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The Devil's Daughter ~ https://www.wattpad.com/story/3153856..."I'm not going to hurt you," he growls in my ear, “Neither am I going to hand you over to that Bastard.” I flinch at the anger in his voice and confusion rushes through me.
“What?” I squeak, attempting to get air into my constricted lungs. He sighs, the warm air brushing against my neck, sending goose bumps skittering across my skin.
“I’m not going to tell him you intend to escape. How can I when I plan to do the same thing?” My mind whirls as I attempt to understand what he is saying. He wants to escape? But he is one of Lucifer’s most trusted. How does that even happen? He’s lying.
“I’m not lying. I needed him to trust me or I would never find a way to get out.”
“You know a way out? Wait. Did you just read my thoughts? How did you just read my thoughts? I thought you were a shield!” Once again his sigh of exasperation leaves goose bumps on my skin and a shiver running down my spine.
“I am a shield. It just so happens that I’m a reader too. Yes, that is possible. Obviously. Now can I let you go, or are you going to try and kill me again?”
Thrown out of heaven by the whims of a conceited Archangel, Abby must hide who she is from both heaven and hell. Betrayal follows her, the angels are against her and the devil is on her tail. Will she survive to save the world from a war raging between heaven and hell? And in the midst of the battles can she avoid falling for the enemy at her side?
Hi! I'm a new writer and it's a short story that I wrote that is about a song. I just posted all parts of my new story, which is a song call Fifteen by Taylor Swift. It's my first try on writing a story, so it would be really nice if anyone could give me some feedbacks on it so I can improve my stories in the future! :) Thanks in advance!
Here's my story: [Singing Stories] https://www.wattpad.com/story/4861241...
P/S: I'm planning on writing more songs in the future with different writing styles.
primer capitulo de Elemental, mi novela trata acerca de una pequeña niña que tiene un amigo al que visita en una montaña. Durante todo un verano comparten su amor por la naturaleza y el trekking. Luego todo cambia en la vida de Dru, deja de verlo y se aleja de su amada montaña. Siete años despues, el pasado retorna a ella con un reto de vida o muerte. Junto a sus amigos, ella tomara el guante en la busqueda de los siete Portales.https://www.wattpad.com/story/5144880...
So... I'm a Spanish speaker, but since I've been living in the US since I got married, I decided to translate one of my novels. It's not coming out well xD, because my English sucks.
But I'm still trying! =)
So, here's the link. I would appreciate any comment and correction.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/4820478...
This is my first foray on to Wattpad with a contemporary romance (work in progress), The Honey Trap, set in London. Would be very grateful for any constructive criticism!https://www.wattpad.com/story/5285618...
To see a sneak peek of the first 4 chapters of my upcoming Novel "Weeping Well," please go here:Please read, vote and comment. It's much appreciated.
It's a dark-noir thriller with several plot twists and more than one mystery.
Eva loses someone close to her and on top of that she is shipped away but through all the horror and tragedy she finds love.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/5251838...
I would appreciate some comments on my book on Wattpad. It's titled Raging Wolf Power and it is 18 chapters so far. I have written 20,000 words so far. Need feedback from readers please. Let me know what you think and if you enjoy it and why.The story: Becky Simpson meets her new neighbour, Oliver Davies. She becomes curiously and instantly attracted to him. Oliver is a werewolf, but he has kept it secretly hidden from everyone. Becky, also, has a raging illness that she has suffered with all through her life. She wants Oliver to like her and wishes she was normal like any other girl until one day she finds an advert from a doctor who can cure her. When Becky starts to get treatment from a strange lady doctor, the illness disappears, but something else has replaced her illness; A power she cannot understand. She decides to confide in Oliver and tell him everything, but will Oliver tell her his secret or will Becky find out on her own?
Here is the link: https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/20573...
Thank you and I look forward to reading your comments.
I've written a new book and it's called Trinkets. I've only written a few chapters (mostly side chapters) and it's quite a slow start if I have to say so myself. But hopefully you'll like it ^^https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/50899...
Looking for readers and constructive criticism for my post-apocalyptic adventure, We Survivors. :)
Read We Survivors here!
