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message 1: by Kimiko, The Cold Empress (last edited Aug 29, 2014 12:58PM) (new)

Kimiko (kawasumi-kimiko) | 615 comments Mod
The Samurai: The armies lead by the Daimyos consisted of the powerful and brave warriors named as Samurai. These heroic warriors were under the leadership of the Daimyos. These warriors possessed extra privileges’ than the common people and also had higher status than others. They protected the entire Nation with their bravery and heroism. If a Samurai broke the bushido code and brought dishonor to him/herself they would be expected to commit seppuku, or ritual suicide. Women were allowed to serve as samurai but always served under a male leader.

Body/Guards: Guards/protect items/people.

Ronin: Paid Soldiers

<.B>{Surname}<./b>
<.B>{First name}<./b>

<.B>{Gender}<./b>
<.B>{Age}<./B>
<.b>{Birthday}<./b>

<.b>{Rank}<./b>
<.b>{Who they protect}<./b> For bodyguards and ronins

<.b>{Appearance}<./b>
<.b>{Personality}<./b>

<.b>{Weapons}<./b>

<.b>{Strengths}<./b>
<.b>{Weaknesses}<./b>
<.b>{Fatal Flaw}<./B>

<.b>{Likes}<./B>
<.b>{Dislikes}<./B>

<.b>{History}<./b> Optional
<.b>{Other}<./b>

Remove the "." before posting
Wait to be approved before you roleplay (:



message 2: by Storm [Heaven Above You, There's Hell Over Me]], Samurai of the Shadows (new)

Storm [Heaven Above You, There's Hell Over Me]] (StormBloodBlade) | 224 comments Mod
Surname: Maki
First Name: Shou

Gender: Male
Age: 21
Birthday: March 23

Rank: Kind of a Ronin but different
Who they protect:

Appearance:

Personality:
Shou comes off as cold, and sometimes arrogant. He likes to do things his way, because he believes he always has the right way. The samurai lives a free life, he wonders around and does jobs for people for money. In tense and dangerous situations, Shou is calm and knows how to handle himself. One of his favorite things is the sky, and he likes to relax and watch it.

Weapons:

Strengths: Is known as Torai, for his incredible speed and fighting skills.
Weaknesses: Sometimes is too stubborn and doesn't see his flawed ways.
Fatal Flaw: Afraid of losing people close to him.

Likes: Sky, Stars, Clouds, Nature, Drinking, gambling
Dislikes: Annoying people, scumbags, the system

History: Shou was trained under a swords master by the name of Fu. Since Shou had no parents at a very young age, Fu took him in and trained him to be a fine samurai. When war broke out, Fu was killed and Shou took it badly. He joined the army to try and avenge his death. Unfortunately they used him as a weapon. An example of his missions was when Shou slaughtered a whole castle of a waring region. Eventually when in the midst of a job, his close friend was killed and Shou left the army, killing some of the higher ups that wouldn't let him leave. Now he just goes around and does jobs he chooses when people need him.
Other:


message 3: by Storm [Heaven Above You, There's Hell Over Me]], Samurai of the Shadows (new)

Storm [Heaven Above You, There's Hell Over Me]] (StormBloodBlade) | 224 comments Mod
Um... Is my character approved?


message 4: by Kimiko, The Cold Empress (new)

Kimiko (kawasumi-kimiko) | 615 comments Mod
Srry! No noti X_______X

Yeah, it's Approved


message 5: by Storm [Heaven Above You, There's Hell Over Me]], Samurai of the Shadows (new)

Storm [Heaven Above You, There's Hell Over Me]] (StormBloodBlade) | 224 comments Mod
Thanks XD I'm also debating whether I want to make an emperor charrie


message 6: by Kimiko, The Cold Empress (new)

Kimiko (kawasumi-kimiko) | 615 comments Mod
(: You could if you want^.^


message 7: by sucre'd fiend (last edited May 06, 2013 05:52AM) (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 107 comments Surname: Ashataki
First Name: Salim

Gender: Female
Age: 21
DOB: May Thirtieth
POB: Persia



Rank: Samurai
Most find it odd that this foreign girl would even consider being a Samurai, but it had always been her dream. The restrictions of women in her home country prevented her from being a warrior much like her father and brothers, so she moved oversees to Japan.
Weapons: Swords
Salim uses dual blades, as she is ambidextrous. She's fully capable of taking out a few opponents, or keeping them at bay to say the least.

