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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

If you could change or add something to any of the books, what would it be??? It can be something small, or something huge. I would want to hear more about Emmett's past because they don't really talk about that much.


message 2: by Karina (new)

Karina I'd change the entire anything to BD but if that wasn't possible then I'd like to hear more of Emmett as well.


message 3: by Stephanie, Loves Vamps and Werewolves but Zombies scare me!! (new)

Stephanie | 4175 comments Mod
Oh yeah Emmett is my all time fave!!


message 4: by Sherry (new)

Sherry (ninneschong) Nessie's name. It's atrocious. I suppose Edwardina would have been worse, but not by much.


message 5: by Stephanie, Loves Vamps and Werewolves but Zombies scare me!! (new)

Stephanie | 4175 comments Mod
Lol...me to!!! I hated that name!!


message 6: by Sharda (new)

Sharda | 558 comments True.Original as it is, i think the name is one of the reasons that 'Nessie' isn't as real for me as the other characters. I can't even bear to bring myself to write a story with her in it although i've been asked multiple times.I think the baby spoiled the book for me. the idea was too absurd and made the book sound like a baaaad fanfic.

And i think there should have been a book on Edward.Even though most of it would be painful, he's a better character's mind to read about.Don't get me wrong, I liked Jake's contribution but i would have LOVED to read from EDWARD'S pov instead.

And I think the battle scene could have gotten a bit more heated without having to kill any more characters off, as she said. The peaceful ending was like revving up a really powerful sports car...then to chug down the road at 5km/h

Anyone else agree with me?????


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

I DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


message 8: by Stephanie, Loves Vamps and Werewolves but Zombies scare me!! (new)

Stephanie | 4175 comments Mod
VERY TRUE!!!!!!!


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY?!


message 10: by Sharda (new)

Sharda | 558 comments Um, tell him off for what exactly? Plz dont go picking on Jake ppl.he's cool cool....Of course he can NEVER be better that my EDWARD but......he's really a grt friend. :)


message 11: by Mikayla (new)

Mikayla | 76 comments (I hope if people are on here they've already read all the books. But if not-this contains spoilers)

"Original as it is, I think the name is one of the reasons that 'Nessie' isn't as real for me as the other characters. I can't even bear to bring myself to write a story with her in it although i've been asked multiple times.I think the baby spoiled the book for me. the idea was too absurd and made the book sound like a baaaad fanfic."

Yeah, Nessie wasn't very real for me either. Her character didn't flow with the rest of the books. It was too out of place. And Jake imprinting on her?!

I would like BD to be different. The first half of the book was really good, although admittedly, different kind of from the style of the other three books. But the second half of the book I can't stand. It's ridiculous. Because they all lived WAY too "happily ever after"
Because of these reasons:
-Renesmee's character in general. It didn't fit in well.
-Bella as a vampire. She was also too unreal. She didn't have ANY of the normal problems that new vampires are supposed to have and instead she had special abilities..AND a daughter. No, she was not meant to be a mother, and I don't think her role of one was very convincing
-Jake imprinting on Renesmee. What is with that??
-The Volturi. They are supposedly merciless, and always win, and always get their way. So why are the Cullens the one exception to that now? So what if the good-vampires side listed a couple of good reasons why they shouldn't be attacked? The way the Volturi were portrayed, should not have allowed for that.
-"And they all lived happily ever after" EVERYTHING feel into place, everything had a perfect conclusion ending. I like happiness, and I like happy endings, but I like more to be left with a feeling or a hope that things will work out more then when they shove it right in your face and say it all worked out perfectly

I really did like the first half of the book and the other three books a ton. But it seemed like this one, for the 2nd half, it like wasn't the real story, more of like a fake happy ending, that made it seem less realistic.




message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

You're right. It just seemed that everything was kinda thrown together and like you perfectly stated "It all worked out perfectly" The only reason I'm glad Jake imprinted on Nessie is that he stopped drooling after Bella.


message 13: by Mikayla (new)

Mikayla | 76 comments Which was like pretty much the main point of two of the other books so it was kinda stupid to lose it so suddenly and ungracefully then.


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

I know right?
It was just like I said. All thrown together


message 15: by Sharda (new)

Sharda | 558 comments TOTALLY agree with u all there!!!!!1



message 16: by Natalia (new)

Natalia (natcullen) | 43 comments I would change the part when bella kissed jacob seriously.I hate bella in that part!because she got Edward but she also wants Jacob.When you have Edward you dont need anyone else!!!!!!!!!


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

I know! I mean she was like get away from me you jerk and the next min. she was kissing him. WHAT ABOUT EDWARD! Edward is her life and her his. how could she even think like that. I gotta say, try telling your kid you kissed her boyfriend, twice. Sorry Nessie!


message 18: by Mellady77 (new)

Mellady77 Stibich | 1149 comments I would have added Jacob earlier in Twilight to build the friendship side of their relationship a little more. Edward and Bella's relationship wasn't as playful as it was in Twilight until after he changed her in Breaking Dawn. I loved Emmett but it seemed that his jokes were replaced by Jacob in the last book but I would have loved more of that big bear of a brother in the series too. (Maybe a "yo momma" type showdown between Jake and Emmett). The ending was VERY different from the rest of the series.


message 19: by Sharda (new)

Sharda | 558 comments Nah, i loved the ending of the book.It was the best part for me....


message 20: by Mikayla (new)

Mikayla | 76 comments Sunni the Dinosaur wrote: "I would do what J.K. Rowling did in the last Harry Potter book. At the ending, add a 'ten year later' thing so we could see what happens between Renesemee and Jacob and get a touch up on the Culle..."