Check out my story "Snowflakes" by isabag
https://www.wattpad.com/story/5650072... A Rose In Black
My Lists
Isabella's life has always been normal.
Until now.
Weird dreams about a mysterious boy keep haunting her, she keeps glimpsing shadows around her wherever she goes, she doesn't understand what's happening to her ...
Every secret that's been hidden will be divulged.
Every lie that's been told will be uncovered.
The question is : Will Isabella be ready to handle everything that's happening around her ?
Will she be able to see her world, and everything she's ever known, crumble to pieces ?
Please check it out
Hope you like it
Hey guys, so I updated my username to Just_Bel. I hope you'll read my stories!
https://www.wattpad.com/199372569-jun...My book is Juniper, based on the story of Tonya Harding's famous sabotage of Nancy Kerrigan, in which Harding sabotaged Kerrigan with the help of her bodyguard, ex-husband, and a hit-man. This story changes the name and the story, but has the same main theme. Join Juniper Keene on her road to the Pyeongchang 2018 Winter Olympics, facing sabotage, injury, and devastation.
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/57183...Transferring my new vampire novel over to wattpad so you guys can read it for free!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/5251838...Eva Murphy loses someone close to her. On top of that she is shipped away and it seems the horror and/or tragedy doesn't seem to end. In the midst of all that she finds love as she comes of age in this dark-noir/mystery thriller starting in 1980s-2008 with an Irish family.
*This story has more than one mystery and has several intricate plot twists. These are only the first four sample chapters, I have uploaded here. There will be no more updates for this story on Wattpad.
To find out what happens next in my novel, readers will have to buy it on Amazon, when it's in it's entirety. "Weeping Well" will be released in Spring 2016. I will announce the specific day of release within that month as soon as it goes live and ready for sale. "Weeping Well is currently being edited" in time for the publication date.
Hey! Check out my story on wattpad. It's Paranormal/Urban Fantasy in the Young Adult genre.
You can read it HERE
My wattpad username is: @RamboRamblerNae
Hey Everyone! Just released the second chapter to my story!!Title: Considered Insane: How They Saved My Live [Not Completed]
Account: DeliciousFicticiousKilljoy
About: An MCR Fanfiction
Book: https://www.wattpad.com/story/6050088...
Just released the third chapter to Considered Insane!! Check my previous comment to see the story!!
Hii! I just finished posting my novel up on wattpad! It was a year long adventure of posting a chapter at a time and to be honest I feel a little funny not having a new one this week. https://www.wattpad.com/94398976-bone...
https://www.wattpad.com/story/4606941...STRINGS ATTACHED
Christina Walker does not know how to react when Theodore Harper arrives at her house. She is both angry and curious. On the one hand, Christina is furious that her mom did not let her know that a stranger was going to live with them for the next six months, especially because he is staying at her room. On the other hand, Christina is very curious to learn more about this boy's past. There is a constant pain in Theodore's eyes that Christina cannot ignore, and there is more to this green-haired teenager than meets the eye. He also happens to have a strange obsession with collecting wires, which captures Christina's attention even more. Will Christina let her walls down, or is she too scared to be hurt once again? Is it true that some people can actually change our lives for the better? Read to find out!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/4606941...
A shy-girl-meets-hot-boy love story
Ava Jensen has always been shy. She has her reasons for it. Starting her first year at Greenwood University, all she wants to do is go to class, study, find a part-time job and maybe befriend her unfriendly dorm roommate.
She doesn't count on meeting infuriating Jackson Powell.
Jackson is confident, outgoing, flirty, and utterly gorgeous (not that Ava notices or anything). He won't leave Ava alone and it's messing with her head. She knows he is just trying to tease and annoy her, and the fact that her heart beats faster around him only irritates her more.
Until it doesn't.
**new chapters updated every week!**
link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/5871879...
wow!! Chapter 10 is up!! I can't believe that I have come this far!!https://www.wattpad.com/story/6050088...
Hello please go read my story. Well, it is just one chapter but I want that people tell me how can I get better or what should I change, because it is my first time I write something.Thank you and have a nice day. :)
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/62456...
