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Isabella
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Dec 17, 2020 08:12AM

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I see no issue with the use of bad words in books. As long as it makes sense and it's part of a character's personality. If it's constant and by everyone then it's just bad writing.






I want to [REDACTED] and [REDACTED] him. Seriously, I hate him so [REDACTED] much. Oh, I really do hope that he is [REDACTED] by his [REDACTED] and [REDACTED] [REDACTED] [REDACTED].
I really don't mind. Also, if it is used in a context I normally wouldn't look over, some serious consideration about stopping the book would occur.


There are many ways to complete that sentence, and you actually don't even need to complete it! But I'm trying to make a point, so here are two examples of that sentence completed:
What the cheese?!
What the h*ll?!
Which one is more dramatic? Which one would best be used to get the character's astonishment, anger, or any number of other feelings across?
In my opinion, the second one would do that better, and I would be perfectly happy with it being used. Or any other cuss word. Now, it's an entirely different story if the characters are constantly cussing. Like, they can't go a whole sentence without adding in a cuss word. That I would hate. But other than that, I'm good with this aspect of a book.

A good way to think about it. Too much ruins the stew. And of course, it can be seasoned with other things. But sometimes salty language is just what is needed.



I wrote a book that was filled with F-bombs, and as much as the readers liked it, I had some comments about the swearing in my reviews. As a result, I took out most of the swearing and the story still works.



BAT POOP CRAZY SHUT UP





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