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message 101: by [deleted user] (new)

han wo spontaneous oveflow of inner emotions hota hai idiot!:P


message 102: by Sohaib (new)

Sohaib | 6884 comments Jo hota hai use spontaneous overflow kehtay hain?? ;-P


message 103: by [deleted user] (new)

Tumhy kiya hota hai?:P han pagal logo ko lqwa tk ho jata hai:P hahaha:P


message 104: by Sohaib (new)

Sohaib | 6884 comments hegehehe.... @Zarnab u wid know... coz of ur firsthand experience ;-P


message 105: by [deleted user] (new)

Mjhy kbhi lqwa nai hua unky to hont e ik side pe ho jaty hain mere salamt hain!mro ja k!:P mein mareez nai!:Phaha


message 106: by Sohaib (new)

Sohaib | 6884 comments bwahahahahaha


message 107: by [deleted user] (new)

btmeez:P


message 108: by Rao (new)

Rao Javed | 713 comments Zarnab wrote: "Rao wrote: "mere mahboob kayamat hogi

aaj rushwa teri galiyo me mohobbat hogi

meri najre to gila karti hai

tere dil ko bhi sanam tujhse shikayat hogi."

Yeh to gana hai with honey singh's raping..."


No its a song of kishore kumar, is distorted by Honey Sing
.


message 109: by [deleted user] (new)

Pta mjhy jaan k lgi thi:P@rao


message 110: by Sohaib (new)

Sohaib | 6884 comments @Rao actual meaning "haww ye tau kishore kon hai?" ;-P:-D


message 111: by [deleted user] (new)

Pta mjhy kon tha wo bnda:P smjh ayi:P mene tumse phly ka yeh gana suna hua jb tum peda b nai thy huay ho gy:P


message 112: by Sohaib (new)

Sohaib | 6884 comments hmm... very true.. afterall aunties know best ;-P


message 113: by [deleted user] (new)

Aunty ji aunty ji get up n dance:P haha:P gana hai hafiz ji:P


message 114: by Sohaib (new)

Sohaib | 6884 comments bwahahaha... aik dafa sirf pehla shair suna tha aur phir fobara sunay ki himat nhn howi :-P


message 115: by [deleted user] (new)

Hahahaha:P sachi tum ganay b sunty ho?:P konsy walay?:P wo ishq jo hum se rooth gya?:P haha:P


message 116: by Preeshay (new)

Preeshay (goodreadscompreeshay_pari) Yahan hr shaks hr pal haadsaa honay sy drta he
Khilona he jo matti ka fana honay sy drta he
Meray dil k kisi konay mein ik masoom sa bacha
Barhoon ki dekh kr duniya bara honay sy drta he
Na bas mein zindagi is k na qaabuu mout pr iska
Mgr insan phr bi kab KHUDA honay sy drta he
Ajab ye zindagi ki qaid he k duniya ka Hr ik insaan
Rehaayi maangta he pr rehaa honay sy drta he..!!


message 117: by [deleted user] (new)

@pareeshay:so beautiful and touchy:)


message 118: by Preeshay (new)

Preeshay (goodreadscompreeshay_pari) @zarnab thnx:)


message 119: by Shehzad (new)

Shehzad | 648 comments @Preeshay- beautiful! Reminded me of "zindagi se darty ho".


message 120: by Preeshay (new)

Preeshay (goodreadscompreeshay_pari) @Shehzad thnx n yeah i ve read that also one ov my fav.:)


message 121: by Shehzad (new)

Shehzad | 648 comments @Pareeshay- Yes, it's really thought provoking as is the one you posted. Thanks for sharing it :-)


message 122: by Preeshay (new)

Preeshay (goodreadscompreeshay_pari) my pleasures..:)


message 123: by [deleted user] (new)

Bachi check kr jiggar:P hahahahahhahahahhahaha:P i mean shair chk kro shehzad:/..tongue slip:/:P

Dill k tukray tukray kr k ....
Chal dye:P

hahahhaha:P


message 124: by Shehzad (new)

Shehzad | 648 comments @Zarnab- haha keep an eye on your slips...
Hum wafa likhty rahy wo jafa perhty rahy,
Aik nuqty ny humen mehram se mujrim kr diya

quoting from memory, if there's a mistake, kindly correct it :-P


message 125: by [deleted user] (new)

Meri to memory mein b nai:P haha:P

Dbay mein dba,dbay mein cake
Piyaari Zarnab lakho mein ik:D:D

hahahahhahahahahahhaha:P


message 126: by Preeshay (new)

Preeshay (goodreadscompreeshay_pari) "Hamaray intikhaab ka miyaar chahay kuch bi ho

Jisay hum chahein gay, usay bay misaal kr dein gay..!!"


message 127: by Sohaib (new)

Sohaib | 6884 comments Shaam Ko Yun Teri Palkon Ka Larazte Rehna,
Doob Jaye Jo Ye Manzar To Baraste Rehna,

Teri Adat Wahi Har Baat Adhuri Karna,
Aur Phir Baat Ka Mafhoom Badalte Rehna,

Aaj Se Seekh Lia Hai Ye Tarika Humne,
Bujh Bhi Jana To Barri Dair Sulagte Rehna,

Janey Kis Umar Main Jayegi Ye Aadat Meri,
Roothna Tumse To Auron Se Ulajhte Rehna...!


message 128: by Shehzad (new)

Shehzad | 648 comments Beautiful poem Sohaib


message 129: by Sohaib (new)

Sohaib | 6884 comments thanx Shehzad


message 130: by [deleted user] (new)

kidhr se beautiful!munafiq yaar ki bat kr rha tha sohaib:P kutto pkr k asay bnday ko:P haha:P


message 131: by Sohaib (new)