Appearance:

Salim has sandy blonde hair, that contrasts against her caramel hued complexion. This is a rarity passed down through her family genes, which she and her brothers share. Her eyes are a cerulean blue, and pop out in comparison to any other feature. She's slightly muscular, but not overly built. She's long legged, and hour glass shaped. This allows for smoother movement when she fights.

Personality: Salim is rowdy. Most would describe her as loud and confrontational, but really she's just a happy person. Not everyone can stand her being around them for too long, because of how loud she is. Her exotic nature prevents her from fitting in, and sometimes she can feel a little lonely.

Salim keeps a disconnect with certain authority figures, because of bad experiences with them in her native country. She doesn't mean any harm, it's just how it works. She can be very intuitive when given the chance, and is far more intelligent than she looks. Her appearance sets her apart from those around her, and she likes the diversity she creates.
Strengths: She's all for endurance and speed. She has movements that are feline and viper like, giving her the upper hand in a fight.
Weaknesses: Actual strength. She isn't exactly bulging with muscle, and most of her opponents tend to be male. She's not over powered easily, but she can't do much damage strength-wise.
Fatal Flaw: Her innocence in a foreign place. She knows next to nothing about where she is, and could be easily manipulated.
Likes: Curry- generally all food, sweets, animals, children, sports
Dislikes: Sexism, prejudice, racial slurs that she hears constantly

Family:
Mother: Tamir {Deceased}
Father: Salim
First Brother: Marmusa {Deceased}
Second Brother: Alim
Third Brother: Tamusa

Martial Status: Unwed, Single
Sexuality: Bisexual

History: Salim was born into a family of warriors, killing her mother in child birth. Her family has never blamed her, and she prays constantly to her mother for forgiveness. Her family was skilled at many different aspects of war.

War threatened Persia rarely, but when it did, her father and brothers were first up. Her eldest brother, Marmusa, was killed in battle when she was five. Having been closest to him, she was devastated. She vowed to follow in his footsteps and become the best fighter there could be.

She began her training in secret, as her community prohibited women from fighting. Being a fast learner, she caught on quickly to the many techniques, until finally she was ready.

When the next great war rolled around, she was sixteen. Ready for combat, she attempted to register under the ruse of being a man. They rejected her, and her anger provoked her to leave her country without a word to her family.

Other:


message 8: by Kimiko, The Cold Empress (new)

Kimiko (kawasumi-kimiko) | 615 comments Mod
Approved


message 9: by sucre'd fiend (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 107 comments Thanks


message 10: by Kimiko, The Cold Empress (new)

Kimiko (kawasumi-kimiko) | 615 comments Mod
yw


message 11: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
SeaTheFiend wrote: "Surname: Ashataki
First Name: Salim

Gender: Female
Age: 21
DOB: May Thirtieth
POB: Persia"


Okay, sorry if I seem like really annoying or something, but in 1256, wasn't Japan still isolated from other countries? I could be wrong, but I'm pretty sure that there weren't ships that took people from places like Persia to Japan or anything...


message 12: by sucre'd fiend (last edited May 06, 2013 02:23PM) (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 107 comments Avalon wrote: "SeaTheFiend wrote: "Surname: Ashataki
First Name: Salim

Gender: Female
Age: 21
DOB: May Thirtieth
POB: Persia"

Okay, sorry if I seem like really annoying or something, but in 1256, wasn't Japan s..."


You may be right, but the Mongols were also trying to get to Japan at that time. In retrospect, they very well could have if it wasn't for the Kamikaze Winds. So, if the Mongols were already trying to get there, don't you think it'd be realistic for other countries to try as well? And don't think you some would be able to?

This group is Historical Fiction, if i believe right. I'm within the parameters of possibility, if I do say so myself.


message 13: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
SeaTheFiend wrote: "Avalon wrote: "SeaTheFiend wrote: "Surname: Ashataki
First Name: Salim

Gender: Female
Age: 21
DOB: May Thirtieth
POB: Persia"

Okay, sorry if I seem like really annoying or something, but in 1256,..."


