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message 1: by D.C. (new)

D.C. | 35 comments Alright I'm gonna start this thing!

Goal: Have A Reason to Live done by the end of 2009
Words per day:500(I like to write a lot)

Okay I'm starting tomarrow(March 24, 2009).

Wish me luck


message 2: by Marley (new)

Marley (Marleyme95) | 977 comments LUCK!!


message 3: by D.C. (new)

D.C. | 35 comments Very nice, thanks Marley


message 4: by Just Plain Ray (new)

Just Plain Ray (Ray_of_Sunshine) | 2557 comments Welcome to the group!
*leaves a present*
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Good luck with your writing!


message 5: by D.C. (new)

D.C. | 35 comments Wow you guys are friendly around here


message 6: by Marley (new)

Marley (Marleyme95) | 977 comments Well, no duh silly!


message 7: by Kenzie, Help feed the hungry. Donate to 30 Hour Famine! (new)

Kenzie | 1305 comments Mod
Welcome to the group D.C.! I hope you take as much pleasure from it as we do. :)


message 8: by D.C. (new)

D.C. | 35 comments I already have 508 words! And i haven't even officially started my goal =)


message 9: by Kenzie, Help feed the hungry. Donate to 30 Hour Famine! (new)

Kenzie | 1305 comments Mod
Nice job! That's great! :)


message 10: by D.C. (new)

D.C. | 35 comments Okay today I wrote about 600 words


message 11: by D.C. (new)

D.C. | 35 comments Oh no! I got busy. Even though I've been writing I haven't kept track. Okay i would have to say in the last 4 day I wrote 1400 words. So that brings my total to....2508 words. Okay I'm setting a different word count: 300 words a day



message 12: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
Outstanding word count D.C.

Way 2 go :]

Oh, and sorry I am so late, but welcome to the group.


message 13: by D.C. (new)

D.C. | 35 comments Haha well I need to start over I am horrible at this. Okay starting tomorrow I will write up to 300 words a day and I will do it without fail!


message 14: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments yay! go go go! :) lol


message 15: by Marley (new)

Marley (Marleyme95) | 977 comments Just keep going Caleb! Good Luck!


message 16: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments woot!


message 17: by D.C. (new)

D.C. | 35 comments Haha now I have goodreads friends! Interesting feeling, its weird cause I'll probably never see you guys face to face


message 18: by D.C. (new)

D.C. | 35 comments Alright so I just wrote this poem and I'm curious if this is the place to publish my writing? I'll do it anyway!

Our Dreams are dead. What could have been said that would lead to such dread?

How then would you act
If your life and free will
Were taken away, set on a track
Where there is no turning back
And no way to fulfill, the purpose
Given to life to give meaning, in a world
Of meaningless things
Purpose that was yours
The purpose that all of man sings

Eyes watching, making sure death is complete
In your own eye, hope
Laying Unseen
Because death, like winter, is a temporary thing
The dream will come back
No matter how hard you try to kill it
Doesn’t matter who trys to steal it

The Human Spirit will fight on


message 19: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) omg its so deep! XD


message 20: by D.C. (last edited Apr 23, 2009 06:52PM) (new)

D.C. | 35 comments Thanks Mimi. I'm talking of a world where freedom is dead(I read 1984 so sue me haha). But you can never truly kill the humar spirit


message 21: by Marley (new)

Marley (Marleyme95) | 977 comments ARGH, don't remind me, I must finish that book, but it is long, and causes me headaches. I MUST finish it...*smacks head down*


message 22: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) lol, and im not michelle anymore, that thing lies. im mimi now, lolz


message 23: by D.C. (new)

D.C. | 35 comments Haha Marley, its not so bad just try and picture the world. I find it facinating, but to each his own. See Mimi I changed it from Michelle


message 24: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) haha you didnt have to do that, but okay


message 25: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments ooh awesome poem!!


