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Bad Language In Books...


I find the books more interesting, and I also agree with that comment.




That is true, kids and teens do swear nowadays. So why try to hide that in books? Portray teens how they really act or talk. I'm not saying they are bad, I just mean a lot of them do cuss, hey, even adults do.
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The placeholders instead of cussing would get annoying...it's like when the radio edits a song...that makes me angry.
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That's true, I would expect to see some cussing, sex related issues, drugs, etc. I just don't know about overly using cuss words, like on every page.
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Everyone has different opinions. Mine is that swearing is totally unnecessary in any book, and will put off certain readers. Why put it in, if you don't need it?
Johanna ღ♣✽Hobbit and Proud✽♣ღ wrote: "Everyone has different opinions. Mine is that swearing is totally unnecessary in any book, and will put off certain readers. Why put it in, if you don't need it?"
I agree
I agree

Thanks for your comment, Johanna. I appreciate everyone's different opinions. It gives me lots to think about. c:

Are you writing another book and need opinions on what to add to it?"
Yes, I am currently writing another book. I know exactly what direction I am going in with this book, I just wanted to basically the majority of how people felt about bad language...I have gathered so far that it is somewhat of a touchy subject with some poeple, but that the majority doesn't mind bad language at all. So, I have decided to keep the bad language to a bare minimum. If I get to a point in my book where I need to add it, just because it goes with the moment, then I will, but I do not want to over do it, especially since there are some out there that don't like bad language in books at all. In the end, I will have to make the decision based on the moments and my characters. c:

Thanks Jasmine, for your comment. I like that you mentioned how it makes you think that the author is trying too hard when they use bad language in their books.

Are you writing another book and need opinions on what to add to it?"
Yes, I am currently writing another book. I know exactly what direction I am going in with this b..."
I think it really depends on the characters. Some characters are meant to swear because that's how their personalities are (just like people in real life). However, having everyone swear the entire book really bothers me.

Are you writing another book and need opinions on what to add to it?"
Yes, I am currently writing another book. I know exactly what direction I am go..."
Thank you for your comment, Irene. I appreciate your input. I would most likely get annoyed with that too, Irene.

Are you writing another book and need opinions on what to add to it?"
Yes, I am currently writing another book. I know exactly what dir..."
It's one thing if the swearing is for character development but another if they are swearing just to swear.
It depends on the character's personality and the situation. Nothing is more annoying then when there's unnecessary swearing - when the characters swear just to swear - but it's also annoying when the words are replaced with things like 'freakin'' and 'holy hades' (as someone said earlier in the discussion). I agree, teenagers do swear in real life so it CAN make it more realistic, but most times teenagers aren't realistic in novels because of the authors' failed attempts at the teenagers' speech and lingo and swearing.

Thank you, Alex for your comment. c: I appreciate your input on the question I posed. I like that you voiced your opinion honestly. c:
Authors have to make characters realistic. It isn't realistic that the gang member is going to say "Oh my goodness". It just isn't. Characters have to be believable or else it ruins the magic.
I'd rather they'd keep it a minimum.
I'd rather they'd keep it a minimum.

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Haha, that is rather true :)

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Thanks for your comment, Harry - The Knight Errant. I like how you said it would ruin the magic. A book has to feel like magic when you read it c:

Otherwise, I might write that a character swore under his/her breath without actually have the character swear. No one has complained about that, but a few readers (usually adults :) ) have complained about the few swear words in that one book. Most, however, are okay with it, since it's not gratuious.

Otherwise, I might write that a character swore under..."
Thanks for your comment, Ann. I like that you mentioned how some readers felt when reading your book with the swearing in it. I am glad they didn't give you hate for putting some swearing in it. I mean, there will always be someone that is picky with things, but if it is a once in a while swear, I think it is okay especially when it goes with the characters.


I have nothing against swearing, but unnecessary swearing gets on my nerves. This character is not in a stressful situation. They are not undergoing serious emotions. They simply threw it in there for no apparent reason. If that's the character's persona, to swear randomly, then fine. But don't have the clean-cut character suddenly, out of the blue, scream code red profanity. It needs to be realistic. People swear. Some choose not to. Some are so innocent they don't know such words exist (bless you and your purity). Get a good mix in.



Well sometimes it helps with the charater's personality. Have you ever read the House of Night series? There's a character, Zoey, and she doesn't cuss, she says bullpoppie, stuff like that. But Like I said, I find it adds to character if used properly.

Hmm difficult sell, I have a character that says "blasted" and "damn" but that's honestly part of his character. All my other characters use swears that are indicative of the world they come from, but in real life no one would bat an eye at the words. Then again my book kind of crosses age ranges from childrens to teen.



My work had some slight language edited out along with a love scene deemed "too hot" for YA. I don't really mind taking it out. Overall, I think they were right.

It has to fit. That is an important point.
It seems like sometimes it is put in just to be there when it doesn't have to be. I think writers sometimes get caught up in how they perceive teenagers. Or, if they happen to be around some that talk that way and they think, "That's just how teenagers talk."



That's just me though.

However, I don't think that the middle level books (example: Diary of a Wimpy Kid, Percy Jackson) should have swearing in them because younger children read them and if they are exposed to those words too much, they will start to say them.
Its okay to say them in YA/Teen books because teens obviously know these words aren't appropriate and they may or may not be in an environment (school) where a lot of their peers use those words.


but can some one tell me that the romance in YA novels is too much or just okay? and the violence too.

I agree. I do get a little put off if too many curse words appear in a short space. I have stopped reading books if I see too many. It's a personal preference.
I was wanting to pose a question to all concerning bad words in young adult books...
I know there are a lot of books out there with naughty words in them, but do the majority of readers mind bad words? Does it make a book more interesting? Does it throw the book off for you? Does it make the characters seem cool? Can there be a "cool" young adult book without the hardcore cuss words?
What are your opinions? Cuss words, mild once in a while cuss words, or none at all for young adult books? c: