شعر و شاعری

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Sohaib wrote: "Well the thread was made under specific rules... and fazool comments will just hide the actual topic under discussion... Mein Shari parhnay aaon dekh kar k itnay comments hain and jab kholon tau pt..."

im not interested in any other threads jha dill krna bolny ka wha bol dya.or jo fzool cmnts nzr aye skip kr do or prh lo 'shair' its really simple.

[[deleted user]]

whatever.

[Nadeem]

Jab naam tera pyaar se likhti hai ungliyaan,
meri taraf zamane ki, uth ti hai ungliyaan (for AHEM AHEM :P )...

Pallo sanam ka hath me, aaya tha ek pal
us ek pal se aaj tak, mehekti hai ungliyaan....

jab se bichde ho tum sanam,
tab se...tumhare aane ke din, ginti hai ungliyaaan...

PATHAR TARAASH KAR hai bana TAAJ ek naya....
FANKAAR ke is jahaan me, KAT TI HAI ungliyaaan !!!

[Preeshay]

zarnab!! everything' set na jani...?

[[deleted user]]

Preeshay wrote: "zarnab!! everything' set na jani...?"

ji ji bilkul.

[Preeshay]

i mean.. its not ur type...

[Sohaib]

Aadamii aadamii ko kyaa degaa
jo bhii degaa vohii Khudaa degaa

Mera qhatil hii meraa munsif hai
kyaa mere haq mein faisalaa degaa

Zindagii ko Qariib se dekho
isakaa cheharaa tumhein rulaa degaa

humse puuchho dostii kaa silaa
dushmanon kaa bhii dil hilaa degaa

ishq kaa zahar pii liyaa “Faakir”
ab masiihaa bhii kyaa davaa degaa

Poet: Sudarshan Faakir

[[deleted user]]

Nadeem wrote: "Jab naam tera pyaar se likhti hai ungliyaan,
meri taraf zamane ki, uth ti hai ungliyaan (for AHEM AHEM :P )...

Pallo sanam ka hath me, aaya tha ek pal
us ek pal se aaj tak, mehekti hai ungliyaan...."

WTH!!this thread is getting on my nerves.me out.

[Nadeem]

hahahahaha :P

@zarnab... i thought u were a FIGHTER :P
u disappointed me :( :( :(

[[deleted user]]

aj nai kal lrna:P kbhi kbhi insaan nawaz shareef b bn jata hai hr wqt IK nai:P

[Nadeem]

whoaaaa....she is humourous too :P

[[deleted user]]

hahahahaha!:P yar tum pagal ho?:P

[Nadeem]

sometimes :)

[Sohaib]

Kisi se koi khafaa bhi nahi raha ab to,
Gilaa karo ke gilaa bhi nahi raha ab to,

Chunnay huye hain labon per tere hazar jawab,
Shikaayaton ka maza bhi nahi raha ab to,

Yakeen kar ke jo teri aarzu mein tha pehle,
Woh lutf tere siwaa bhi nahi raha ab to,

[Azhar]

Mohabbat mein gham ye kiya kam hai
K mera sanam hum-jins-parast hai...

:D

[Shehzad]

@Azhar- haha

[Sohaib]

@Azhar hahahah... koi haal nhn ;P

[Nadeem]

Na ShOuq E Deedaar,, Na FiQr E Judaai!!!

Waah !!!Kya Naseeb Hai Unka, Jo Mohabbat Nahe Karte...

[Nadeem]

Khud ko tum pe VAAR dete hai...

Aaooo, Tumhara SADQA utaar dete hai !!!

[[deleted user]]

Yeh jo hamdard milty hian na...
Yakeen mano!
Inhi se dard milty hain.

[Shehzad]

@Zarnab- nice play on words

[[deleted user]]

im so intlgnt:P

[Shehzad]

Kaise kaise aese wese ho gaye,
Aese wese kese kese ho gaye :-P

[[deleted user]]

hahahhahahahah meri nkl:P

[Umair]

Ki Muhabat tou siyasat ka chalan chor diya
Hum agr ishq na karty tou hakomat karty...

[Aakash]

Mein koi aag nahi, aanch nahi, dhoop nahi...

Pir Q tum paseeny mein sharaboor hui jati hon?

Jaun_Eliya

[Nigham]

Dabby(box) may dabba, dabby may cake,

Meri saheli lakhon me aik... :D

[Maryam]

na tha kuch to khuda tha, kuch na hota to khuda hota

daboya mujh ko honay ne, na hota main to kia hota

'Ghalib'

[Aakash]

Hum kafiron k kafir, Kafir Khuda hamara,
tahuheed k qail hai, Wahid Khuda hamara!

(iqbal)

@nigham best verse ever :3

[Nigham]

Aakash wrote: @nigham best verse ever :3"

Haha! B| XD

[Aakash]

@nigham lol :D





Yani tum Wo ho waqi? Had hai

Mein toh such much mein Sabhi ko bhool gaya?!!

