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Here we go. Do you have your plot and form?


message 2: by Carlos (last edited Jun 29, 2015 09:31PM) (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Name: Alex Garcia
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Appearance: (use picture or link to picture)
https://p.gr-assets.com/540x540/fit/h...

Alex is an guy of 6'0 weighing 215 lbs though just muscle and no fat with ink/raven black hair and silver-gold eyes like an eclipse that contain an great deal of sadness and danger. He has smooth russet skin and snow white teeth with an warm and charming smile that drives females crazy though he doesn't smile that much along with being extremely muscular. He has an muscular, strong and lean body build with having an 8 pack, muscles, triceps and biceps along with being extremely handsome with dark and sexy looks. He also has an extremely dangerous, menacing and ruthless look to him.

Werewolf appearance: (use picture or link to picture) http://orig15.deviantart.net/1490/f/2...

Personality: Alex is an kind and fun loving guy though he doesn't say that much and only talks when he has. He can use his environment or his surroundings to his advantage as well as quick thinking on his feet. He is caring and protective over his friends along with standing up for others if he sees that they are getting picked on, bullied or teased as well as being funny and sweet. He can be, at times, rude and cold along with having an hot head temper that he tries to keep in cheek. He is also somewhat of an lady's man and know how to show an girl an good/fun along with being somewhat of an party person though he knows when enough is enough as well as being a little of an tease towards the females as well as being an thrill seeker and an dare devil, always doing dangerous stunts though there is another side of him is more cold, ruthless and more enjoying a fight then the other side of him.

Likes:
* Music
* Being by himself
* Playing music
* Playing video games
* The forest
* Nature
* Storms
* Fighting
* Night

Dislikes:
* Showoffs
* Being told what to do
* Being bossed around
* Bullies
* Jerks

(I got this idea from an tv show called wolves) i was thinking of it being with Guy A being in high school and is popular along with being on the football team as well as turning out to be an werewolf though he hasnt changed yet nor does he know that he is one or that there are such things as werewolfs until he starts to change at a football game with his powers start happening and his instincts start taking over which ends up with an player from the other team getting very hurt and the following night his parents are butchered/slaughtered by something which ends up with guy A going off to find more about his heritage. Several days later he comes upon an town where he ends up winded inside the only pub in town that girl A owns and they start talking when guy A almost gets into an foght with one pf the infected pack members but is stopped then he taken in by an farmer couple with the husband being an purebred werewolf and his wofe being an human though guy A doesnt know and a couple of days later he finds out that the husband farmer as well as an few other people are purebred werewolves and girl A as well as her sister, all of them being what is left of the old lines (meaning pureblood lines). Girl A has been promised to another pureblood werewolf who is mean, violent and decides who gets to live or die in the town as well as an leader of an pack of infected werewolves, all of them dangerous as they mostly had stayed in their werewolf forms then human. Even though girl A doesnt like that she is promised to another werewolf as well as the others, they and she as well as her sister knows it is necisary to keep the peace and the knowledge of werewolves an secret from humans but guy A sure as heck doesnt like it as both guy and girl A have strong feelings for each other so guy A decides to start fighting back against the rival pack though he discovers some stuff about his real parents that changes him. (Basically the the rival pureblood werewolf ends up being guy A father as well as some other stuff)


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I like it. I should have my character form up soon.


message 4: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Okay


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I'm almost done, but I can't see any of the pictures you linked to.


message 6: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Okay and fixed it


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((Sorry it took way longer than expected.))

Name: Evangeline Sahvra
Age: 18
Gender: Female


Appearance:
http://boomdinahmightt.tumblr.com/pos...
Evangeline is very pretty, with tanned skin and blue eyes. She has soft brown hair with blond and red highlights; she normally holds it in a loose braid with a feather and beads for decoration. She's five foot six inches tall, with toned muscles from working, and an athletic build.

Werewolf Appearance:
http://aaronsimscompany.deviantart.co...
http://pinterest.com/pin/398639004488...


Personality: Evangeline is a strong girl, though she sometimes shows weak spots. She's extremely protective and loyal, and won't let anyone get between her and someone she loves. She's sarcastic and snarky, but it's mostly a front to protect herself from unwanted attention and harm. Underneath, she is sweet and kind, and likes to help those in need.
The pub she runs with her sister is known to be a part of a conspiracy that helps werewolves on the run from her scary fiancé, even going as far as to get them new ID's and established places in the human world.


Likes:
-Her sister
-Music
-Singing
-Running her pub
-Reading
-Rain and snow
-Stars
-Nighttime

Dislikes:
-Her fiancé
-Violence
-People being rude
-Her parents (for leaving her and her sister after promising her to the alpha)


((Look good?))


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Yea and cool character


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks and ditto. Can you start? If I do I won't be able to until tomorrow.


message 10: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex laughed as he walked through the crowded corridor/hallway of the high school with his bag slung over his shoulder, waving slightly at people as he passed them and they waved a bit at him. It was the middle of the school year for the 18 year old quarterback/runner senior and so far school had gone right the whole semester, him being popular again and people talking about the football game that was going to happen later that day between them and another schools team. Word had reached them that the other team had talked trash on them before and now they were pumped to beat them.


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

((Okay, so, did you want me to... What? Use one of his teammates? Multiple people?))


message 12: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (Yes please if you can. until he leaves town)


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A tall figure pushed trough the crowd, rising shouts of impatience at him while he tried to reach Alex.

The guy was beefy and scary, with long brown dreadlocks and a piercing stare. That was probably why the crowd had parted for him so easily. When he got to Alex, he -lightly as he could- punched Alex in the shoulder as greeting.

"Man," Jordan cursed lightly, "I just heard something about the rival team. Another story about them sabotaging their opponents before games, ya know, without getting caught. We have to be careful." The angry look on his face told that he intended to teach them a lesson.


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((Do you want me to change it?))


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex looked at Jordan when he punched him in the arm and after listening to him talking he said "You and the rest of the team get way to into and serious about the game then other teams, you know that roght?" and an hint of amusment was in his vpice as well as his eyes when he talked. It was true as their team seemed to take the game way to seriously then others do but hey, he couldn't really change it or do amything about it.


message 16: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 29, 2015 09:39PM) (new)

Jordan smirked, rubbing a fist into the palm of his other hand. "No such thing, man. The game is life." He let a booming laugh escape his lips as he paused to stop at his locker, exchanging some books before hurrying to catch back up with Alex. "Who are you raking to the party later tonight?" he asked with an exaggerated eyebrow wiggle and another laugh as his girlfriend came into walk with them.

"Someone interesting, please," Moira begged as the goth pulled her long, black hair intk a sloppy bun.


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((Hold on... It cut off. Bleh.))


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "I don't know of I am going. Haven't been feelimg well ever since last night." Alex replied simply as he continued walking though he gave Mpora an slight hug as he always did whenever he greeted her as he troed tp hide what was wrong with him though he didn't know he did a good job at dping it and knew he couldnt hide the last thing that was wrong with him. It was true that he hadn't been feeling well since the night before as his head was hurting and his bones ached as his body erupted with pain from time to time as well as his body trembling and his body temperature seeming to go up though he hadn't noticed that last affect until someone told him that his skin felt hot as if he had an fever.


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Moira gave a concerned frown, turning her hand and pressing it to Alex's forehead. "You're feverish. Maybe you have the flu? Or a bug?" she questioned before Jordan wrapped her from the waist and pulled her away.

"You're gonna get it if he is, Moira," he cautioned, while she wriggled from his grip. "You will, too, you dope. You just touched me." Jordan gave an uneasy laugh, shrugging it off as Moira turned her attention back to Alex.

