed forever, sending her into a journey that will change the fate of Kortana for the rest of history while awakening something deep within herself.

Royalty, power, strength and ability.

Unmarked will take you through Kortana and send you on a journey of change.


message 241: by Eric (new)

Eric Bickernicks (bickernicks) | 1 comments description

Funny animated book trailer: https://youtu.be/A2qlctVxpJw

Would you like a couch with that painting?

Obscurity is a way of life for Gavin Vonn Getch, a painter who works at a frame shop in a small New England town. His life changes when billionaire Gary Eastman enters his shop and becomes the ultimate patron: a lifetime commission for all his work in exchange for a crap-load of money.

Some of his artist buddies envy him and others think he’s sold out. Curious as to where his paintings are being displayed, he makes a trip to the DLC headquarters, where a shocking discovery forces him to reevaluate his deal with Eastman and his identity as an artist.

Why does an artist create? What alternatives are there to completely selling out? Is there no genius—only marketing? The book is a satirical, and sometimes surreal look at the art world.

Wattpad link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/101421772


message 242: by Danny (new)

Danny Drykon (dannydrykon) User: ElementalAndroid
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/user/Elementa...

If you support any of my work, send me a Wattpad PM saying you're from this group and I'll happily return the favour ^_^


message 243: by Leo (last edited Mar 08, 2017 01:34PM) (new)

Leo Walsh (llleoll) | 8 comments Hey folks. I'm kind of new to the group. Here's a post to a novel in progress. It's an urban fantasy written more with a grownup audience in mind. PS -- I'll repay upvotes.

Happy reading.




"A tarnished twenty-something and his dead grandfather dodge the FBI, take on the mob and run down a voodoo curse."

One time high school A-lister Ben's stuck in a dead-end job with child support to worry about. Until the mobster Tony offers him a way out, dealing coked to high-end clients. Soon, Ben's rolling in Benjamins, able to provide his son with the advantages he lacked. Better still, he's back in demand.

Thing is, the cops are closing, Tony's setting Ben up as a scapegoat, and Ben doesn’t know.

Lucky for Ben, his grandfather Frank knows. And he's ready to slug Tony and help Ben out of his jam... after talking some sense into him. Problem is, Frank's a ghost and Ben looks right through him. So helping the kid's gonna take some doing.

(Read it here.)

Curse words, mild sexual content and drug references. 16+. If a movie, it would be rated PG-13, or possibly a soft-R.




Modo incógnito ☕️🐭 (antiviral) I need readers for my newest work of fiction, my account is new but I'm not new at writing. My story "a forest of secrets" will be updated every friday, no excuses (I'm almost done writing the book, but I've only released the first chapter so far). Don't be shy :D I'll also gladly read other people's books, don't be afraid to ask- it'd be great if you read mine in return, but it's not imperative.
Here's my book https://www.wattpad.com/story/1019691...

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message 245: by Modo incógnito ☕️🐭 (last edited Mar 14, 2017 07:39PM) (new)

Modo incógnito ☕️🐭 (antiviral) Leo wrote: "Hey folks. I'm kind of new to the group. Here's a post to a novel in progress. It's an urban fantasy written more with a grownup audience in mind. PS -- I'll repay upvotes.

Happy reading.




"A..."



I'll take a look


Modo incógnito ☕️🐭 (antiviral) Bray ☽ wrote: "Hi I love this group, such a good idea! If anyone is into Fantasy/ Adventure, here it the book I am working on right now:

https://www.wattpad.com/story/9045793...

To live in a world separa..."


It sounds interesting, I'll check it out


message 247: by Lidy (new)

Lidy | 7 comments Dreaming of You - Dream Brother series #1

Please read Dreaming of You

Blurb: In a week Sharon's life has gone down the crapper. Her latest client, former middle school mate and golden boy Justin Boyd, just walked into her office with a referral. He doesn't seem to remember her but Sharon has never forgotten him and the nasty rumour he started about her, forcing her to change schools. On top of that, Casey the love of her life, the father of her child, the man who said he NEVER wanted to get married or have children, mailed her an invitation to his wedding! A woman on a mission, Sharon is determined to keep Mr. Boyd at arms length until their sessions are over. And survive the next few weeks until Casey's wedding. Especially when the bride that's supposed to go down the aisle is her. But can she sit back and watch the love and family she’s dreamed of having be lost to her forever?

The last two years of Justin Boyd's life has been a living hell. Between his divorce and losing his daughter, it's no wonder his work has been suffering. Then there's the headaches, the trouble sleeping and nothing he's done worked. Until he's sent to the cool and distant Dr. Sharon Cooper. She seems strangely familiar to him and is drawn to her. He's not ready for another relationship, but slaking his lust for Dr. Cooper is a different matter. Will he be able to forgive his ex-wife, heal and realize he's found a second chance at love and family, before he loses it all?

I'd love it if you can comment (if you're able). But would appreciate the votes. Thanks in advance! : https://www.wattpad.com/story/7466662...


message 248: by Kota (last edited Apr 20, 2017 06:38PM) (new)

Kota Jones (kotaj) | 1 comments  photo Seeking Ander copy_zpswiqytjwd.png

Wattpad: https://www.wattpad.com/user/KotaJones

Genre: YA Mystery/Paranormal

Excerpt:
"There was something familiar about his face, the curve of his jaw, the shagginess of his black hair.
My head spun.
"Anderson?" I whispered.
His head snapped up as if he'd heard me from across the parking lot, and his eyes locked with mine. His face was blank, but his eyes widened in surprised. A huge chill ran up my spine, and I blinked.
When I opened my eyes again, he was gone."

Ginny Marshall's life was presumably average until nine short months ago when the first teenager from her high school went missing. In a small town like Brandy Hills, news of a young girl's disappearance spreads like wildfire, and talk of a town murderer leaves the community feeling restless and on edge.

When a second abduction occurs, Ginny finds herself in the middle of a tug of war between her normal life and the edge of sanity as she learns that she's the only one who can see the ghost of the new victim.

With the ever present figure of a teenage ghost named Ander shadowing her, Ginny has taken on the task of finding the town's serial killer and avenging Ander's death in a fight to help him move on. Aided by the help of her closest friend, and Ander's handsome brother, Ginny must catch the town's killer before Ander is lost forever, or someone else ends up dead.


I wrote Seeking Ander a year ago and completely edited it. I am uploading chapters 3X a week but just started. Please check it out and tell me what you think!


message 249: by Kimmarie (new)

Kimmarie (kimmarie211) | 1 comments Started my own story, would love as much feedback as you can give me!

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The meteor will hit, a chosen few will survive, they just need to reach the safe zone.
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Tori's life was normal, well somewhat normal living with a neurotic wannabe super model of a roommate. Then the news hit. It was the end for most of the people on the planet, but there are few that were chosen by lottery.

In walks Nix. He is assigned to take lottery winners to the underground bunker. They will live and survive there. One little problem. he isn't supposed to be attracted to his charge.

A world in chaos, the end is near, is love worth it? Or is it just enough to survive?

Read the Story Here


message 250: by Shelly (new)

Shelly | 1 comments Is anyone interested to read books in Italian?


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