need reader for YA fantasy

[Bonnie]

Hi everyone,

I have a fantasy that has been edited several times and proofread by two other writers and is ready to be submitted to publishers. However, I'd really like it to be read by readers familiar with the young adult genre. Please let me know if you're interested.

Ciao,

Bonnie

[Sue]

I would be interested Bonnie. What format will you send? Mobi or pdf? Personally,mobi works better for me on my KINDLE FIRE. Or can you send me a complimentary copy in exchange for review in regular postal mail?

Let me know and then I will give you my info.

[Bonnie]

Hi Sue,

I will format my DOC X file into a Moby and a PDF and send you both. That way you can use whichever suits you best. This is an unpublished book. It has been proofread and edited several times with feedback from other writers (not young adults).I'm looking for a different kind of feedback before I begin submitting to publishers. I'm not sure if the timeline is suitable to young adult readers the book begins when the protagonist is fourteen years old and ends when she is much older. I also have an ending which I dropped and am wondering if I should add back. I will included and ask you if you think it should be there. Thanks ever so much for doing this.

Ciao,

Bonnie

[Sue]

Sounds like something I will definitely enjoy doing for you Bonnie! My email address is spilski@rocketmail.com
What's my time frame?

[Bonnie]

No hurry. I will get it together and send it to you soon. Thank you.

[Melissa]

I'd love to if you'd like multiple readers. I will say that I'm 27 and though I consider myself to be a young adult.... lol. I am a young adult reviewer/blogger though. I'd you're interested I'm happy to help. Congratulations on the book!

[Bonnie]

Hi Melissa,

I would love to get your feedback on the two possible endings. That would be great if you would read it. My email is b.ferrante@tbaytel.net if you would like to send me your email address.

Ciao,

Bonnie

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Bonnie
if you still need some feedback I would be happy to read the manuscript.
email:redtide@rcn.com
I have a kindle so that's a mobi file.
mel

[Monica]

Hello,
If you still need readers/reviewers, I'll be available shortly.

I prefer mobi but can do pdf also

email catya77@yahoo.com
Cheers,
Monica

[Bonnie]

Thanks Monica. I'll email it to you right now.

Ciao,

Bonnie

[Shannon]

Hello Bonnie! If you are still looking for reviewers I'd be happy to read your novel. I read mostly YA fantasy novels. My email is maechlingsl@yahoo.com. I'd prefer PDF. Thanks for the opportunity!