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message 1: by s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» (last edited Nov 24, 2013 09:35PM) (new)

s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» | 102 comments Like aftershave, but for character profiles.

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๖ۣۜSαᴙαh ๖ۣۜMᴄĄłłiƨʈeʀ (inked_chinadoll) Emma, in Sif's profile Actual Age should just be: Between 1500 and 1700 (so no commas and remove extra words). In Anubis's just remove the commas.


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» | 102 comments Sarah: Yuèliàng Chang'e

The goddess is named Chang'e, so would you list that name rather than Goddess of the Moon for the section Goddess?


๖ۣۜSαᴙαh ๖ۣۜMᴄĄłłiƨʈeʀ (inked_chinadoll) s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» wrote: "Sarah: Yuèliàng Chang'e

The goddess is named Chang'e, so would you list that name rather than Goddess of the Moon for the section Goddess?"


Done.


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» | 102 comments Also, Vanth is Vanth, rather than Keeper of Fate. (Though you may want to mention that little detail in Other, your choice.)


๖ۣۜSαᴙαh ๖ۣۜMᴄĄłłiƨʈeʀ (inked_chinadoll) Okay and for Lugh? Should I just make him Lugh?


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» | 102 comments If that's the name the mortals know him by, yes.


๖ۣۜSαᴙαh ๖ۣۜMᴄĄłłiƨʈeʀ (inked_chinadoll) Ah, I get it now. Gotcha. Sorry for the mistakes.


message 10: by ๖ۣۜSαᴙαh (new)

๖ۣۜSαᴙαh ๖ۣۜMᴄĄłłiƨʈeʀ (inked_chinadoll) Emma, Aphrodite's age should have the lesser number listed first.


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