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message 251: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I strolled turning sharply left suddenly not knowing why before I came upon the colosseum once again staring at the huge beautiful structure for a while before I started approaching it, might as well watch something in Sabrina's place...


message 252: by [deleted user] (new)

I frowns, thinking why she is entering colloseum. It was beautiful but right now we don't needed it. We needs to find a way to stop all the things. I ran and stood in front of her, my arms folded over my chest and face still. I still was an apparition, since I was above her head, floating and keeping an eye on her back and front, so as to protect her from the lying unknown danger. "we needs to talk,no matter how much you wants to kill me."


message 253: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I froze blinking before glaring up at him, he was in my way, "and what would you have to talk about besides my father being possessed and partnered with some of the worst demons and such of all time that are apparently after me for no fricken reason," I snapped glaring at him my eyes narrowed in an angry expression my lips pursed before stiffening...


message 254: by [deleted user] (new)

I rolled my eyes at her,slightly amused by her words. "I never said that your partnered with demon, I said he is controlled by him." I retorts at her. "I know we both can't stand each other but we both know each other," I said,trying to keep my voice as low as I can.


message 255: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I Rolled my eyes before looking at him hard, "Pish-posh, tomato tamato," I snapped waving my hand not really caring, it wasn't my duty to baby sit my father.. "I don't know you, hell I don't even want to see you, so saying we can't stand each other is the most ridiculous understatement in any century! Now get out of my way," I growled glaring darkly at him:..


message 256: by [deleted user] (new)

I laughed, a fake one covering my mouth, "ohhh what a cool sense of humor you have." I said with a roll of my eyes. "I don't even know you and like you already said that I can't stand you either. But we needs each other, to cross different timelines we needs each other since we came together, and we goes there. besides I'm having the feeling that the demon will know, or already knows where you're and where I'm." he said in a casual tone but nonetheless stepped aside. "if you wants to leave you can." I said without any emotions or expressions, it was just a blank statement.


message 257: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "Yes amazing," I replied rather dryly listening I him while looking at him impassively, "and yet there is absolutely no reason for it to be after me in the first place! So maybe it's after you so your fucking with all this," I pointed out before slipping past him and entered the colosseum heading to a seat...


message 258: by [deleted user] (new)

I rolled my eyes when she left, she totally is unaware of the situation. I followed her into the colloseum and sat on a seat. "I know there is no reason but I have to be after you since I have been ordered." I said in a little defeated voice, my eyes on the arena, where few people were fighting and killing each other, without showing no mercy whatsoever.


message 259: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "Lucky you," I replied dryly, the only I replied to that as I say down and watched my expression impassive as I watched the brutal display that the Romans found oddly enjoyable, but it was my element, killing... Killing for survival... The worst drastic way to kill...


message 260: by [deleted user] (new)

I chuckled, my eyes fixed on the stadium watching them kill each other and realized one thing that the world in 21st century is a giant colloseum, where everyone's fighting each other, to survive and to gain control over others. This is the brutal truth of the society, the ultimate weapon to survive and be the someone with power and control over others. He shook his head, thinking why he was thinking all this about reality and stuff, since he is doing the same, killing people, humans,demons and every other species to get money.


message 261: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) While he was fixated on the games I had snuck away seeing someone that I know would cause me trouble later on... Kane... I was out of the colosseum and on the streets before the he could even notice and was walking after Kane slowly before I froze loosing sight of him before I felt a pair of arms wrapping around me from behind and I froze waiting before flicking out my blade as a husky low voice hissed into her ear, "hello little death..."


message 262: by [deleted user] (last edited Oct 08, 2013 09:15AM) (new)

Ifrit was lost in his thought when she left, but since it was just an apparition because my real body was following her from the sky. I say her following him but didn't bothered her, if she wants to think that she can run away than let her think that,I can't help that.
I was just planning to hover in the air and keep an eye on her but than a man, heavily built caught her and he can feel the dark energy radiating from him. I sent my another apparition and it appeared in front of him and flicked a finger which caused him to stumble away. "don't cross the lines, which you're not mean to." the apparition hissed in anger.


message 263: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((Dude ya took my character.... Kane was from earlier on... A demon...))


message 264: by [deleted user] (new)

((you should have told mee.....))