Sohaib | 6884 comments @Zarnab jealous much?? :-P


message 132: by [deleted user] (new)

Je..l..o..u..f?s?kiya?mjhy to word b thik se nai ata mene q jls hona?:P haha:P


message 133: by Preeshay (new)

Preeshay (goodreadscompreeshay_pari) hum ny kaati he aisay shab e zindagi
hum ny aisay uthaya he baar e wafa
sar py kaalay andheray barastay rahay
aur Jannat nashinoun ky is shehr mein
ROSHNI k lye hum tarastay rahay...!!


message 134: by Sana (new)

Sana | 1515 comments <3


message 135: by [deleted user] (new)

Ek Hunar Hai Jo Kar Gayaa Huun Main
Sab Ke Dil Se Utar Gayaa Huun Main

Kaise Apnii Hansii Ko Zabt Karuun
Sun Rahaa Huun Ke Ghur(refined) Gayaa Huun Main

Kyaa Bataauun Ke Mar Nahiin Paataa
Jiite Ji Jab Se Mar Gayaa Huun Main

Ab Hai Bus Apna Saamnaa Darpesh
Har Kisii Se Guzar Gayaa Huun Main

Voh Hii Naaz-O-Adaa, Voh Hii Ghamze
Sar-Ba-Sar Aap Par Gayaa Huun Main

Ajab Ilzaam Huun Zamaane Kaa
Ke Yahaan Sab Ke Sar Gayaa Huun Main

Kabhii Khud Tak Pahunch Nahiin Paayaa
Jab Keh Vaan Umr Bhar Gayaa Huun Main

Tum Se Jaanaan Milaa Huun Jis Din Se
Be-Tarah, Khud Se Dar Gayaa Huun Main

Kuu–E–Jaanaan Men Sog Barpaa Hai
Ke Achaanak, Sudhar Gayaa Huun Main

Its not by any great poet but read it randomly His name is Saif something:P..but alaa!


message 136: by Sohaib (new)

Sohaib | 6884 comments Zarnab i think shaer ye shair likh kar khud bhi dunya se guzar gaya hoga ;-P... but very very good poetry.. thanjs fpr sharing :-)


message 137: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol just noticed that i shared sm kinda SERIOUS poetry:P

I dnt know:P im feeling guilty k copy paste krny se phly naam thik se prh liya hota ta k behara kahi famous hota:P


message 138: by Preeshay (last edited Aug 06, 2014 10:35AM) (new)

Preeshay (goodreadscompreeshay_pari) "mere kuch lafz aisay hun,
jo apni band ankhon sy
tere dil ki har ik tehreer parhtay hun
wo hon to lafz hi lekin
wo ik taqdeer rakhty hun
kabhi jo rooth jao tum
na muj sy maan pao tum
to
phir tum ko manany ki
wo har tadbeer rakhtay hon
MEre KuCh LaFz AiSay hOn..."


message 139: by Faheem (new)

Faheem  (faheeem) | 1597 comments Mod
Sohaib wrote: "Bacha shareef ho sakta hai but nafs nhn :-P.. especially daav parhne walay ;-P"

Deekha jo teer Kha k Kami.N Gah ke traf
Apne he Dost se Mulakat ho gai :P

Shehzad wrote: "@Faheem- :-) the wine analogy was apt. As for as comparison is concerned, you committed that "sacrilege" when you used the word legend, dividing poets into legends and non-legends :-P"

Nope, you can't pull me into it. :)


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message 141: by Preeshay (last edited Aug 07, 2014 02:24AM) (new)

Preeshay (goodreadscompreeshay_pari) u know what Zee its been one ov my favrts for long without Background:)...


message 142: by [deleted user] (new)

1:Utha k airyaan chlny se..qad nahi brhta
Mere raqeeb se kh do apni hd mein rhy..:P

2:Nasmjh e rehty to theek tha
Uljhny brh gyi hain jb se smjhdar huay:P

3:Kaash dilo k b election hoty
Mein dhandhli kr k tumhy jeet leta:P


message 143: by Amir (new)

Amir Hassan | 196 comments chalo aao kaiynaat bant lain,
tum meray baqi sub tumhara.


message 144: by Preeshay (new)

Preeshay (goodreadscompreeshay_pari) "tumny dekha he kabhi Chand sy girta pani,.,

mein dekha he ye manzar apna munh dhotay huay..."
:D


message 145: by Shehzad (new)

Shehzad | 648 comments @Zee - beautiful poem ! Thanks for sharing it

@Preeshey - :-P


message 146: by Shehzad (new)

Shehzad | 648 comments Un k liye eham, aur wo bhi hum,

Aey dil-e-nadaa(n)...just shut up!!!


message 147: by Shehzad (new)

Shehzad | 648 comments @Zarnab- The choice of words may not be very poetic but the ideas are :-P


message 148: by [deleted user] (new)

Tum critic na e bno:P


message 149: by [deleted user] (new)

Muddat hui hai yaar ko mehman kiye huay:P

Yeh ik line Ghalib k shiar ki prhi puri ghzl sr se guzr gyi mtlb ki bat yaad rhi:P hahahaha:P

@shehzad: yeh tum khud bnaty ho asay shair ya koi specific site hai?:P


message 150: by Preeshay (new)

Preeshay (goodreadscompreeshay_pari) " Agar wo chahay to bhar dy Samandar ko suraahi mein
ulat dy phir suraahi to samandar hi samandar ho
Bazaahir jo Qalandar he haqiqat mein Majaawar he
Usi par Ishq sajta he jo andar sy Qalandar ho..!!"


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