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Caleb's Capable Cord(Thread)
Oh no! I got busy. Even though I've been writing I haven't kept track. Okay i would have to say in the last 4 day I wrote 1400 words. So that brings my total to....2508 words. Okay I'm setting a different word count: 300 words a day
Haha well I need to start over I am horrible at this. Okay starting tomorrow I will write up to 300 words a day and I will do it without fail!
Haha now I have goodreads friends! Interesting feeling, its weird cause I'll probably never see you guys face to face
Alright so I just wrote this poem and I'm curious if this is the place to publish my writing? I'll do it anyway!Our Dreams are dead. What could have been said that would lead to such dread?
How then would you act
If your life and free will
Were taken away, set on a track
Where there is no turning back
And no way to fulfill, the purpose
Given to life to give meaning, in a world
Of meaningless things
Purpose that was yours
The purpose that all of man sings
Eyes watching, making sure death is complete
In your own eye, hope
Laying Unseen
Because death, like winter, is a temporary thing
The dream will come back
No matter how hard you try to kill it
Doesn’t matter who trys to steal it
The Human Spirit will fight on
Thanks Mimi. I'm talking of a world where freedom is dead(I read 1984 so sue me haha). But you can never truly kill the humar spirit
ARGH, don't remind me, I must finish that book, but it is long, and causes me headaches. I MUST finish it...*smacks head down*
Haha Marley, its not so bad just try and picture the world. I find it facinating, but to each his own. See Mimi I changed it from Michelle
That is the most awesome poem ever!
Okay I wrote about 400 words today. Here is a poem( I didn't finish the other one)that i wrote about 10 minutes agoYou walk through streets of black and white
Color may have existed, but you are dead to it
The coldness of sadness killed all the colored light
That once in your heart was lit, pain left in its wake
But your life will go on, day to day, you will live
Peoples eyes watching you, judging your actions and appearance
No matter how hard you try, or what you give
To try and feel better, love and health, it never changes your stance
Life in just more blacker than white
Now what if I painted you a picture? Of many a color
And I showed you my picture, of how I see the black streets
To see life as it should be, through the eyes of a brother
A caring friend, who opens up possibilities to reach your peaks
Because truly those streets contain colorful life, that you could see
Just look through the pain, the smiling faces of venders in red caps
The innocent children playing in the green summer heat so freely
Couples lying in the parks, loving life and each other, lovely saps
I want you to smile innocently and freely, with love in your eyes
Because time flys and peoples lives are to short, to believe black lies
I'm fo realz Caleb! I love this one, I shant analize, because you probably have different ideas then mine. Do tell why you wrote it.
Well you tell me what it means to you? I don't want my meaning to ruin it for you =). The beauty of a poem is in how it is interpreted
I don't tell what ?I think, I shall keep it in my brain, or else, I feel I might be wrong, so you tell me, you won't ruinn it, I'm to stubborn for that.
Okay. I wrote it because of dallas actually. He seemed so down. I wanted to show that not all life is bleak. That friends are there to help you through life. For you to understand that life's to short to worry about how other see you. Okay, now what did you get out of it?
Same sort of things. You see things badly alone, until someone prys your eyes open and makes you see there's some good out there to.
Cool, we're on the same page there. I have read so much poetry where I had no idea whether he was talking about this or that
Okay so yesterday I didn't write, mainly because I had my Prom =). But I think it was worth it, I had fun dancing
It wasn't with anyone(nobody went with people, its a new thing). Instead I dancing with many different girls and I didn't have to make anyone feel bad =). It was so much fun
That sounds almost like the perfect prom. I'm glad you had a fun time!
I did not play anyone Marley! For some reason you have this image of me as always being after girls. I'm really down to earth(more so than most guys)
CONGRADULATIONS! You aren't an ashole, good for you, lol. I was kidding, I know in reality, you aren't nearly as awesome as we think you are, jk. :D I'm so meam to everyone.
Because I did, He knows I'm screwing with him, Mimi, back away, or I kill Seth. You know what I'm getting at ;D go write somewhere, don't you have stuff to do.








Goal: Have A Reason to Live done by the end of 2009
Words per day:500(I like to write a lot)
Okay I'm starting tomarrow(March 24, 2009).
Wish me luck