NEED FEEDBACK/REVIEWS (will provide free copy)

[Rose]

Hello!
I have a few novellas and a novel published and I'm looking for some feedback before I begin expanding/re-editing the books in preparation for making them available in print.

If you are interested in providing feedback on any of the following, I'll provide a Smashwords coupon so you can download the book to read for free (PM me or respond here and I'll email you the code). NB- They are all standalone/un-related even when part of the same 'series.'

Here are my current books (and a mini-synopsis of each):


Kimberly Jordan never meant to hurt anyone. But once a DNA test reveals her long-time boyfriend Damien is her half-brother, plus she finds out she's pregnant, she will go to any length to hide her horrible secret. Unfortunately for Kent Davenport, he's the perfect fall guy for her plan having recently revealed his love for her. But unfortunately for Kimberly, dirty little secrets always come out.


Chrysalis explores love and forgiveness as the paths of four young people from different worlds--two wealthy, white brothers and a pair of middle-class minority best friends--collide. It is the second in the Dangerous Secrets series: un-related stories involving BWWM romances as well as secrets that can derail or destroy important relationships, personal characters, or entire lives.


Janet Cooper has a hard time getting rid of her ex-fiancé who keeps following her around, begging for her forgiveness. But she soon realizes her troubles are just beginning, especially since her new business partner Eric is an irresistible hunk. As her ex gets more and more aggressive in his pursuit of her, she turns to Eric for strength and friendship, sending her ex into fits of jealous rages. The least of her problems becomes her fantasies of Eric and resisting her urges as she sees that playing with fire could leave her scarred for life.


A Zombie-type plague has broken out leaving Serena locked up, alone, and about to die of starvation. Her husband left to find them food and hasn't returned, but her husband's best friend, Steven, soon shows up to her rescue.
Steven has had a crush on Serena for a while, and at the price of losing his friend, he now has a chance to be with her. Will he take it? Or will they remain 'just friends'?


Brenda hasn’t spoken to her half-sister Rachel since Rachel stole her boyfriend, and six months later, Rachel keeps inviting her over to have dinner with them. Brenda doesn’t want to spend Christmas alone, but then she collides with Alex--a handsome stranger in a coffee shop--and everything changes. Alex could be the answer to Brenda's dilemma...or will he bring more holiday heartache?

Thanks!! :)
-Rose

[Tamekia]

Would love to review- trs166@hotmail.com

[Rose]

Off to message you Tamekia :).

[TB]

the zombie one sounds interesting...

[Rose]

Will message you Lucy. :)

[Kelly]

the first one sounds like a train wreck... terrible but intriguing

[Rose]

Lol. I'm about to pm you Kelly. :)

[Raven]

I'd LOVE to read/review the one about the half-brother and the one about the zombies!

raven.stpierre@gmail.com

Thanks

[Rose]

About to email you Raven. :)

[Dawn]

Rose, I'd be happy to review all of your books. I'm not the fastest reader in the world, but I will review them for you.

[Nekeeva]

Hello would love to review a book for you. Keevab2001@yahoo.com. Thanks

[Rose]

Hi Dawn and Nekeeva!
About to PM/email you guys.
Thanks! :)