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message 201: by Suze (new)

Suze | 764 comments Thinking about it, us women should be grateful that men only stand up to pee. I can imagine the disgusting mess if they had to aim while having a poo :-))
I'll really be in trouble now!


message 202: by Suze (new)

Suze | 764 comments You need to post us some new Drabbles to keep us occupied.


message 203: by Michael (new)

Michael Brookes (technohippy) Here's one of mine to tide you over :-)

A Man and his Shed

I like it here in my shed. There are cobwebs in the roof and it’s chilly in winter, but it’s all mine. I can make a brew, read the paper and even have a smoke if I want to. There’s an old comfy chair that I relax in and listen to the sports news on the radio.

I hear horrific screams from outside, people shouting and even loud bangs like gunshots. It sounds like the end of the world has arrived.

I’m safe here in my shed, but I snap the padlock shut on the door just to be sure.


message 204: by Linda (last edited Feb 25, 2014 10:30AM) (new)

Linda Hope you have a toilet in that shed Michael. ;-)

Talking about bruises girls. I think Frenchie may have broken my finger when she twisted it to get me to stop typing. Luckily I can still type with the others. :-)))))


T4bsF (Call me Flo) (time4bedsaidflorence) Frenchie wrote: "A good one. Thank you, Michael. Eternally grateful. :-)

(that'll keep them occupy for a few minutes)."


.....? did you mean Externally grateful??


T4bsF (Call me Flo) (time4bedsaidflorence) Linda wrote: "Hope you have a toilet in that shed Michael. ;-)

Talking about bruises girls. I think Frenchie may have broken my finger when she twisted it to get me to stop typing. Luckily I can still type wi..."


Perhaps if there is a toilet in the shed Frenchie should have written:-

(that'll keep them occupy Engaged for a few minutes).


message 207: by Michael (new)

Michael Brookes (technohippy) Their granny has just died?


T4bsF (Call me Flo) (time4bedsaidflorence) ....but what if his boss remembers that his Granny died last year and the year before??


message 209: by Linda (new)

Linda You are brought into the police station for questioning on Friday because your granny died in suspicious circumstances.


message 210: by Suze (new)

Suze | 764 comments I would. If she doesn't go to work at least one of the days, then Friday won't matter, 'cos she won't have a job there anyway.


message 211: by Suze (new)

Suze | 764 comments Good drabble Michael. Trouble with the good drabbles is, they always leave me wanting more, and that particular one, could be turned into an apocalypse, preferable without the zombies.


message 212: by Suze (new)

Suze | 764 comments Linda wrote: "Hope you have a toilet in that shed Michael. ;-)

Talking about bruises girls. I think Frenchie may have broken my finger when she twisted it to get me to stop typing. Luckily I can still type wi..."


You were lucky it was only one finger. I caught her trying to bribe Linzy, with chocolate, to jump on all your fingers in her 6 inch heels. Luckily for you, Linzy is a pacifist, and refused.


message 213: by Suze (new)

Suze | 764 comments No, don't smoke those. You'll never get rid of the smell. I'll behave now, honest (for the rest of today, anyway).


message 214: by Linda (new)

Linda I'm behaving too!! I promise....


T4bsF (Call me Flo) (time4bedsaidflorence) .....I'm not making promises that I know it would be impossible for me to keep!!


message 216: by Suze (new)

Suze | 764 comments Very good Frenchie, and you can actually see something like that happening somewhere.


message 217: by Suze (new)

Suze | 764 comments T4bsF wrote: ".....I'm not making promises that I know it would be impossible for me to keep!!"

I only promised yesterday. Today is a different matter :-))


message 218: by Andrew (new)

Andrew Lawston (andrewlawston) | 58 comments Blimey - I'm starting my new job on Monday, hope my first week goes a little better than your character's!


message 219: by Andrew (new)

Andrew Lawston (andrewlawston) | 58 comments Cross-mojonations
The Drahvins had the Doctor surrounded. He bolted for the door, but Maaga and her adjutant blocked it.