*Shrug* Fine by me, as long as there is some sort of explanation, not something like people liking corn in medieval Europe or something.


message 14: by sucre'd fiend (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 107 comments Avalon wrote: "SeaTheFiend wrote: "Avalon wrote: "SeaTheFiend wrote: "Surname: Ashataki
First Name: Salim

Gender: Female
Age: 21
DOB: May Thirtieth
POB: Persia"

Okay, sorry if I seem like really annoying or som..."


no, no. I would never do that *shudders* the History fanatic in me wouldn't allow it


message 15: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
SeaTheFiend wrote: "Avalon wrote: "SeaTheFiend wrote: "Avalon wrote: "SeaTheFiend wrote: "Surname: Ashataki
First Name: Salim

Gender: Female
Age: 21
DOB: May Thirtieth
POB: Persia"

Okay, sorry if I seem like really ..."


Yeah, it's Historical Fiction, not Sci-Fi.


message 16: by sucre'd fiend (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 107 comments Yep, now I just need to find a lord for Salim.


message 17: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
To hire her? How long has she been in Japan? I mean, she left Persia at age 16, but she obviously took a while to get to Japan.


message 18: by Kimiko, The Cold Empress (last edited May 06, 2013 02:36PM) (new)

Kimiko (kawasumi-kimiko) | 615 comments Mod
The Emperor is Zero, all samurai and other warriors are under his, and the Shogun's, command. :3


message 20: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
Kimiko wrote: "The Emperor is Zero, all samurai and other warriors are under his, and the Shogun's, command. :3"

But they're not immediately under his command. She needs a Daimyo.


message 21: by sucre'd fiend (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 107 comments Avalon wrote: "To hire her? How long has she been in Japan? I mean, she left Persia at age 16, but she obviously took a while to get to Japan."

Yes, to hire her. It would take about two years to cross through Persia and get to China, even using the Silk Road. From there a few months to get to Japan. There would probably be issues with getting hired, so then a couple more years depending on when she landed.


message 22: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
SeaTheFiend wrote: "Avalon wrote: "To hire her? How long has she been in Japan? I mean, she left Persia at age 16, but she obviously took a while to get to Japan."

Yes, to hire her. It would take about two years to c..."


Well, then Kazuko's been a Daimyo for about a year. She could've seen Salim was about as good as her and hired her as a guard if you want. Or maybe just as part of her army if you prefer.


message 23: by sucre'd fiend (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 107 comments Avalon wrote: "SeaTheFiend wrote: "Avalon wrote: "To hire her? How long has she been in Japan? I mean, she left Persia at age 16, but she obviously took a while to get to Japan."

Yes, to hire her. It would take ..."


As a guard will work.


message 24: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
SeaTheFiend wrote: "Avalon wrote: "SeaTheFiend wrote: "Avalon wrote: "To hire her? How long has she been in Japan? I mean, she left Persia at age 16, but she obviously took a while to get to Japan."

Yes, to hire her...."


Awesome


message 25: by Kimiko, The Cold Empress (new)

Kimiko (kawasumi-kimiko) | 615 comments Mod
Approved


message 26: by sucre'd fiend (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 107 comments I feel like Salim and Sanjaroka would make an epic duel


message 27: by Avalon, Lady Errant (last edited May 06, 2013 05:38PM) (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
I feel sorry for Shou... This seems to be a country full of female warriors. xD


message 28: by Kimiko, The Cold Empress (new)

Kimiko (kawasumi-kimiko) | 615 comments Mod
LOLz!


message 29: by sucre'd fiend (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 107 comments lol


message 30: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
Céibhfhionn wrote: "Avalon! Reply to me at the meadow... Advanced Medieval Era Roleplay."

You posted?! But it doesn't say there are any new posts next to the topic name... O.o


message 31: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
Céibhfhionn wrote: "Lag/glitch. Just click on it and go to the fourth of third page, and scroll down until you see my name."

I'll go check now then... Sorry.


message 32: by [ constellation mokke ] (last edited May 09, 2013 01:14PM) (new)

[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02)


❝To protect that ones I love, I must be ready at all times.
These hands are for the good, and I will use them to defend.❞





Kiri’s complexion is fair, though it is on the verge on becoming tan from being out in the sun for so long. His skin has been marked by several scars when he was an apprentice. Line marks as long as a grown man’s hand are streaked on his back. No one but his family has seen these scars before.