message 265: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((Its implied I did have him say stuff in my post))


message 266: by [deleted user] (new)

((o.k sorry so I edited my comment...))


message 267: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kane's hold didn't loosen he was demon after all and only took a stumbled step backwards bring me with him... I glared at him wondering why the hell he couldn't leave me the fuck alone, "get lost Ifrit," I hissed viciously before jabbing my dagger deep into Kane's stomach digging it in deep before grasping his arm and flipping him over me releasing him as Kane slammed onto the ground hard on his back, the force causing the groin below him to crack... Before I was over him pinning him down with a dagger at his throat while he tried to gain his breath back glaring at me furiously, "you should begin learning Kane, you don't fuck with me," I hissed before my eyes began to glow and I bent over pressing my lips to Kane's sucking in deep as I drew out a part of his soul, drawing it into my mouth....


message 268: by [deleted user] (new)

I glared at her, not knowing what her problem is, I was just trying to help her nothing more than that but I think she doesn't needs one. I watched her with bored eyes as she stabbed and pressed lips to his,knowing that she is sucking her soul, but people were watching now,she had created a scene now, outside the amphitheater. I just kept on standing there, waiting for her to finish, my arms crossed over my chest.


message 269: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) When I was done with Kane I released his unconscious form and stood blinking my eyes to crease it from glowing before I stalked away slinking into the crowd so I wouldn't stand out to the rest tho my hair colour didn't help... I continued walking knowing he'd find me but it for once wasn't him I was walking away from it was my instincts yelling at me to go back and finish Kane off......


message 270: by [deleted user] (new)

I kept on standing there, not really knowing what to do, since I don't needs to follow her to keep an eye on her. I was doing it from above, so I leans against a wall and stares at the guy with an amused expression, pure guy gotten his ass kicked by her. I know he wasn't dead because she hadn't taken her soul completely.


message 271: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) When he doesn't follow me I smirk.... But that's when shit happens... Something opened in front of me, like the thing that got me transported here in Ancient Rome in the first place sucking me in until I could do nothing else but let myself be sucked Into it..... Everything went dark...


message 272: by [deleted user] (last edited Oct 09, 2013 05:45PM) (new)

I was still watching her and saw the time portal opening, I didn't knew what to do. I was a little out of ideas, since she surely doesn't needs my help as she keeps on saying. I shoot myself towards her, with the speed of a normal bullet and when I reached the portal I was getting sucked into it. I hates this feeling but I have to endure it because of her. Than I was on the ground with a thud.


message 273: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Derp


message 274: by [deleted user] (new)

((lolz....but I thought that I'll puts Sabrina and Estella in action and plus I wasn't sure if you wants me to follow or not....otherwise my first post was that he was sucked along with her too....derp....))


message 275: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((Hmmm too tired to think... >~<))


message 276: by [deleted user] (new)

((It's ok love....take a little more sleep or I'm.Skypeing you.....honestly...))


message 277: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((Not Estella, or Sabrina they busy... Estella is getting her soul sucked away from her while Sabrina goes to save her... The next time you meet Estella she will not be the same... (You cannot change this, this is ancient history that needs to play out)))


message 278: by [deleted user] (new)

((oooh ok...well ahhh demanding you...:P than I needs to edit the comment.....please when you're planning something discuss it with me on kik :):):)))


message 279: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((Erm mmmm well ookay but the Estella thing it's been going on for a lot of other posts!))


message 280: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I was on the ground... In ancient china wearing my roman attire and completely unconscious...


message 281: by [deleted user] (new)

((ahhh I see.....don't worry...))


message 282: by [deleted user] (new)

I looked around and realized that It's China, ancient China. Great !!!! now another crazy country to endure. I grunted and saw her laying on the ground and she was unconscious, I smiles a little since it was a treat to watch her quiet for a little time. Than I moved and puts my hand on her shoulder and started shaking her.


message 283: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I didn't react to his shaking completely out cold, unable to wake up oddly trapped in a black abyss of my mind....


message 284: by [deleted user] (new)

I, at first thought that she blacked out only because of the time travel but it was deep, and I can't let her do that. It will make her vulnerable and easy to be captured by them. I changed, half form, still human with fire arms and puts it on her forehead, trying to give heat and magic, to her.


