Alternate Ending

[Jennifer]

Mital wrote: "The factions could proceed, but I don't think it will be the same as it was when Tris was an initiate. Changes would be made and it could work, but with a lot of changes. It would be good if Tris s..."

Yes this is totally what I wanted, I loved the faction system and as soon as that dissolved at the end of Insurgent I was very sad although I wanted to know what happened . Also I think it would have been interesting if the last book was written in Tris's daughter's or son's perspective ? it would have been interesting to see what happened after Tris's generation, or maybe even a small short story

[Jennifer]

Mary wrote: "After Four leaves Tris' body, a medic from the Bureau puts in an iv line, warms her body, and she revives from the coma she was in from the death serum. He wipes off the makeup used to create her ..."

Interesting but farfetched