Kiri has a thick head of red hair that is presumably spiky, but is actually soft. His hair reaches down to the middle of his neck, so it’s obviously long. Despite that though, Kiri doesn’t cut his hair that often; when he does, his hair is still pretty long--reaching down to the base of his head. Kiri doesn’t cut his hair for the sole purpose of feeling the wind, but he feels like it’s a weird reason, so he covers it up with the false reason of “cutting my hair takes up too much of my precious time”, but knowing him, it’s a good reason.

Kiri has his father’s dark eyes; they look like the night sky without stars, dark and mysterious. He has his mother’s long eyelashes, which is envied by a handful of people, especially women. Kiri’s eyes are the main attraction for his face.

Kiri stands at the height of five-foot-eight (5’8”) with an athletic build.

✴ ✴ ✴

●◉○Surname○◉● Kazama
●◉○Given Name○◉● Kiri
●◉○Age○◉● 17
◌◎Birthday◎◌ May 22
◌◎Zodiac Sign◎◌ Gemini (♊)
●◉○Gender○◉● Male (♂)
◌◎Sexuality◎◌ Straight
✴ ✴ ✴

●◉○Rank○◉● Bodyguard
As a seventeen year old bodyguard, not many believe highly in Kiri’s skill; they think of him as a child, dreaming as a bodyguard of someone from a higher status. Kiri is mocked upon due to this, but the young boy merely dismisses it, paying no heed whatsoever to the thoughts of others. Those who believe Kiri’s exceptional skill know him as a child prodigy in fighting.
●◉○Who They Protect○◉● Unofficial bodyguard of Kusagano Sora-sama
●◉○Weapons○◉● A katana with a simple white design on the black sheath. (view spoiler)
✴ ✴ ✴

▪▣▫History▫▣▪
Note: I am being lazy, so the history is broken into the most important parts of Kiri’s life (without years).

➘Born four years after his older sister
➘Raised as the typical male child
➘Age 8: Encountered a samurai dueling with another samurai, which sparked his interest in fighting
➘Age 9½ : Started learning archery
➘Age 10 : Started learning kendo
➘Age 11½ : Became an apprentice
➘Age 17: Bodyguard

▪▣▫Family▫▣▪
♂ Kazama Masato - Otou-sama
♀ Kazama Natsuki - Okaa-sama
♀ Kazama Shirayuki - Onee-san

▪▣▫Personality▫▣▪
Kazama Kiri is generally a calm and composed person, quiet and observant. He keeps his emotions in check to those around him. He is someone who is not easily swayed by others’ propositions or beliefs; rather than sympathizing right at the start, Kiri would find out the truth and what the events were that followed to the present situation. To some, he is like a detective: intelligent, careful, and thoughtful in his work. Kiri’s quietude and observant skills can easily help him detect things out of the ordinary and when he is in a sparring match. With his collected demeanor, many people have given Kiri positive and negative comments. In the positive category, he is calmer and more hardworking than others. His persona is one that parents can take pride in and be acknowledged. In the negative category, Kiri is looked down upon as a goody-two-shoes for everything he does and the way he completes them. It is apparent that it is the young men who talks about Kiri. However, Kiri takes no note into account for what others say about him; she simply dismisses those thoughts, even those that are praises sometimes get dismissed as well.

As a bodyguard, Kiri understands what his duty requires him to do. While on duty, one can almost never find Kiri lax. Although he’s an bodyguard, he is still young thus, needing breaks every so often. It is at these times when he feels a break needed for a short while is he vulnerable. Despite that though, Kiri has quick reflexes and can quickly respond to his environment. Even on breaks, Kiri is still alert for abnormal signs that could happen. That is how focused the seventeen year old can be. However though, Kiri is still seventeen, so he can be naive.

Respect and honor is highly valued by everyone in the country, and it is also very important to Kiri as well. He is very polite and courteous to his superiors, never failing once to use the correct honorifics to address those in the higher class. In this way, he is seen as an ideal young child with perfect manners, and could have grown to become a nobleman of high status. Much to their disbelief, Kiri chose the path of a warrior to protect his country. Kiri is a patriot and loves his country dearly, and that is the reason why Kiri took his studies and training seriously to become a bodyguard. He is a diligent worker.

