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Middle name: Nkosazana
Surname: Traore
Code name: The Huntress
Gender: Female
Nationality: Somalian, but her father's family's family hails from Niger, and her mother's side is of many mixed heritages.
Age: 19
DOB (Date of Birth): October 31st
Place of Birth: Mogadishu, Somalia
Personality:
Trait 1:
Trait 2:
Trait 3:
Appearance:
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Hair colour: Onyx-black, infused with subtle hints of cinnamon, sandalwood, and amber.
Eye colour: Sable-black, but fades into a soft, ginger-like hue as it nears the iris.
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 110 lbs.
Body type: Long and linber, lean and lithe, with well-muscled, but slender and thin limbs, a cinched waist, reed-like legs and arms, and spidery hands.
Pitch of voice: Rich and alto-toned, as soothing, smooth, and coaxing as golden honey.
Distinctive markings: A jagged gash of a scar that mars her otherwise ravishing and perfectly symmetrical face.
School attended: The Glasshouse
If H.I.V.E., what stream?: N/A
Member of G.L.O.V.E.?: Yes, she is the delegate from the African continent.
History: Adaeze was born and raised in volatile, unstable Somalia, where dangerous, unscrupulous men, both civilians and not, roamed the streets of her native Mogadishu, extorting money like petty criminals, and skirmished with opposing factions, causing a daily state of turmoil, terror, and pandemonium. Adaeze's father, Emeko, was slaughtered in the midst of a terrible and gruesome battle, one in which many lost their lives. One day not long after, Adaeze's mother, Eshe, fell ill with an incurable malady, and passed away shortly after, leaving behind her eleven children, Adaeze (the eldest), Esi, Gbemisola, Idir, Enu, Ikenna, Kagiso, Kayode, Khamisi, Kojo, and Kirabo behind, to fend for themselves in the war-torn land of their forebears. Adaeze, possessed of a certain spirit of leadership, took to purloining valuables to scrounge a living for her siblings and herself, oftentimes even resorting to selling the items on the black market, which flourished. Despite her efforts, seven of her siblings died from smallpox, one from a gunshot wound, and two others from malnutrition. Desperate, Adaeze wandered near and far with her remaining sibling, a sister named Kirabo, the youngest. However, the then-Soviet assassin-training facility The Glasshouse spotted her formidable talents, and abducted her in the dead of night, leaving her helpless younger sister alone. Once Adaeze had been imprisoned in the jail-like building, she was ruthlessly trained to maim, to kill, all without twitching a muscle, and to be as fleet as the wind, as silent as nothingness. When she was finally released from the school, she was a changed, and hardened, merciless person, who took on a new alias: The Huntress, for her deadly accuracy and swiftness. She was subsequently recruited by G.L.O.V.E., to perform missions for them, alongside fellow assassin Raven (a Russian assassin from the novels), and was assigned to H.I.V.E. a few years a ago to ensure the wellbeing of its inhabitants.
Special skills:
Skill 1:
Skill 2:
Skill 3:
Weapon(s) of choice:
Relationship/Marital Status: Single
Past Occupation(s): Mercenary and G.L.O.V.E. assassin (present)
Other: UNFINISHED.
First name: AndreiMiddle name: Maxim
Surname: Leontiy
Code name: The Devil Dog
Gender: Male
Nationality: Romanian / Polish
Age: 38
DOB: January 18th, 1975
Place of Birth: Krakow, Poland
Personality:
Trait 1: Observant
Trait 2: Tactful
Trait 3: Amoral
Appearance:
Hair colour: Dark brown
Eye colour: Brown
Height: 6' 2"
Weight: 200 lbs.
Body type: Toned, lean, fit
Pitch of voice: Medium-deep, dark, toneless
Distinctive markings: Large 'X' on his arm and a nick on his left cheekbone
School attended: H.I.V.E.
What stream?: Henchmen
Member of G.L.O.V.E.?: No. He was only hired as an assassin.
History: Born in Poland, Andrei was a single child, raised by a single mother who never spoke of his father. He was abducted at age 10 by an assassin when he displayed his skills with a knife during a fight with a dangerous student at his school. During his third year as a student, he once made an attempt to escape. As punishment, he received the previously withheld news that his mother had been murdered while he was away at H.I.V.E.. Since then, Andrei was never been anything other than a loyal dog to the highest payer, ruthlessly carrying out his assignments. Once he gratuaded from the school, he moved on to become a game hunter in order to learn more about tracking and other necessary skills. He quickly became an infamous contract killer, earning many nicknames (such as Exact-O, the Bloody Butterfly, and other things based on the knives he used to kill the victims), though he was interrupted in his bloody meditation by G.L.O.V.E. hiring him at the H.I.V.E.. And while he wasn't enthused about returning, he didn't turn down the offer.
Special skills:
Skill 1: Tracking
Skill 2: Strength
Skill 3: Quick-thinking
Skill 4: Precision
Weapons of choice: Knives
Relationship/Marital Status: Single
Past Occupations:
>Student
>H.I.V.E. Student
>Wild Game Hunter
>Contract Killer
>G.L.O.V.E. Assassin
Other: Andrei secretly resents authority, but he doesn't believe that he would be able to survive without someone pulling at his "leash".
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Middle name: Maxim
Surname: Leontiy
Code name: The Devil Dog
Gender: Male
Nationality: Romanian / Polish
Age: 38
DOB: January 18th, 1975
Place of Birth: Krakow, Poland
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Great start!
o.o do I need to fix things?
Mod
Yes, a few:
-The personality needs to be explained.
-How do his special skills apply to him? How acute are they?
Other than those, he's good.
It simply says trait for both of those categories... There was nothing indicating that I needed to elaborate on them...What do you mean by "explained" ? Should I put a little paragraph underneath each of the traits, or larger paragraphs for the overarching theme of his personality and skills (respectively) ?
Mod
What do you mean by "explained" ? Should I put a little paragraph underneath..."
Sorry about the first one. I remember that I accidentally deleted that requirement a few weeks back. And, you have free rein with the explanation, do it how you like; I'm not a control freak. :D
Alright, I'll get on that in a little bit XP
Mod
By the way (I'm extremely archaic), what does "XP" mean?
XP is a face. Like :D or :)
Mod
Oh. thanks.
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