Feed back

[Mark]

Hi I recently write my first attempt at poetry I'm wondering if anyone has the time they could have a look and give me some honest feed back
Thanks

[Martin]

I read and write poetry, so sure :)

Edit e-mail is glyndwr99@gmail.com

[[deleted user]]

I love to read poetry I don't write it for other people to read but I'd be happy to read yours ,and give you a honest review,on it ifou want to send it to me. lori529@comcast.net. just send PDF.