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Anyone else disappointed about Allegiant?
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Apr 18, 2014 01:12AM

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Here are the ff reasons:
1.) To tell you the truth, I was not upset about Tris' death but the whole book itself. There was an endless list of new characters added from time to time along with their inside stories that makes it so boring. There's Johanna, Nita, Matthew, Rafi, Zoe, David, Mary, Reggie, Amar, Amy etc. And it all comes down with Matthew and Johanna who actually played a significant part for the ending.
2. The book is filled with unnecessary scenes that doesn't contribute entirely to the story. If you would try to omit some of it, it wouldn't actually affect the whole sequence of the novel.
(i.e. When Tobias and Nita visited the fringe)
3. Also, I always get a major headache on grasping the whole GD and GP issue. I just don't understand what they are really planning to do in the first place!!! All the characters have their own solutions in their mind and when they start rejecting the ideas of the other, they tend to come up with a secret agenda which always end up unsuccessful.
4. And the EPILOGUE! Gawd! It was the worst last chapters of my life! I could really imagine myself screaming at Tobias to stop being so overly dramatic (with all his failed suicidal attempt) and to just end his boring narration.
Roth could've just summarized it in just one chapter without all those funeral procession in the zip line thing.
I can't help but compare Tahereh Mafi's Shatter Me trilogy. It was so straight to the point and a real page turner unlike this one.
I was actually planning to give dystopian novels a chance. But after reading this, Allegiant totally ruined it.

"...I was not upset about Tris' death but the whole book itself..."
That's it, really. It's still a bad taste in my mouth, especially since it begun so well, with book 1. It was truly different, and now it's a confusing memory when I join it up with Allegiant, which just doesn't match up. There is just not that much invention. feels like the author lost her own plot.
Or rather, gave up her own for something else.

While I agree with most of your post, Johanna first appeared in Insurgent.

I was really disappointed....
1. She shouldn't of killed Tris off.
2. Why would Tobias even think of forgiving his mom after she abandoned him.
3.There really wasn't anything in their relationship in this novel it was just like they were normal teenager... which was not the case at all.
4. I want to know what would happen if she would of lived.
The concept that I did kind of like those is him spreading Tris's ashes because since she was trying to get him over some of his fears anyway and he just so happens that he spread the ashes with his fear of heights involved.
My grandmother didn't even finish the book... she skipped to the end to see what happens and she didn't want to go back and read the whole thing to just have that happen. Now she doesn't even want to watch the last movie if they make it.

There is also kissing, kissing, kissing and more kissing and more kissing. Yeah last time I checked this is not Fifty Shades of Grey which is an oky book btw.
The two povs is confusing. Honestly I couldn't tell who's head I was reading. Tobias is whinny like a little girl being shit scared of his dad, scared, scared shit. Tris is annoying bitch who wants to punch or threatens someone in every page.
The problem is that this book lacked the brilliance of the first 2 book not the fact that Tris died. Honestly I don't care if Tris dies or lives. I don't care at all. I love Tris in the first 2 books but she's a bitch and an annoying little girl acting like an adult in this book.
I'm glad that she died. Good riddance.
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After reading this book I fired up Fallout New Vegas. I made an NPC mod named Tobias and Tris. I put them in the game and shot them in the head. Good way to kill annoying characters who made me waste my time reading this terrible book.

Sentí tu mismo dolor. Pero tiene sentido. Aún siento algo en el estómago al recordarlo... ;(



I feel like Roth is great at writing intense, action-filled scenes, but other than that it's kind of boring??? I don't know how to explain it. I guess I was generous with the 3 star rating because I loved the characters and universe so much. I was too generous. This last instalment was a let down, I was expecting something big, I was excited to find out what being divergent really meant, but it fell flat. It was underwhelming, as was the rest of the novel :/
Aria wrote: "I hope I'm not the only one, but I felt sort of disappointed in Allegiant. I was so excited for it but it went far below my expectations.
I didn't really care about the ending, but the entire book..."
I totally agree about Tobias being whiny. I much preferred Four to Tobias.
I struggled to figure out what I didn't like so much about this one, and I came to think the thing I liked least about is that it just seemed so laid-back compared to the others.
And the switching between the voice of Tobias and Tris took a lot of getting used to.
I didn't really care about the ending, but the entire book..."
I totally agree about Tobias being whiny. I much preferred Four to Tobias.
I struggled to figure out what I didn't like so much about this one, and I came to think the thing I liked least about is that it just seemed so laid-back compared to the others.
And the switching between the voice of Tobias and Tris took a lot of getting used to.

I didn't really care about the ending, but the entire book..."
I as well was very disappointed by this book. I mean through out reading it I sort of expected it to end the way it did but what I think really piqued me about the book was the fact that Tris in my opinion made dumb decisions. I mean yes she did very noble acts and etc but I don't think she fully evaluated her situations. An maybe that's possibly because she was only 16 but still.

it definitely would had been a happy story without having Tris dead, but if she didn't die, the stroy had to be dragged on and on about their lives and a society that we live now and i will not find that story interesting.
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