Hi.....first time writing a romance only story! Billionaire Story called Knight of Hearts!Summary:
At 22, Ryan Li has six months left to prove she isn't too young to be the General Manager of the Melbourne located Golden Page Hotel. She has worked her arse off for years for her father even when she was studying. To succeed, she needs to close a deal with Leighton International Resorts Holdings.
Francis Leighton is bored with his life. Even though he's hot and knows it, he's tired of the girls he meets in his circle. Tired of them after his money too.
When a fiery little Asian pours wine all over his head, he is both intrigued and bothered, and wants payback. And he knows how to get it. If it wasn't for his brother, he would have never found out how badly she needed his family's business....
Thanks!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/6250019...
Hello fellow writers, I'm a member of both Wattpad and Protagonize and would really appreciate reviews and critiques of my work. Currently a work in progress! 
Dreamscape
Genre: Fantasy
They say that dreams are visions in the brain of past experiences and vibrant memories ... but what if they were doorways to another world entirely?
Welcome to Aster - a world clenched in fear and oppression by Nightmares, cars are nearly a myth, the color blue doesn't exist, and the strangers who constantly appear from a realm known only as the "Otherworld" are just fantasy - or so they say. But when young Alena Pelfrey finds herself unwittingly trapped within, she must join forces with one of the very beings the world so greatly fears - a Nightmare, but one who is a wanted traitor to his kind. Now they, along with a colorful cast of characters met along the way, must work together as they journey to the fabled Edge of the World, for legend speaks of a supposed gateway that lies just over its rim - a way to the Otherworld, and Alena's home. But when plans go awry, Alena is thrust into a chain of events unlike anything the Dreamscape has ever known.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/5378482...
http://www.protagonize.com/author/mal...
Updates every Friday!
Hey, I've written the first chapter for a new short story I'm writing. It would mean a lot if you could check it out and give some advise in what to improve on.https://www.wattpad.com/story/6406556...
Summary:
The White Rabbit. Always travelling from sense to nonsense, reality to fantasy, the natural world to Wonderland.
His travels may seem easy, as all he needs to do is find the rabbit hole to get back. Although one problem is finding the rabbit hole, as its always moving but under the same tree, and secondly, what lies in wait in the hole. For truly, Wonderland is unpredictable and dangerous, so why can't the entrance to Wonderland be just as unpredictable and dangerous?
Heyy eveyone i just wrote my story please check it out :) If you like it please vote thank you :) https://www.wattpad.com/225682501-wai...
Heyyyy everyone I wrote a story please check it out and vote for it if you like it :) Tell me your opinion in the comments if you didnt like something about it :) https://www.wattpad.com/225682501-wai...
Hey guys!! I just started to write my first story! It's called Taking Risks by jords_reads Feeling suffocated by her relationship of two years, Clara is stuck between a rock and a hard place. On one hand she has Riley, who has been with her since she was fifteen. He was her first love, but as their relationship went on, Clara hasn't felt as great as she used to.
On the other hand, she has Garrett. Someone who she meets at a coffee shop and instantly sweeps Clara into a whirlwind of what true love really should be like. The only set back is that he is only around town on what he calls a "vacation", and isn't so willing to tell Clara the whole truth about his reasons for being in town.
Clara has the chance to make a decision that will change her life. She can stay with Riley and accept the mediocre relationship that they lead, or she can take a leap of faith and hope that Garrett will be there to catch her as they have a chance for a deeper connection and romantic relationship. It's up to her whether or not to take the risk!
Read it here:
https://www.wattpad.com/227375999-tak...
Hope to hear feedback from you guys!! Thanks :)
heyyy everyone please check out my story and vote if you like it and want more :) https://www.wattpad.com/225682501-wai...
https://www.wattpad.com/story/6468066...This is my new girlxgirl short story! I submitted it to harmony ink last year for their anthology and it was rejected, but they sent some great feedback and complimented my writing! (which was amazing and very encouraging) so I've decided to share it, finally!
please read, vote, and comment! enjoy!