"You need someone to take you to the nurse? For a pain reliever or something?" she asked, furrowing her brow.


message 20: by Carlos (last edited Jun 30, 2015 07:57AM) (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "I'm fine. It'll go away." Alex said but then his head started hurting and he backed up as he said "I need to go. I'll see you guys later." then he turned around and walked away from them to his locker whoch was around the corner a bit down more. He got to his locker and he pressed his forehead against it and he pressed his palms against the lockers on both sodes of him as he gritted his teeth, the pain growing worse and he punched one of the lockers next to him, the noise of metal bwing smashed sounding off through the hall way as he unknowingly made an rather larger then normal fist size dent in the metal of the locker and making ot swing open from the force and he turned around then slowly slumped down with his bag against the lockers so he was sitting down and his eyes closed tightly woth his hands pressed against his forehead as he waited for the pain to slowly subside


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Moira and Jordan shared a look, lazily following after their friend. In the hallway surrounding Alex, kids were staring, but passing by. "Probably steroids," the two could hear a passing junior mutter. Jordan gritted his teeth and stepped forward, about to ask his friend if he needed help when he hit the locker.

Moira jumped back with a yelp as the locker flew open, her eyes widening as Jordan stepped backwards with raised eyebrows. "I'm going to get the nurse," Moira murmured as she turned to jog away.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments As the pain slowly went away, Alex moved his hands from his face though he kept his eyes closed as he controlled his breathing when the back of his neck tingled amd he opened his eyes to see people staring at him and an flicker of confusion appeared in his eyes then he looked up next to him and his eyes appeared shocked and surprised at the dented now open locker above him. He thought "What the heck did I do?" as he got up and touched the locker whoch was hanging on by an hinge and he cursed silently when the locker door fell down off its hinge though he quickly caught it in his hands faster then someone should have and just stared at the locker door in his hands as he troed to remember what had happened.


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Moira searches the nurse's office and surrounding halls but couldn't find her, jogging back to find Jordan trying to clear the kids around Alex away. She saw Alex hold the locker door and mumbled to Jordan, "I can't find Nurse Beckham," before cautiously moving to Alex and gently touching his arm.

"Alex? Are you okay?" she said, her eyes darting to the people staring. They could hear some commotion heading down the hallway -probably teachers coming to stop whatever was going on.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex didn't answer as he just looked at the dented metal door in his hands as he still trued to figure out what was happening then a few seconds later he said "Yea." when he heard the sound of feet as someone walked towards the group and he gently tried to put the locker back in its place, managing to make it stay where it was suppose to be so it looked like nothing happened to it besides the large dent in it. He didn't try to keave or walk away though despite the sound of teachers walking towards them but he didn't care as he was still in a bit of an shock.


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As the teachers approached, Moira backed off, but they took one look at Alex and the lockers and turned to his two companions. "What's going on?" one of them, a freshman history teacher demanded.

Jordan was terrible at lying so he stuttered foe an excuse, but Moira shook her head in shush at him. Turning to the teachers, she lied easily, "So. You know how Alex has been into hard core rock lately, right?" She said it so convincingly that they slowly nodded, even though it wasn't true. "So, we were jamming out to this new song by, uh... Sworn In, and head banging, you know, and Alex and I happened to hit the exact same locker at the exact same time -imagine that- and we kind of... Dented it, obviously."

The two teachers exchanged glances from Moira to Alex to each other, then asked Alex, "Is this true?" Moira made a point of hiding her fist into her sleeve so they couldn't see that skin hadn't been broken on her knuckles.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex looked back at the teachers with an bored expression when they had arrived and an small sound came feom him at one of the teachers that was talking though it didn't sound like an noise of nervousnes but rather more like an growl of some sort of giant canine. When Jordan had almost started talking Alex though "I'm screwed." when Moria started talking and he had an calm look though inside he was trying hard not to laugh as Moria talked then he waoted until the teacjers looked at him and he shook his head slightly then said "Yea." as the locker gave an small squeal sound of metal on metal. He didnt bother with the pount of trying to hide his hand that he punched the locker with as it was just a bit red though his hand should have been more injured from punching metal.


message 27: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 30, 2015 04:51PM) (new)

"Someone could have been hurt," scolded the taller teacher (someone for math... Something? Maybe an assistant), looking from Moira to Alex again with a disdained look. Moira registered the weird sound coming from Alex but shrugged it off as one of pain. "We should honestly send the both of you to the office but the game is supposed t start soon, and you, Alex, and Jordan have to get going. Moira, we'll let you off." He paused, considering. "For now."