"You can't resist us, Doctor," they purred together.

The Doctor steepled his fingers and regarded the slim blondes gravely. "Eh? Oh no, my child, I think you'll find that you can't, er, resit me."

He shrugged his jacket to the floor in a single fluid motion...

* * *

Five minutes later, Steven arrived to find the old man virtually naked in a room full of unconscious women. He was bopping quietly and humming something about being lonely.

"Lucky git," muttered Steven.

This was written towards the end of 1999, when Austin Powers mania was in full swing. This drabble was originally posted on alt.drwho.creative, and features the first Doctor as played by William Hartnell, and Steven Taylor as played by Peter Purves, and probably not take place during the adventure Galaxy Four, in 1965.


Orinoco Womble (tidy bag and all) | 2568 comments Very good, Frenchie. Tres a point.


message 221: by Linda (new)

Linda Great Frenchie. Now you have to tell us about poor Grandpa and his fate. I like how you used Banshee lol


 ♕ ❤  ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ (marilyngoodreadscom) MOLLYS NIGHTMARE?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Lights out,tucked up tight,Molly peeped from under the covers.
"Go away,you're not there"!she whispered.
The closet door creaked.Daddy hadn't fixed the lock.
The glowing green eyes were visible through the gap.
Molly trembled and closed her eyes.
Then she felt it brush against her skin.
*Meow"cried Blackcat.
"You naughty puss"said Molly and snuggled up with him.
"It was you hiding in my closet",she giggled before sighing.
As she slept the closet door creaked and glowing green eyes peered through the gap.

"SEE YOU IN YOUR NIGHTMARES MOLLY".
Said the evil green monster


 ♕ ❤  ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ (marilyngoodreadscom) Suze wrote: "Good drabble Michael. Trouble with the good drabbles is, they always leave me wanting more, and that particular one, could be turned into an apocalypse, preferable without the zombies."

Frenchie wrote: "I am not going to post here anymore if I am (nearly) the only one to do so. :-("

That's me too Suze.I don't want to end at a 100 words.:(


message 224: by Suze (new)

Suze | 764 comments Frenchie wrote: "I am not going to post here anymore if I am (nearly) the only one to do so. :-("

Don't be mean. What about the ones of us who want to read your drabbles.


message 225: by Suze (new)

Suze | 764 comments More good ones. I like Mollys Nightmare Linzy, but gonna check my wardrobe before I go to sleep tonight.


message 226: by Linda (new)

Linda Yes Frenchie that really is a bit mean because I like to read your Drabbles and everyone else's too. :-)
Linzy, that was a great one. :-)


message 227: by Emma (new)

Emma (rpblcofletters) I keep wanting to write this! I just have been so busy :P but, finally, it is the weekend!!!!

The Wind

It was a bitter, cold day. The wind whipped at my face and cut it, as a knife would. My scarf blew in the wind, blocking my view for a moment, until it passed behind me.

I heard an old song, as if played on a radio from the '20s. An older car passed by me. Who would listen to that, I asked myself. Never mind. I just had to get to my destination.

The wind going into my face made me gag for a moment. I couldn't breath, but I realized that I had finally come to journey's end.

----

another one is coming!


T4bsF (Call me Flo) (time4bedsaidflorence) PINCH, PUNCH, FIRST DAY OF THE MONTH & NO RETURNS!!


 ♕ ❤  ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ (marilyngoodreadscom) Linda wrote: "Yes Frenchie that really is a bit mean because I like to read your Drabbles and everyone else's too. :-)
Linzy, that was a great one. :-)"



Thanks Linda.I haven't got used to these drabbles yet.I just want to carry on writing.lol!


 ♕ ❤  ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ (marilyngoodreadscom) Suze wrote: "More good ones. I like Mollys Nightmare Linzy, but gonna check my wardrobe before I go to sleep tonight."