I hated that in HP.
I like it wayyy more when books don't tell you everything that happens later in some lame summary.

A book that had a really good ending was Gone With The Wind.




message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

*Covers eyes* havent read either of those...


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

*Covers eyes...again*


message 23: by Mellady77 (new)

Mellady77 Stibich | 1149 comments Melzz wrote: "*Covers eyes...again*"

Quit peeking!

I know your excited but I have to admit that I peeked too. I read Stephanie Meyer's Jacob POV on her website BEFORE I read new moon. Yes! I was very naughty.


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

Mellady77 wrote: "Quit peeking!"

Not trying too! I just thought it was funny that their were to spoiler comments in a row. :)


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

I think that Stephanie Meyer should make a 5th book and the end the Voluturi die......or at least Caius.


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

e....stephenie


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

I like the idea of a fifth book where they get rid of the Volturi and in my head that would naturally mean that the cullen family would take their place in the vampire community. Plus that way we would get to see how things played out with Jacob & Renessme.


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

They are pretty cool...


message 29: by Mary (new)

Mary Honeycutt (magnoliahoney) | 41 comments Yes, I would have liked for the Volturi scene to have been just a little more dramatic or physical. But, I like that Bella came out to be the hero. Who would've thought such a clumsy girl could be so instrumental in winning a life or death battle? I love the idea. Nessie's name doesn't bother me so much. Renesme kind of grew on me after awhile. I can tell you that I was extremely concerned at the bgng of BD, praying that Bella didn't give birth to a monster as Edward and Jacob feared. That would have killed it for me!!!!!!


message 30: by Jenna (new)

Jenna | 44 comments -renesmee's name... and nickname... 1st bella names her renesmee and gets mad wen they shorten it! and the name is so weird! she just should have named her carlie... like all the other cullens have names from their time frames, carlie is a recent name with a spelling change so it's a little different!

*spoilers below*
-bella not deciding... i no, it all turned out good, but wen i was reading it, she was o, i need jacob, but i cant live w/o edward... so she tries and makes jacob feel better (kisses him) and then hates herself... then she gets edward- everything she ever wanted- and she gets pregnant.... she would have died 4 the baby... they all thought she was going 2 die... n with her dying she would have killed edward which would have made all the othr cullens really sad... so on that foot she was being really selfish... that probably would have killed jacob, 2... i bet he would have fought the cullens n then maybe some of the wolf pack would have joined in...

-ending... nothing happens! like, 1/3 of the book is 'oh, everyone's going 2 die!' and then they dont even fight! i agree u cant have everyone die, but that was a really cop-out ending! i think they shoudl have started fight and then jacob ran with nessie or something (like somewhere where no one-not even bella- would have found them) and then the volturi run away or sumthing... like so bella can't have everything... its way too perfect!

-i think stephenie needs 2 write a final book... it leaves so many questions in ur mind... can nessie have kids (when she's older or still growing since the quilettes think imprinting is to build stronger werewolves)? will leah ever imprint or will she stop changing and then meet someone on free will? will bella EVER go to college- or what grade would she be in in high school wen they move? what will nessie's (and jake's) story b when they move... since she's older than them... (will SHE be BELLA'S mom or will they live seperately -- they said the guy frm the jungle was a full grown man) will bella ever see her mom again- it never tells u... And there r SOOOO many more questions....



message 31: by Elena (new)

Elena Hubner | 64 comments i would have changed nessie's name and idk, not turned bella into a vampire, i think that ruined the whole point of the series, how she was human and he was vampire and they were in love. but i also would make edward find a way to start aging with her or something. i would also like to know more about emmett though, they should have made him a bigger part of the book. and also, i would not have bella go to rosalie during her pregnency, that was just stupid.


message 32: by Sharda (new)

Sharda | 558 comments my biggest problem was the pregnancy.it seemed too unreal.when i think of Twilight i pretend Nessie never existed


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol, thats cruel.


message 34: by Liz (new)

Liz (lizgore) it was stephanie's book and she made it the way she wanted it




message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

Yes, she said that after she wrote twilight she made the desicion to get her pregnant, so she was writing all her books toward that ultimate goal.


message 36: by Sharda (new)

Sharda | 558 comments and i accept that bella got pregnant and can even justify the relevence of that happening for anyone who truly hates the books....but it just wasnt my favourite part of the series.other then that, i loved the book.


message 37: by Elena (new)

Elena Hubner | 64 comments i think that was gross, jacob imprinting on renesmee, that was just disgusting, since he can't have bella, he'll have her kid. um, a little disgusting!


message 38: by Natalia (new)

Natalia (natcullen) | 43 comments Renesmee and Jacob are the perfect couple!!!!!!!!!!!!


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

I was thinking there was someone else and i just checked and in Eclipse it came out that Quil imprinted on Claire (Emily's niece) who is only 2.


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

I wouldn't have made the devil shild renesme!!! and made Jasper a bigger character!!! henz the name


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