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notyourfriend
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Aug 03, 2013 02:54PM

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Make them longer! Some are like " _____ laughed." There's no details in that comment, nothing you can really do with that. Instead do something like: "_____ laughed, his/her corners of ____'s mouth crinkled in smiles, and his shoulders heaved from how heavy _____ laughs were." Not that much detail but try for something a bit more details. I've been on GRs for about a year now so i'll give tips!








she started it, i'm simply saying what i'm saying because SHE wanted a fight.

Why THANKS for caring sooo much for MY well being.