Jaun_Eliya

[Fatima]

Nigham wrote: "Dabby(box) may dabba, dabby may cake,

Meri saheli lakhon me aik... :D"

hahaha. nigham! that's my type Ov poem! :P *glad, you shared something real that i can relate myself with* ;)

[Nigham]

@Syeda- Haha! I'm not really in to the poetry unless I'm really sad and kinda dukhi... :D

[Faheem]

رسم الفت سیکھا گیا کوئی
دل کی دنیا پہ چھا گیا کوئی

تا قیامت کسی طرح نہ بھجے
آگ ایسی لگا گیا کوئی

دل کی دنیا اجاڑ سی کیوں ہے
کیا یہاں سے چلا گیا کوئی

وقتِ رخصت گلے لگا کر داغ
ہنستے ہنستے رولا گیا کوئی

[Faheem]

دل کے ڈھرکنے کا سبب یاد آیا
وہ تیری یاد تھی اب یاد آیا

آج مشکل تھا سنھبلنا اَے دوست
تو مُصیبت میں عجب یاد آیا

دن گُزرا تھا بڑی مشکل سے
پھر تیرا وعدہِ شب یاد آیا

تیرا بھولا ہوا پیامِ وفا
مَر رہیں گے اگر یاد آیا

پھر کئی لوگ نظر آئے
پھر کوئی شہرِطرب یاد آیا

حالِ دل ہم بھی سُناتے لیکن
جب وہ رُخست ہوئے تو یاد آیا

بیٹھ کر سائہِ گل میں ناصر
ہم بہت روئے وہ جب یاد آیا

[Aakash]

Hum toh wo hai ju Khuda ko bhool gaye!!

Tu meri Jan'n kis Gumaa'n mein hai...

#jaun_eliya

[Foaad]

Loat aao
k
muntazir hay nigah
is se pehlay k
loh e qismat par
bab e ulfat tamam ho jae
is se pehlay k sham ho jae
haha

[Aakash]

Kiya Kaha Eshq Javidaani hai!!

Akhri baar mil rahi ho kiya??

[Mehwish]

''Ye zindagi ek nasha hai,
Iskey jeenay mei ek maza hai''

[Faheem]

میں کیا کہوں احباب کیا کارِ نمایاں کر گئے
بی اے کیا، نوکر ہوئے، پینشن ملی اور مر گئے

[Foaad]

Hamara dil savere ka sunahra jaam ho jaye
Chiraghon ki tarah aankhen jalen jab shaam ho jaye

Kabhi to aasman se chand utre Jaam ho jaye
Tumhaare naam ki ek khubsoorat shaam ho jaye

Ajab halaat they yun dil ka sauda ho gaya akhir
Mohabbat ki haweli jis tarah neelam ho jaye

Samandar key safar mein is tarah awaz de hamko
Hawayen tez hon aur kashtiyon mein shaam hojaye

Mujhe maloom hai uska thikana phir kahan hoga
Parinda aasman chhune meinjab nakaam ho jaye

Ujale apni yaadon ke hamare saath rahne do
Na jane kis gali mein zindgi ki shaam ho jaye

[Aakash]

ajab halat hamari ho gayi hai

ye duniya ab tumhari ho gayi hai

[BintiAbdulWasay]

Foaad wrote: "Hamara dil savere ka sunahra jaam ho jaye
Chiraghon ki tarah aankhen jalen jab shaam ho jaye

Kabhi to aasman se chand utre Jaam ho jaye
Tumhaare naam ki ek khubsoorat shaam ho jaye

Ajab halaat th..."

really nice poetry, esp this one .. !

[BintiAbdulWasay]

here's my share to 'sher o shayari' mehfil :D


bhari mehfil mein tanhai ka aalam dhund leta hun
jahan jata hun apny dil ka mausam dhund leta hun

akela khud ko jab mehsus kerta hun kisi lamhy
kisi ummeed ka chehra koi gham dhund leta hun

boht hansti nazar ati hein jo ankhein sar e mehfil
mein in ankhon k pechy chashm par num dhund leta hun

galy lag ker ksi k chahta hun jab kabhi rona
shikasta apny jesa koi humdum dhund leta hun

calendar se nahin mashroot mere raat din Sajid
mein jesa chahta hun wesa mausam dhund leta hun


Aitbar Sajid

[Aakash]

BintiAbdulWasay wrote: "here's my share to 'sher o shayari' mehfil :D


bhari mehfil mein tanhai ka aalam dhund leta hun
jahan jata hun apny dil ka mausam dhund leta hun

akela khud ko jab mehsus kerta hun kisi lamhy
kisi..."

wo bhi manzil talk pahounch jata

Us ny dhoonda nai pata mera :p
jaun eliya

[BintiAbdulWasay]

Aakash wrote: "wo bhi manzil talk pahounch jata

Us ny dhoonda nai pata mera :p
jaun eliya "


Apna pata to us ne dia tha mujhy Mohsin
Main khud he kho gaya to ye mera naseeb tha. :P

[Faheem]

Khuda ke dain bhe ajeeb hia, isi ka naam naseeb hia
Jese tu ne chaha wo mil gya, jisy main ne chaha wo mila ;)

[Riz]

ہر حقیقت مجاز ہو جاے
کافروں کی نماز ہو جاے
دل رہین نیاز ہو جاے
بے کسی کار ساز ہوجاے
منت چارہ ساز کون کرے؟
درد جب جاں نواز ہو جاے
عشق دل میں رہے تو رسوا ہو
لب پہ آے تو راز ہو جاے
لطف کا انتظار کرتا ہوں
جور تاحد ناز ہو جاے
عمر بے سود کٹ رہی ہے فیض
کاش افشاے راز ہر جاے

Faiz Ahmed Faiz

[Aakash]

Ta'jjub hai ke Ishq o' Aashiqui sey...!!!
Abhi kuch Loag Dhoka kha rahey hain...!!

jaun XD

[Nigham]

Ajeeb hoty hain ye aadab-e-rukhsat-e-mehfil,

K uth k vo bhi chala jis ka ghar na tha koi!