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

That is the most awesome poem ever!


message 27: by D.C. (new)

D.C. | 35 comments Okay I wrote about 400 words today. Here is a poem( I didn't finish the other one)that i wrote about 10 minutes ago


You walk through streets of black and white
Color may have existed, but you are dead to it
The coldness of sadness killed all the colored light
That once in your heart was lit, pain left in its wake

But your life will go on, day to day, you will live
Peoples eyes watching you, judging your actions and appearance
No matter how hard you try, or what you give
To try and feel better, love and health, it never changes your stance

Life in just more blacker than white

Now what if I painted you a picture? Of many a color
And I showed you my picture, of how I see the black streets
To see life as it should be, through the eyes of a brother
A caring friend, who opens up possibilities to reach your peaks

Because truly those streets contain colorful life, that you could see
Just look through the pain, the smiling faces of venders in red caps
The innocent children playing in the green summer heat so freely
Couples lying in the parks, loving life and each other, lovely saps

I want you to smile innocently and freely, with love in your eyes
Because time flys and peoples lives are to short, to believe black lies



message 28: by D.C. (last edited Apr 24, 2009 08:42PM) (new)

D.C. | 35 comments Thanks Brigid and Annie =)


message 29: by Marley (new)

Marley (Marleyme95) | 977 comments I'm fo realz Caleb! I love this one, I shant analize, because you probably have different ideas then mine. Do tell why you wrote it.


message 30: by D.C. (new)

D.C. | 35 comments Well you tell me what it means to you? I don't want my meaning to ruin it for you =). The beauty of a poem is in how it is interpreted


message 31: by Marley (new)

Marley (Marleyme95) | 977 comments I don't tell what ?I think, I shall keep it in my brain, or else, I feel I might be wrong, so you tell me, you won't ruinn it, I'm to stubborn for that.


message 32: by D.C. (new)

D.C. | 35 comments Okay. I wrote it because of dallas actually. He seemed so down. I wanted to show that not all life is bleak. That friends are there to help you through life. For you to understand that life's to short to worry about how other see you. Okay, now what did you get out of it?


message 33: by Marley (new)

Marley (Marleyme95) | 977 comments Same sort of things. You see things badly alone, until someone prys your eyes open and makes you see there's some good out there to.


message 34: by D.C. (last edited Apr 24, 2009 09:11PM) (new)

D.C. | 35 comments Cool, we're on the same page there. I have read so much poetry where I had no idea whether he was talking about this or that


message 35: by Marley (new)

Marley (Marleyme95) | 977 comments Yeah...


message 36: by D.C. (new)

D.C. | 35 comments Okay so yesterday I didn't write, mainly because I had my Prom =). But I think it was worth it, I had fun dancing


message 37: by Marley (new)

Marley (Marleyme95) | 977 comments YAY! Prom! Who'd you go with?


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

that sounds fun!


message 39: by D.C. (new)

D.C. | 35 comments It wasn't with anyone(nobody went with people, its a new thing). Instead I dancing with many different girls and I didn't have to make anyone feel bad =). It was so much fun


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

That sounds almost like the perfect prom. I'm glad you had a fun time!



message 41: by Marley (new)

Marley (Marleyme95) | 977 comments Stupid players, lol, jk. My dance is at the beginning of June! I finally got my dress.


message 42: by D.C. (new)

D.C. | 35 comments I did not play anyone Marley! For some reason you have this image of me as always being after girls. I'm really down to earth(more so than most guys)


message 43: by Marley (new)

Marley (Marleyme95) | 977 comments CONGRADULATIONS! You aren't an ashole, good for you, lol. I was kidding, I know in reality, you aren't nearly as awesome as we think you are, jk. :D I'm so meam to everyone.


message 44: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) omg marley, how do you possibly spell 'congratulations' wrong? and dont be mean to him!


message 45: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments O.o wowww ... *backs away slowly*


message 46: by Marley (new)

Marley (Marleyme95) | 977 comments Because I did, He knows I'm screwing with him, Mimi, back away, or I kill Seth. You know what I'm getting at ;D go write somewhere, don't you have stuff to do.


message 47: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) dont you have soemthing to read, marley?


message 48: by Marley (new)

Marley (Marleyme95) | 977 comments You talking about your story? Yeah, yeah, I'm getting ot it. I've got stuff.

That was weak.


message 49: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) i wasnt trying to attack you, i was just distracting you. and look! it worked! hahahaha


message 50: by Marley (new)

Marley (Marleyme95) | 977 comments From what were you distracting me? Yeah, whatev, I got Mormons to make fun of. DON'T HIT ME FOR THAT TOMMORO!


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