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message 51: by Dini (new)

Dini (my first stab at this!)

raindrops in the sun
glistening prisms reflect
wondrous day ahead

Thank God it's Friday
slam the door of the office
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high heels hurt my feet
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message 52: by Robbie (last edited Apr 07, 2008 08:56AM) (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments Thank God it's Friday
slam the door of the office
pour a glass of wine

high heels hurt my feet
arches contort and toes pinch
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chimes sound as they sway
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message 53: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments high heels hurt my feet
arches contort and toes pinch
the price of fashion

chimes sound as they sway
harmonies and soothing breeze
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Sand like baking flour
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message 54: by Meghan (new)

Meghan chimes sound as they sway
harmonies and soothing breeze
lazy hammock days

Sand like baking flour
A recipe for summer
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I hate allergies
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message 55: by Novin (new)

Novin Sand like baking flour
A recipe for summer
Grandma's cake !

I hate allergies
sneezing all over spring
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water lily petals
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message 56: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments I hate allergies
sneezing all over spring
then again in fall

water lily petals
dressed in pink, they float with grace
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warm but cloudy days
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message 57: by Novin (new)

Novin water lily petals
dressed in pink, they float with grace
another evening carnival!

warm but cloudy days
waiting for a drop of rain
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Half moon shining
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message 58: by Novin (new)

Novin warm but cloudy days
waiting for a drop of rain
thirty trees

Half moon shining
deep black sky
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dancing with wind
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message 59: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments Novin, did you know?
Five syllables, then seven
Then five for Haiku

No need to re-write
we'll work with what you've written
Glad to have you here!


message 60: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments Half moon shining
deep black sky looms all around
stars twinkle and wink


dancing with warm wind
blowing through my golden hair
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reading in the sun
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message 61: by Rachel (new)

Rachel | 25 comments dancing with warm wind
blowing through my golden hair
strands lifted, caressed

reading in the sun
a lazy stroll through the park
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silly spry monkey
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message 62: by Novin (new)

Novin reading in the sun
a lazy stroll through the park
that's what good day means!

silly spry monkey
looking for a coconut
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summer afternoon
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message 63: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments silly spry monkey
looking for a coconut
konks one with his head

summer afternoon
butterflies warm in the sun
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white-water river
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message 64: by Dini (new)

Dini summer afternoon
butterflies warm in the sun
flying around me

white-water river
glimmering sun reflected
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lie on my hammock
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message 65: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments white-water river
glimmering sun reflected
off rare, smooth water

lie on my hammock
with lemonade and a book
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orange ozone day
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message 66: by Meghan (new)

Meghan lie on my hammock
with lemonade and a book
the perfect summer

orange ozone day
fushia afternoons go by
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tired to my bones
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message 67: by Rachel (new)

Rachel | 25 comments orange ozone day
fuschia afternoons go by
hazy summer hues

tired to my bones
footsore, exhausted, worn out
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party planning time


message 68: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments tired to my bones
footsore, exhausted, worn out
We need more Calgon!

party planning time
food, decorations, invites
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three glasses of wine
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message 69: by Novin (new)

Novin party planning time
food, decorations, invites
what a charming night!

three glasses of wine
what a lovely sound they make
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moon in the river
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message 70: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments three glasses of wine
what a lovely sound they make
"cheers!" to the New Year

moon in the river
ripples of silver and white
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waves on the Great Lake
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message 71: by Dini (new)

Dini moon in the river
ripples of silver and white
dancing on water

waves on the Great Lake
slowly dipping my toes in
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waking up at dusk
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message 72: by Erin (last edited Nov 23, 2008 01:11PM) (new)

Erin | 6 comments waves on the Great Lake
slowly dipping my toes in
waiting: will fish bite?

waking up at dusk
did I really sleep all day?
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a nail in the tire
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opps, edited to add the first line of a new haiku


message 73: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments waking up at dusk
did I really sleep all day?
or was it a dream?

a nail in the tire
do I hear a hissing sound?
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Twelve days of Christmas
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message 74: by Dini (new)

Dini a nail in the tire
do I hear a hissing sound?
pulling over now

Twelve days of Christmas
it's all over, all over
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walking around town
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message 75: by Robbie (last edited Feb 09, 2009 06:17PM) (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments Twelve days of Christmas
it's all over, all over
now we can relax

walking around town
sparkly snowflakes floating down
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skis, poles, and goggles
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message 76: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments
walking around town
sparkly snowflakes floating down
landing on my tongue

skis, poles, and goggles
a hard helmet for my head
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icing on the cake
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message 77: by Dini (new)

Dini skis, poles, and goggles
a hard helmet for my head
have a safe ski trip!

icing on the cake
chocolate, cheese and blueberry
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a day at the spa
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message 78: by Meghan (new)

Meghan icing on the cake
chocolate, cheese and blueberry
I need some new pants

a day at the spa
pampered princesses relax
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my favorite bookstore
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message 79: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments jelly beans galore
the sound of autumn leaves
rustles through my heart

winter rain
snowflakes in early spring
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ragweed; watery eyes
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message 80: by Gerda (new)

Gerda (Libtech) | 16 comments Plastic soccer moms
In jogging suits and lipstick
gossip in the 4WD

Jelly beans galore
all colours from the rainbow
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Eagle soaring high


message 81: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments Jelly beans galore
all colours from the rainbow
even the black ones

Eagle soaring high
silhouette of black on blue
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Tiny spider-mites
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message 82: by Gerda (new)

Gerda (Libtech) | 16 comments Eagle soaring high
silhouette of black on blue
diving suddenly

Tiny spider mites
running up the tree trunk


message 83: by Gerda (new)

Gerda (Libtech) | 16 comments Looking at the ripples
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message 84: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments Tiny spider mites
running up the tree trunk
time to prune again

Looking at the ripples
made by the flat skipping stone
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Counting calories
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message 85: by Gerda (new)

Gerda (Libtech) | 16 comments Looking at the ripples
made by the flat skipping stone
before sinking gracefully

Counting calories
dipping a finger in the wineglass
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The paintbrush hovers
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message 86: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments Counting calories
dipping a finger in the wineglass
instead of the bread

The paintbrush hovers
pigment rains, splashes, and flows
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Donkeys kick and bray
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message 87: by Karl (last edited Aug 25, 2013 06:06PM) (new)

Karl Grass | 5 comments raindrops in the sun
glistening prisms reflect
rainbows everywhere

Thank God it's Friday
Weekend of wild abandon
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Sun peeks through dark clouds
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message 88: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments Thank God it's Friday
Weekend of wild abandon
I'm too old for this

Sun peeks through dark clouds
rays penetrate the mist
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It's back-to-school time
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message 89: by [deleted user] (new)

Sun peeks through dark clouds
rays penetrate the mist
the misty ghosts merge

It's back-to school time
Stabbings with compasses

Beyond the black stump


message 90: by [deleted user] (new)

It's back-to-school time
Stabbings with compasses
General vacancy

Beyond the black stump
at the outer limits

Equalisation -


message 91: by [deleted user] (last edited Jan 01, 2016 03:01PM) (new)

Beyond the black stump
At the outer limits
Beyond nothingness

Equalisation -
every man before the law

Bugger me stupid


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