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Hi Lina,Are you willing to pay for beta-reading/editing services? I'm an editor and I don't charge a lot (far less than most) but I would charge something. If you think it's a possibility let me know and I'll edit a sample for you for free so you can see if you're interested in my services.
hlinfield@me.com
Hayley Linfield
Title: Teacup Rebel
The story is set in a world where countries have been disbanded. It is a world without belonging, without religion, and without culture. The council rules, and the council members are the ultimate ambassadors of democracy and peace, except for Chibis.
Chibis look like humans and speak likes ones, but they could fit in the palm of your hand, like moving Barbies. That’s what they are: things, entertainment, and the all around pets. They have no rights or will of their own. Tatsuo, the hero is the story, has lived all his life in a cage, and he is sick of it.
On the other hand, Nouri, the heroine and a blogger with 5 million subscribers under her belt, wishes for her own cage. Cages keep you safe, and she likes ‘safe’ and ‘comfortable’.
The story unfolds after she buys Tatsuo and dresses him in purple pants and a fish net.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
I would really appreciate you honest opinions. You can find the first chapter at the link above. I’ve already finished chapter 2 and starting chapter 3.
Let me know your opinions about the writing style, grammar, characters, and plot. All opinions are welcomed, even harsh ones.
Thank you all in advance.