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Rain
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Hope
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Mar 23, 2009 08:53PM
Some people look at the rain. I listen to the rain. I hear it talking to me and thudding on my window. I feel the rain, its wet and warm. I love the rain.
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I could really relate with Gene Kelley when he sang Singin' in the Rain from the movie with the same title.
The pain was almost unbearable. She was happy that she could say she just came out of the rain when people asked her if she was crying.
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She pictured herself on a faraway island, with the waves and salt hitting her face. She had no worries and no cares on that island.
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Her mother handed her a mop and said, "Mop that floor, and I want it spic and span, or you'll do it over again. Clear?" Rebekka empathized Cinderella greatly. She felt just like her, without the fairy godmother, prince, or glass slippers.
Rebecka had allways wanted the best for her family but never this.
Her life felt horrible. She wanted a better life. But she had no idea what was to come... terrible sadness... but all would be well in the end...
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It was as if she had been floating, in a perfect life, she could feel it, she could touch it...
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She was planning on going to live with her grandparents. They were the only people that she really trusted.
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she thought through the people who would be willing to help
She thought and thougt. She finally came up with a plan. It involved her friend Chrysaline.
On saterday the plan would go to work.
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She was leaving and once she left there was no turning back...
midnight in 30min the plan was going to have to work.
2 more minutes and she's out of here yesterday. No doubt about it. She was leaving. She couldn't think of anything that would make her come back.
She couldn't delay any longer, she sneaked outside and made her way secretly to the highway...
She suddenly realized she had no way to get to her grandparents. She couldn't have sneaked away if she had started up her car. She lives in Boston, and they lived in Baltimore. "What am I going to do," she pondered.
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She graved her cell phoun and called her friend chrysaline who convinced her brother to drive her to her grandparents house.
But then Chrysaline's brother's car broke down. She would have to hitchhike.
She hoped she wouldn't end up with some drunk dude who wanted to marry her. She just had to get to her grandparents.
What do you mean a baby? end up with one? what?
She was afraid. but she knew there was nothing else she could do. she had to get out of here.
She went to the beginning of the highway and stuck that thumb out. She tried to appear confident, but she was scared out of her wits.
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(( I'm sorry I upset you guys so badly.))She wasn't sure if anyone would notice her.
((k))She was worried about what people might be saying but she realized that she really didn't care.
She saw a tall man with a bandanna around his head, peering out the window at her. She began to wonder if this would be worse than being with her family.
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(( wait what I thought that guy was there!))
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(sorry it got posted before i shall it. Ill delete it.)
((I'm sorry but I'm so confused! Where are we?))
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It was decision time does she get in or run. But run where?
Not shure were to run she walks up to the car.
She hoped that someone, who at least looked like they took care of themselves, came to pick her up. She was worried that she would stand there all night, unseen.
She wanted to dissapear and never return, to live in the sky, without pain, or hurt.
