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[☮HayleyMariie←♥]

YAY!!:)I cant wait!!:)
O im working on my new chapter lol:)

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

yay goodie

[☮HayleyMariie←♥]

:)well i gtg but i can still text my mom is nagging me to get off:(but ill b on later

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

for anyone whos reading my story i changed rachels hair to blonde

[☮HayleyMariie←♥]

awsome:)

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

yup, almost done with this chapter

[☮HayleyMariie←♥]

YAY!!:)

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

yeahh, its so easy to write, when i know whats going to happen, and i dont have to think of it right on the spot

[☮HayleyMariie←♥]

o its different 4 me sorta lol:)
its easy 4 me to write but sometimes i get distracted so it takes me a while:)

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

done, its posted, and i get distracted easily thats why it takes me a while

[☮HayleyMariie←♥]

yeah me too:)

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

lol

[☮HayleyMariie←♥]

lol:)

[Aj]

Rebecka wrote: "lol"

is the new chapter posted???????

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

yes sir

[☮HayleyMariie←♥]

haha yeah imma reading it right know:)

[Aj]

u are so mean...

[☮HayleyMariie←♥]

lol:)haha
i finished it and of course i loved it!!WRITE MORE!!:)

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

i will later i have alot to do right now

[☮HayleyMariie←♥]

ok:)
so whats everybody been up to??

[☮HayleyMariie←♥]

Has anybody read my story besides Rebecka,Rachel,Mindy and Sophie??

[Aj]

i will today....

[☮HayleyMariie←♥]

cool thanks
soooo what cha been up to??lol:)

[Aj]

haha...nothin....and you?????

[☮HayleyMariie←♥]

o nothing either just excited 4 my bday next week lol:)

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

hii

[Aj]

hi...

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

im tierd, sigh i wanna write more, but i dont wanna use my brain power

[Aj]

haha......

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

yeah, im going to get what i have so far reviewed so i can fix my mistakes before i continue, then ill ask my reviewer to review it every like 7 chapters

[Aj]

nice.....how many chapters do you wanna have????

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

well im most likely going to attempt to make a series, so how ever long until i can find a good cliff hanger to piss everyone off

[Aj]

haha...can i claim your story??????

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

no. u can review it, but u cant claim it, i want someone random to

[Aj]

okay.....haha.....

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

=) and if u do review it , you have to use the numeric rubric thingy i like it better that way

[Aj]

ugh......confusing!!!!!

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

no actually its easy thats what i did

[Aj]

haha....well....where do i get it from????

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

hold on ill post it

[Aj]

k.

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

Numerical Review Rubric

[Introduction:]


Plot: /50
[Why you graded them so:]

Description: /40
[Why you graded them so:]

Character Development: /40
[Why you graded them so:]

Twists & Effect: /40
[Why you graded them so:]

Dialogue & Emotion: /35
[Why you graded them so:]

Mechanics: /35
[Why you graded them so:]

Originality: /10
[Why you graded them so:]

Overall Score: /250


Notes:
[Here, you will provide any notes on what they did well, and what they need to improve on.:]


[Signature:]

[Aj]

ok...i will do it later...and will post it tonite...

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

kk well i gtg 4 now buyy

[Aj]

bye

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

anyone one?

[Sophie *Ninja Rapunzel*]

rebecka..u still on?

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

yepp

[Sophie *Ninja Rapunzel*]

wat r u up to?
im at school atm and i hav to go soon

[Rebecka, main mod =DD]

nm getting all my stuff together for camping again, i added anothe chapter to my story