I have a story I started a while ago called The Insanity Revolutionaries (but clearly that is just a placeholder name, it's too terrible to be final). It's dystopian, and it is about what happens when you try to take away creativity. I will trade a review for a review, or you could just read it. :D Thanks!https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/64569...
Hey this is the link to my page I hope you enjoy my stories I will follow backhttps://www.wattpad.com/user/JoHades
@JoHades
My page is a place for anyone who wants to reccomend, vote or follow! Or we can just chat I'm active and very fun :D I will stalk you if you stalk me too ♡
https://www.wattpad.com/user/Aurrie
https://www.wattpad.com/user/Aurrie
My stories are https://www.wattpad.com/story/6640490...
https://www.wattpad.com/story/3646914...
https://www.wattpad.com/story/6410029...
Please take the time to read my stories I really love getting feedback and it makes me desperate to update
Please check out my story. It is my first one and it isn't finished yet, but I'm working hard on it.https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/67097...
https://www.wattpad.com/story/6753116...Not all poison comes in a bottle. Not all dragons breathe fire.
I've had a fresh start on wattpad and this is my latest ongoing piece!
Title: The Boy in the Bus
Genre: Mystery + Thriller
Description: A mediocre guy, lost in his world of books and people he loves, starts to see the world changing in a way he had always coveted. But with that, come the things he has never even thought of. A tale of love, friendship and murders that revolves around a loser named Danial.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/6738036...
"Her Lovers' Face"Ghosts! Who knew they could be so real? Laryssa could reach out and touch him, run her hand along his face. Everywhere she turned, he'd be there. Even in his death, she couldn't find peace. This was like something out of her worst nightmare, except she wasn't sleeping. She was awake, wide awake, and he was right there in front of her...
https://www.wattpad.com/story/6504525...
The Enchantress (Santanico Pandemonium - Elijah Mikaelson (One Shot))https://www.wattpad.com/story/6841037...
This is a One-Shot Crossover story featuring Santanico Pandemonium from the series From Dusk Till Dawn and Elijah Mikaelson from the series The Originals.
Since time began we have lived in the shadows of the moon, in the blood of the earth. Today, we will rise and the world will be ours beyond dark and light, fire and water - beyond dusk and dawn. - Santanico Pandemonium (first words of s1)
Elijah meets Santanico and is mesmerized by her beauty. He is instantly attracted to her and like gravity she pulls him in her web.
Hi,I'm new to writing & i not only need reads but I also needs comments & reviews, suggestions & feed backs, votes and so much more from you.
So please check out my story and let me know what you think.
I hope that it will sound & be unique & interesting due to the fact that the places described are real in this story - i am trying to be as real as possible so please feel free to assist however you can.
It's a Romance Story :-) & I would so greatly appreciate all the help i can get. Feel free to follow me if you want, I will return the gesture of following back as well as take the time to read your story if need be.
Thanks!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/6291819...
I just published this new book and aid love if anyone could please take the time to check it out. It's a Cinderella Retellings. The book is called Cinderella and I'm really pumped to write it. I'm writing a realistic Retellings series where I take fairy tales and bring them to real life.
The first book is...
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/67500...
I would so greatly appreciate it. I love some comments, constructive criticism as well as votes. Feel free to follow me if you want, I will return the gesture.My novels are part of a companion series, but can be read as standalones.
Changing Me {Finding Us #1} : https://www.wattpad.com/9806608-chang...
Finding the Pieces of Us {Finding Us #2}: https://www.wattpad.com/59950075-the-...
Lost and Found {Finding Us #3}: https://www.wattpad.com/85830049-0-lo...
I startted a new book and I would appreciate feedbacks. It's called dreams.Synopsis:
It always starts with an ordinary girl. Rose Lucy Prell's life was ordinairy not to say plaine. Born and raised in Brooklyn,the only dream she has was to graduate and pursue her studies at the Harvard University. That was before she startes having a bunch of dreams. Dreams that seemed almost real.
Rose's life will no longer be that quite. She will discover a world she never thought could existe.Her new discoveries may shatter the thin walls that were separating both worlds, realeasing some forces that should have never been bothered at first.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/3725939...
quien quiere que suba el primer capitulo de Vestigios a wattpad?