Kiri has a very good memory, allowing him to remember what he learns with near precise accuracy; he also has photographic memory, so he can recall objects, sounds, and images almost perfectly. Due to this, he can still recall what happened when he was as young as seven, but no less. That is just how good his memory really is. Kiri is a fast thinker, and will use his knowledge to help him in any way possible--his good memory allows him to bring up old subjects and what he learned long ago to assist him in the present time.

Unfortunately for Kiri, his quiet and mysterious demeanor has people putting him down at times. They do not know how adept Kiri is. Due to that, Kiri’s chances of showing them off are not very high, but somehow, he was still able to become a bodyguard at a young age with just his carefulness, his intelligence, and diligence.
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▪▣▫Strengths▫▣▪
♛ His photographic memory
♛ His quick reflexes and reactions
♛ His young age and appearance easily deceives others of his duty
▪▣▫Weaknesses▫▣▪
Being a bodyguard at the age of seventeen have three countering effects:
♟Being in danger everyday
♟Possibility of dying and not experiencing other worldly things
♟Lack of sleep and energy and gaining stress
~
♟Unable to live up to his father’s expectations
▪▣▫Fatal Flaw▫▣▪
¡Being a seventeen year old bodyguard!

▪▣▫Likes▫▣▪
✦ The wind
✦ Constellations and stars
✦ His mother’s cooking
✦ His sister’s singing
▪▣▫Dislikes▫▣▪
✘ How he tries his hardest, but still cannot please his father enough to give him a warm and loving smile.
✘ Disrespectful and unhonorable people
✘ Drunkards




message 33: by Kimiko, The Cold Empress (last edited May 07, 2013 06:15PM) (new)

Kimiko (kawasumi-kimiko) | 615 comments Mod
Niiiiice! If he was real, i probably would have fallen in love when him <3

APproved

Ah..pics don't work :/


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) Thank you! :)

Both, or just one of them?


message 35: by sucre'd fiend (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 107 comments It seems that we've gotten another warrior. Maybe we should have a small tournament.


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) That sounds interesting. :3 There would have to be a reason behind that in the RP though


message 37: by Kimiko, The Cold Empress (new)

Kimiko (kawasumi-kimiko) | 615 comments Mod
ℐαѕмιηє ♬ wrote: "Thank you! :)

Both, or just one of them?"


Both


message 38: by sucre'd fiend (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 107 comments Maybe to get a position to be a guard or samurai.


message 39: by Kimiko, The Cold Empress (new)

Kimiko (kawasumi-kimiko) | 615 comments Mod
Oh wait, now it works :3


message 40: by Kimiko, The Cold Empress (new)

Kimiko (kawasumi-kimiko) | 615 comments Mod
SeaTheFiend wrote: "Maybe to get a position to be a guard or samurai."

He's already is a bodyguard


message 41: by sucre'd fiend (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 107 comments Kimiko wrote: "SeaTheFiend wrote: "Maybe to get a position to be a guard or samurai."

He's already is a bodyguard"


But he doesn't have someone to protect.


message 42: by Kimiko, The Cold Empress (new)

Kimiko (kawasumi-kimiko) | 615 comments Mod
Shrugz, he could find someone to protect.


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) Wait, are you talking about how to be the tournament thing to work? If so, I have an idea that Kiri can participate without being anyone's bodyguard officially...if that made some sense


message 44: by Kimiko, The Cold Empress (new)

Kimiko (kawasumi-kimiko) | 615 comments Mod
Sure(: go ahead


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) Oh, and with this tournament, someone could request Kiri to be their bodyguard.

(view spoiler)

I dunno. Something like that. ._.


message 46: by Kimiko, The Cold Empress (new)

Kimiko (kawasumi-kimiko) | 615 comments Mod
Niiiice! <3 your idea:3 He could be Sora's bodyguard if you'd like ^.^


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) Sure. I don't mind


message 48: by Kimiko, The Cold Empress (new)

Kimiko (kawasumi-kimiko) | 615 comments Mod
(: okay


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) Which thread is Sora in? I want to see the profile


message 50: by Kimiko, The Cold Empress (new)

Kimiko (kawasumi-kimiko) | 615 comments Mod
Hierarchy


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