message 285: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I suddenly shot away from him eyes wide and I screamed flipping onto my back while it my back arched up as I began clawing at my throat totally freaking out...


message 286: by [deleted user] (new)

I threw up my hands, and looked at her with confusion, although it was a treat to watch her scared by something. I smiled for a moment and than turned back to my human form and crossed my hands on my chest, "you really have a good friendship with time travel."


message 287: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I was able to compose myself a bit enough to choke out, "no you idiot, Kane's soul had been poisoned," I growled before I collapsed and paled even more staring lifelessly up...


message 288: by [deleted user] (new)

I frowns, not knowing what to do, poison souls are almost incurable. But if she dies, than everything is fine, no than they will just use her dead body. Shit !!!!! I growls and opened he mouth slightly and locked it with mine, so that she can suck a part of my soul.


message 289: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) My eyes shot open when oddly his mouth narrowing my eyes before I clamped my hands on either side of my face pulling him a bit closer knowing I only had one chance at this before I just was ended as I dug my nails into his skin closed my eyes and focuses on pulling a part of his soul from him drawing it from his mouth focusing on using all her energy on this...


message 290: by [deleted user] (new)

I groaned in pain when she dug nails into my shoulder and started sucking the part of my soul. Than the pain started, which wasn't a physical pain, if it was physical than I would have bear it, but it was deeper than, more than anything could be. My soul was protesting, trying to stick to my body but my lack of willingness let it be suck and I closed my eyes shut, pinning her on the ground with my hands and my claws like hands already implanted in her shoulder. When she was finished, I felt a hollow in me, like there is a deep gorge or hole but I knew that it was the part of my soul which was missing. Her hands released me I just sat there,unable to move for a little time.


message 291: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I felt his soul resisting but I didn't have time so I made it more forceful painful... Usually feeding was pleasurable to the other but desperation made her messy and not very carful... When I finally got a piece I released him and collapsed completely to the ground heaving breath having no feeling in my body or in my mind as I stared lifelessly at him...


message 292: by [deleted user] (last edited Oct 10, 2013 06:31PM) (new)

I was still breathing heavily, trying to compose myself but it wasn't easy after getting a part of your soul sucked by someone, so I kept on looking at the ground, thinking if I have the power to speak or not. I opened my mouth and a dust came out,which I realized was ash from the fire which I can breath out. I closed my eyes momentarily and spoke, "are you alright ?" not bothering to glance up.


message 293: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I could tell it took a toll on him but knew that it was partly my fault but his as well he was the one that kissed me first! But luckily I managed a weak, "fine," as I struggled to stay conscious staring at him as a distraction...


message 294: by [deleted user] (new)

I nodded at her, "you needs rest," I stated firmly, since she was really weak and if it wasn't for her stubbornness about running away than she wouldn't have been like this. I rubbed my lips where it was clamped on her, feeling an odd sensation of sucking.


message 295: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I only groaned in response, "we're in another time and a different place it is not the time or place to talk she whispered softly her eyes slipping close....


message 296: by [deleted user] (new)

I snorted in response, "I know we are in different place and time," I said, rolling my eyes, anyone can know that we are in ancient China. I walked upto her, but she was already asleep.


message 297: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I didn't wake up for awhile but when I eventually did they snapped open and I bolted up... Knowing I had been moved since I was on a very weird bed... And I was wearing some sort of ancient women's dress robe that was silver with golden markings on it... I smiled slightly since I totally pulled off the tight fitting outfit and flicked out a fan a mischievous smirk appearing on my lips... This was going to be fun...


message 298: by [deleted user] (new)

~~~~~


message 299: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((Derp face))

I then stuffed them away and kicked off the fucking annoying shoes deciding to go bare foot and exited the room glancing around the hall before walking out of the tiny building glancing at the gardens and smiled... Why was it always so beautiful in the ancient times? Shaking that thought off I left there to begin exploring since this was one place I hadn't shown up at once ever in my life...


message 300: by [deleted user] (new)

I was standing in the door, waiting for her to wake up, after I have refilled my energy level and my every power was working, about which I was thankful. I wouldn't have imagined if I would have lost any power even those ones which I don't uses.
I saw her walking outside and I for the first time genuinely smiled at her, which contained no fakeness. "How you're feeling now ?" I asked, although I doubts that she will be answering me if anything else.


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