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slam the door of the office
pour a glass of wine
high heels hurt my feet
arches contort and toes pinch
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chimes sound as they sway
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arches contort and toes pinch
the price of fashion
chimes sound as they sway
harmonies and soothing breeze
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Sand like baking flour
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harmonies and soothing breeze
lazy hammock days
Sand like baking flour
A recipe for summer
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I hate allergies
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A recipe for summer
Grandma's cake !
I hate allergies
sneezing all over spring
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water lily petals
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sneezing all over spring
then again in fall
water lily petals
dressed in pink, they float with grace
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warm but cloudy days
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dressed in pink, they float with grace
another evening carnival!
warm but cloudy days
waiting for a drop of rain
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Half moon shining
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waiting for a drop of rain
thirty trees
Half moon shining
deep black sky
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dancing with wind
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Five syllables, then seven
Then five for Haiku
No need to re-write
we'll work with what you've written
Glad to have you here!

deep black sky looms all around
stars twinkle and wink
dancing with warm wind
blowing through my golden hair
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reading in the sun
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blowing through my golden hair
strands lifted, caressed
reading in the sun
a lazy stroll through the park
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silly spry monkey
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a lazy stroll through the park
that's what good day means!
silly spry monkey
looking for a coconut
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summer afternoon
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looking for a coconut
konks one with his head
summer afternoon
butterflies warm in the sun
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white-water river
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butterflies warm in the sun
flying around me
white-water river
glimmering sun reflected
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lie on my hammock
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glimmering sun reflected
off rare, smooth water
lie on my hammock
with lemonade and a book
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orange ozone day
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with lemonade and a book
the perfect summer
orange ozone day
fushia afternoons go by
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tired to my bones
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fuschia afternoons go by
hazy summer hues
tired to my bones
footsore, exhausted, worn out
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party planning time

footsore, exhausted, worn out
We need more Calgon!
party planning time
food, decorations, invites
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three glasses of wine
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food, decorations, invites
what a charming night!
three glasses of wine
what a lovely sound they make
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moon in the river
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what a lovely sound they make
"cheers!" to the New Year
moon in the river
ripples of silver and white
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waves on the Great Lake
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ripples of silver and white
dancing on water
waves on the Great Lake
slowly dipping my toes in
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waking up at dusk
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slowly dipping my toes in
waiting: will fish bite?
waking up at dusk
did I really sleep all day?
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a nail in the tire
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did I really sleep all day?
or was it a dream?
a nail in the tire
do I hear a hissing sound?
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Twelve days of Christmas
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do I hear a hissing sound?
pulling over now
Twelve days of Christmas
it's all over, all over
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walking around town
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it's all over, all over
now we can relax
walking around town
sparkly snowflakes floating down
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skis, poles, and goggles
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walking around town
sparkly snowflakes floating down
landing on my tongue
skis, poles, and goggles
a hard helmet for my head
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icing on the cake
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a hard helmet for my head
have a safe ski trip!
icing on the cake
chocolate, cheese and blueberry
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a day at the spa
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chocolate, cheese and blueberry
I need some new pants
a day at the spa
pampered princesses relax
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my favorite bookstore
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the sound of autumn leaves
rustles through my heart
winter rain
snowflakes in early spring
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ragweed; watery eyes
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In jogging suits and lipstick
gossip in the 4WD
Jelly beans galore
all colours from the rainbow
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Eagle soaring high

all colours from the rainbow
even the black ones
Eagle soaring high
silhouette of black on blue
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Tiny spider-mites
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silhouette of black on blue
diving suddenly
Tiny spider mites
running up the tree trunk

running up the tree trunk
time to prune again
Looking at the ripples
made by the flat skipping stone
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Counting calories
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made by the flat skipping stone
before sinking gracefully
Counting calories
dipping a finger in the wineglass
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The paintbrush hovers
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dipping a finger in the wineglass
instead of the bread
The paintbrush hovers
pigment rains, splashes, and flows
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Donkeys kick and bray
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glistening prisms reflect
rainbows everywhere
Thank God it's Friday
Weekend of wild abandon
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Sun peeks through dark clouds
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Weekend of wild abandon
I'm too old for this
Sun peeks through dark clouds
rays penetrate the mist
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It's back-to-school time
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Sun peeks through dark clouds
rays penetrate the mist
the misty ghosts merge
It's back-to school time
Stabbings with compasses
Beyond the black stump
rays penetrate the mist
the misty ghosts merge
It's back-to school time
Stabbings with compasses
Beyond the black stump
It's back-to-school time
Stabbings with compasses
General vacancy
Beyond the black stump
at the outer limits
Equalisation -
Stabbings with compasses
General vacancy
Beyond the black stump
at the outer limits
Equalisation -
Beyond the black stump
At the outer limits
Beyond nothingness
Equalisation -
every man before the law
Bugger me stupid
At the outer limits
Beyond nothingness
Equalisation -
every man before the law
Bugger me stupid
raindrops in the sun
glistening prisms reflect
wondrous day ahead
Thank God it's Friday
slam the door of the office
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high heels hurt my feet
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