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message 301: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I nearly leaped onto the roof when I heard him snapping my gaze to him my eyes widened my hand flying to my heart, "dear god! You scared me half to death," she growled since I have always hates being scared make me feel weak but at the moment I was... His soul has helped but the poison had taken a major toll on me... That's when what he said sank in and I raised an eyebrow wondering why the hell her cared them remember cause apparently my possessed daddy wanted me, I rolled my eyes at my thought before slowly walking over to him studying him carefully before saying anything, "I will be alright," was all I said since it was all I positively knew..


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I looked at her, my eyes somewhat wide in amazement since she was surprised. I didn't knew how much weird it's going to be. First me almost giving my fricken soul to her, than my smiling at her and now this. Seeing her totally surprised although helped my mood and I chuckled lightly, "never imagined a death dealer jumping at the slightest of suddenness." I said, my eyes twinkling with amusement. "We are in the house of a person I knew in China although I don't think we will be here for long, the king is cruel who demands questions from new comers." I told her about all the other things and than looked outside, taking all these natural things around me. Ancient China was so different from Rome. It's all about nature here. I snapped my gaze out from my thoughts, "so you must have realized that we have to work together now, despite the differences." I asked her simply.


message 303: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I gave him a look, "half death dealer need I remind you, goddess's can be frightened.. Sadly their weak pathetic things," I stated with a roll of my eyes tho I knew I few goddess's that were tough as nails but I was dishing that burn on goddess's like Hera and Aphrodite... The Pansy's... "And on my defence I had just been poisoned I am out of sorts," I pointed out then looked at him questionable, "in which case... Why had you allowed me to take a piece of your soul?" I asked thoroughly confused now, "you could have gotten a random bystander it would have satisfied me all the same not to mention it would have been less difficult since mortal souls don't fight as much," I said raising an eyebrow at him getting a bit too close before glancing around smiling, "you mean emperor right? The emperor rules in ancient china, women cannot battle and men were forced to become soldiers.... A time now long forgotten," I whispered looking in awe at the scenery, "well your friend had a most delightful garden:.. I've never seen anything quite like it," I whispered yes in acting weird I can't help it, my defences are down cause they took too much energy to keep up but his next statement caused me to snap my gaze at him, "no I have not come to that, you may say the my father is possessed but why the hell would he be after me? You have not explained that and until you do I won't move a finger to help you," I stated harshly...


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I chuckles clearly amused by her, "yeah yeah half, but still goddess. " I stated simply and looked around the scenario, because it gives me energy, time to refill my lost part of the soul. I snorted at her statement, "bystander wouldn't have worked, poison was deep in your soul, and it may have helped you to survive but you would have been weak to fight if time comes." I explained and exhale a heavy breath and saw how close she was, but I wasn't really cares, she will be last girl I'll do. I nodded in response, still admiring the scenario, "yes emperor is cruel and I'll definitely tell him what you just said, It's really a nice view from here." I said walked outside, gesturing her to follow me.
We were now roaming from a little late time and I formed a circle of magic around us, so that no one can't hear or see us. I turned to have a look at her, "they needs you to teleport the demon here, since you're the only half goddess and half death dealer, so they are after you. Your body in the beginning will work as a portal, than he will be inside you, being a possesser of death command you are the only one who can carry the weight of him. and when he will gain his full powers than boom !!!! your body will explode." I said, knowing that my words were little creepy.


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message 306: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I glared at him, "I haven't been a goddess in a long time since my father disowned me... Don't even bother telling me to value that self cause I don't and I won't," I stated simply before rolling my eyes at him, "you know nothing about the extent of my abilities do not pretend to know otherwise or I'd beat you to the pulp," I hissed at him almost into his ear... Before i stepped away snorting again, "you realized you called the emperor a king which was so incorrect I don't think you'll be saying anything to him besides the fact everything I just said was true," I snapped again easily getting angered by him I hesitated to follow him not wanting to he near that asshole but with a heavy sigh I followed him and as he talked I gave him my best 'your and idiot look' and rolled my eyes I waited till he was done before talking, "you imbecile, you realize because I'm only have goddess I can't teleport, not even a pencil so my body as you say is useless..." I stated


message 307: by [deleted user] (new)

I snorted at her, getting really annoyed by her attitude, she obviously doesn't know even shit. I turned to her, my eyes narrowed, "you keeps on saying about beating me, but I'm telling you that one more time and you will die, if you haven't forgotten I'm the one who saved your ass, otherwise you would have been dead and rotting in hell." I snarled at her, feeling totally out of controll of my anger management but I have too control it, otherwise I will just turn into that monster which I don't wants to, not right now.
I glared at her, being called imbecile. "you calling me imbecile and who is having imbecility attacks, if you didn't listened it, I said he will teleport in your body, not you. Your body is a portal because It's strong, your powers and your mental stability out of every mortal and immortal women, since only women can be use for rituals, I know you can't teleport but he can. so you do as I says, I'm not stupid I'm following you, hell I don't even wants to be near you. and if you don't believes me than go as far as away possible and than chants the old witchery spell of evil from the davidian text." I hissed through my clenched teeth, pointed at her chest and vanished from there, teleporting few miles ahead from her. It was a dare, if she doesn't believe me than she will chant the song and the demon will know where she is.


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message 309: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I refused to take his bait I stayed silent glaring at him and sighed in relief when he disappeared... God finally give me mercy at last! I couldn't stand another second with that ass hole.. Glancing around I smirked and began walking again, not even bothering to wonder what stupid witch chant he was fucken talking bout... Did I look like a fricken witch to him?? He's shut an idiot! I continued to walk around ancient china thankful of its nature based beauty trying to figure out how to get out of this time she back into my own...


message 310: by [deleted user] (new)

I was waiting for her, stiil pissed by her thick head but kept my calm.
I still didn't knew why I saved her ass. I would have let her die and than she itself would have known how the demon would have claimed her body and consumed her. Hell !! I itself would have offered her body. to get on his side. I was totally stupid that I'm saving her. There's nothing I'll get by saving, in fact I have to bear her stupid self, who's so self possessed that she thinks that she is inevitable.

I teleported to her, and smirked at her. before I started to chant that ancient spell as the sky started to turn into black and a storm started, although the spell as only 5% completed but I can sense tyre evil in the air and the fear which it was injecting into atmosphere.


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message 312: by [deleted user] (new)

knock knock :P


message 313: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) As he got lost in thought about how amazing I am.... I was busy fighting to the death with a crazy beast... Literally of course.. And cursed my luck... I leaped out of its way as he when through the fragile wall and he roared in his rage... I got into my stance waiting for him to come attack me again... Knowing he would to defend his honour... How he found me I could careless as long as I didn't die.... The beast came out again shifting into a tiger and growls at me which I smirked at making it impossible for him to not try and attack me..


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I stopped only when the chant was 20% completed since Gabriel has made pain shoot through my brain. I was here to save her and Gabriel was keeping an eye on me. It was weird seeing Gabriel really wants to save one, when all she cares about was death of human.

I grabbed my hairs and tried to fight the pain which was running in my head, destroying every nerves in its way, You're here to protect her and if you fails to, You will be the first to die voice boomed through my head like millions nuclear bombs has exploded in my head and after that it was gone.

Although the pain was still there and I fixed my eyes on her. She was fighting a hound, shape shifter, which had arrived because of the chant.


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