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Hello, can you please change my former description to this new one. (No copies have been out and the book hasn't been published yet.)
Book: Maybe Always
(Can you please put the paragraphs as how I have put them. Also keep the first italic paragraph that is already on the original description.)
New description:
Seventeen-year old Gemma Danes and just turned eighteen-year old Aleks Adamovich have been inseparable since the innocent age of four. He barged unexpectedly into her life and hasn't stopped looking out for her since. Even when he was young he was the best looking person Gemma ever laid eyes on and just became more breathtaking every day. Attraction like that flattened out to something more than friendship though, however hard they tried to provoke the feelings they both felt.
When Gemma has a run in with an illegal substance at a party one night, Aleks couldn't hold back from his actions. Desperate not to get caught with Aleks now physically involved, hes not sure if he can stay around his prior life any longer. Gemma has fears about leaving home and Aleks worries about not being able to pursue his dreams. But as hard the choice will be, Gemma knows she will stay by his side through thick and thin. They end up having no other decisions, they’re suddenly on the run, away from their family, friends, and life all left behind in a mist.
With the consequence of what happened with their past chasing them, they have to be able to stay together and hold each other steady and strong, making sure neither of them fall down, no matter what life throws their direction.

ISBN 1492814814 (ISBN13: 9781492814818)
Can anyone recommend how to fix this?
Thanks.
Book: Maybe Always
(Can you please put the paragraphs as how I have put them. Also keep the first italic paragraph that is already on the original description.)
New description:
Seventeen-year old Gemma Danes and just turned eighteen-year old Aleks Adamovich have been inseparable since the innocent age of four. He barged unexpectedly into her life and hasn't stopped looking out for her since.
Even when he was young he was the best looking person Gemma ever laid eyes on and just became more breathtaking every day. Attraction like that flattened out to something more than friendship though, however hard they tried to provoke the feelings they both felt.
When Gemma has a run in with an illegal substance at a party one night, Aleks couldn't hold back from his actions. Desperate not to get caught with Aleks now physically involved, hes not sure if he can stay around his prior life any longer. Gemma has fears about leaving home and Aleks worries about not being able to pursue his dreams. But as hard the choice will be, Gemma knows she will stay by his side through thick and thin. They end up having no other decisions, they’re suddenly on the run, away from their family, friends, and life all left behind in a mist.
With the consequence of what happened with their past chasing them, they have to be able to stay together and hold each other steady and strong, making sure neither of them fall down, no matter what life throws their direction.