Beta/Proof Reading for Romance CLOSED

[S.L.]

This will fall in the category of New Adult.
Word - 78,000
Genre - Romance

Looking for beta readers and proof readers for this story. It was my NANOWRIMO story and the next one I want to pitch to agents of this genre.
Would appreciate all the help I can get to polish it up any advice as well THANKS SO MUCH

Synopsis:


Synopsis:
The back story is in L.A where Lauren and her boyfriend lived. Then there is a tragic accident Matt dies and Lauren is unable to live in their apartment any longer. She moves home to Portland Oregon where the story takes place. She can’t move on, everything reminds her of him. Months after his death she moves home, but things don’t get better. Now she’s seeing Matt’s ghost and thinks she is losing her mind. He appears at random times mostly when she is alone. She can’t help but sense that Matt is trying to tell her something. Just when she thinks everything is starting to look up and she is having fun with old friends and meeting new ones She meets a guy. Mason Foster, the millionaire bachelor with a bad reputation. Everyone knows Mason and his one night stands after one night stands. It’s secret that is unique baby blues steal the hearts of every woman in town. However, Lauren finds him rude and uncouth and it’s obvious he cares only for himself. Until his eyes fall upon Lauren, the girl from his childhood. As Lauren discovers that Mason grabs her attention, despite all his best efforts. Lauren loves to hate Mason and vice versa. But a new boy comes to town, Mason’s older brother from Seattle. Turns out he is a lot easier to get alone with and also easy on the eyes. Nick doesn’t hide that he adores her leaving Lauren torn.

Who will she end up with?

Read and see!

Thanks again. Please reply to this thread or inbox me if you are interested. It will be in Adobe format.

Sabrina

[Sandra]

Sabrina,
I am so interested! This sounds like a great story. unlike any romance I've read so far. My email address is Sandi.howard82@gmail.com. Can't wait to read it.

Sandra

[S.L.]

awesome I will send it over!

[Hayley]

Hi S.L.
I'm just wondering if you're willing to discuss payment or if you're just looking for casual feedback. I do quite a lot of substantive editing/proofreading and I'm (admittedly) cheap, but if I offer to do it for free I find I'm not motivated enough. Just curious. http://hayleylinfield.webs.com/editin...

Either way, good luck with your novel. It sounds fun!
Hayley

[Geri]

I am very interested in this. richngeri@gmail.com

[S.L.]

sending it on over Geri. hope u enjoy it.

[Cynthia]

Sabrina
First let me say what a good read this was. I have just sent it back to you with notes in side the download. I also put my review in the body of the email. Which I would be glad to post if you do put this book out. I thank you so much for letting me read and proofread your book. I really enjoyed reading this. Not your everyday romance that is for sure. I feel that is one of the reason people will love this book, along with the humor it is outstand!

You have a wonderful night, off to bed I go or I will never make it to work tomorrow. I just could not put this book down.
Cyn

[S.L.]

Cyn wrote: "Sabrina
First let me say what a good read this was. I have just sent it back to you with notes in side the download. I also put my review in the body of the email. Which I would be glad to post if ..."

THANK YOU so much CYN for the kind words. I am so glad you enjoyed it. I am looking forward to reading your email.

Thanks again

Sabrina

[Kylee]

Hello S.L.! I would be interested in beta/proofing this book for you! I like the snippet above and am intrigued! If you are still looking for some help, feel free to email me! kylynn81@yahoo.com

Thanks!
Kylee

[S.L.]

thanks Kylee I will send it over. :)

[Andra]

I would gladly assist in beta reading :)

Andra Weis
mommy_to_zoe@hotmail.com

[S.L.]

no problem ill send it over

[Desiree]

I would love to beta/proof your story if you are still looking. desputaki@yahoo.com

[S.L.]

absolutely. with that being said I think after Desiree I will be good for the beta/proof reading. I can make all the changes needed and start hunting for an agent.

thanks to everyone to has or will be helping me out in the process. I have yet to do my dedications and acknowledgments in my novel ;)