Hah..thanks Suze.Sorry if you got the heebie jeebies!


message 231: by ♕ ❤ ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ (last edited Feb 28, 2014 06:05PM) (new)

 ♕ ❤  ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ (marilyngoodreadscom) Frenchie wrote: "Dave wrote: " Frenchie wrote: "A bad week: Thursday morning is my downfall

I ignore the incessant ring of my phone. Grandma died yesterday, it cannot get worse. And I have to get to work.
Other p..."


Frenchie wrote: "Flo, you are 90 words short for a perfect drabble:-)
Well done, you won again and the Dogster bites the dust and loses his dentures!

So, I have to throw my toys out of the pram to get some attent..."



Is that allowed with a Drabble? Cos it's carrying the story on isn't it?
I never knew you could do that.


message 232: by Emma (new)

Emma (rpblcofletters) It's not march here yet, Flo! It's still 8:38


message 233: by Linda (new)

Linda Emma I liked that one. Keep it up :-)


message 234: by Linda (new)

Linda Great I can't wait.


message 235: by Suze (new)

Suze | 764 comments Another good one Frenchie, thank you :-))
I think she should show him the photos, he might just like them.


 ♕ ❤  ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ (marilyngoodreadscom) Frenchie wrote: " ♕ ❤ ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ wrote: "
Is that allowed with a Drabble? Cos it's carrying the story on isn't it?"

As long as each of your chapter is a drabble, why not? Re..."


Yay..love it!


T4bsF (Call me Flo) (time4bedsaidflorence) Ha ha - it's usually the US that's first with everything. lol


message 238: by Suze (new)

Suze | 764 comments That's good Frenchie, but very sad.


message 239: by Michael (new)

Michael Brookes (technohippy) It sounds like she found her own abyss, good drabble.


message 240: by Michael (new)

Michael Brookes (technohippy)

The latest drabble in the Tales of the Imp series has been posted in the Indie Book Bargains newsletter (you can sign up for the newsletter here: http://www.indie-book-bargains.co.uk).

You can also read the rest of the Tales of the Imp here:

http://thecultofme.blogspot.co.uk/p/t...

A Trip to the Doctor

I arranged our second date, an intimate dinner in a fine downtown restaurant. I wanted to taste strawberries again. I didn’t know if I could wait two days, but the Imp convinced me to play it cool and not appear too eager, not yet.

He also told me that I had a doctors appointment. When I arrived the nurse told me they needed a sample and handed me a small plastic bottle. I asked her why I had to pee in a bottle and she looked at me confused.

They didn’t want a urine sample, they wanted a semen sample.


message 241: by Michael (new)

Michael Brookes (technohippy) He's a little rascal :-)


message 242: by Michael (new)

Michael Brookes (technohippy) A sad tale, well written.


message 243: by Suze (new)

Suze | 764 comments I like Life Had Other Plans, and it probably happens more than we realise.


message 244: by Michael (new)

Michael Brookes (technohippy) I saw that one on Drablr and gave it a vote.


T4bsF (Call me Flo) (time4bedsaidflorence) Joe's doing just fine thanks Frenchie - Finished it in my lunch hour today.


T4bsF (Call me Flo) (time4bedsaidflorence) ....go see my review!!


T4bsF (Call me Flo) (time4bedsaidflorence) You're welcome Dave.


message 248: by Michael (new)

Michael Brookes (technohippy) Voted this one as well :-)


message 249: by Michael (new)

Michael Brookes (technohippy) It's a good way to keep writing without putting too much pressure on yourself.


message 250: by Michael (new)

Michael Brookes (technohippy) Frenchie wrote: "Michael wrote: "It's a good way to keep writing without putting too much pressure on yourself."

You are right. I don't think I could stop anyway, I am an addict. But I would like to write somethi..."


An admirable goal - not easy though :-)


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