Moira sagged her shoulders in relief, stealing a glance at Alex before nodding respectfully at the teachers, apologizing profusedly.


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((Ugh! It did it again! Just a second.))


message 29: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (Kay)


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

((There we go.))


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex just listened quietly though he did notice Moira look at him weirdly and after the teacher stopped talking he fixed his bag and walked away without waiting for the others, the crowd parting for him as he walked through him and he quickly became lost and unseen within the other crowd ofpeople that were still walking. He was still in a bit of a shock of what happened he at the moment he needed to be alone without anyone else so he could clear his head and try to figure out what was going wrong with him.


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Moira stared at Alex's retreating back, figuring he honestly wanted to be alone this time. "You're welcome, man," Jordan said for her, looping an arm around her shoulders as the teachers talked amongst themselves while they began to walk away.

Once everything had sort of returned to normal in the hallway, Moira and Joran exchanged a look. "That was really weird," Moira voiced, looking off in the direction that Alex had gone.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex had retreated into one of the empty classrooms and was standing infront of one of the many windows that were in that room, staring blankly outside with his arms crossed over his chest. He didn't understand what was happening to him or why it was happening to him but he dod his best to ignore it though when he did the memories of the nightmares just came back. He had been having them for a few nights now though instead of different ones it had been the same one over and over again with the sounds of screaming with flashes of bodies bloody and in pieces with the noghtmares waking him up in the muddle of the night yelling and scaring his parents. That had been the first sign that something was wrong and now more stufd was now happening to him.


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Unfortunately, with the more-than-minor commotion Alex had caused with twenty students surrounding the football star, news got around the school extremely fast. There was only so much Jordan and Moira could do, but they tried to get the buzz to die down.

They couldn't find Alex. The two knew he had wanted to be alone, but time was slipping by fast and classes were over. It was soon time for the game, but no one had seen him since the freak episode. He was probably off glowering in a classroom or something, but it was a large school. By the time they found him -if they searched the classrooms, that is- the game would have already started.

Alex needed to get out there himself.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex had decided to stay in the abandoned empty classroom for mostly the entire school day but after looking at the time and seeing how late it was getting, he knew he had to go get ready for the game. He aoghed and said "Can't stay hidden in here for the entire day." and so with those few words he grabbed his bag and slung it over his shoulder before walking out of the classroom and closing the door behind him. He walked down through the dark empty hallway to where the locker rooms where at but he stopped and took some short but deep breaths as he tried to calm himself down and steady his quickened heartbeat. After managing to do that he braced himself and slowly walked into the locker room, heading to his locker while keeping an mask of complete calmness on.


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After an entire day of wondering where Alex was, Moira had personally given up on looking for the guy, but Jordan was anxiously waiting in the locker room after school, tapping his foot in time to absolutely nothing.

When he saw his good friend, Jordan hopped up and darted his eyes to the other teammates before stalking to Alex at his locker. He patted his arm excessively reassuringly as he said, "Yo, man, that last period was crazy, right?" Although anyone with eyes would have seen the empty chair in which the star football player should have sat.

((What kind of video games do you like?))


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (Um... anything with violence like mortal kombat, call of duty)

Alex half heartly said "Yea. Crazy." though he didnt sound very into it as he got to his locker and opened it taking out his equipment before setting his bag down and taking off his regular shirt which exposed his upper body build for a minute until he put on his football shirt, http://epicsports.cachefly.net/images..., though it was tight so it still showed his build, his arms appearing thick with his biceps and triceps as well as muscles clearly defined. In all alex was probably the strongest and fastest on the team as well as being most built which also quickly made him quarterback of the team and popular in the school though he didn't really care about being popular.


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((Oh. I prefer more storyline; Last of Us, Beyond: Two Souls, Tomb Raider. But that's cool.))

Jordan grunted when he didn't get much of a response, though he wasn't perfectly sure what he had wanted. What, a, 'I wasn't there, you dope. I was out ripping heads off of large animals,' or something along the line? Pfft.

He moved away to go refill his water bottle as this annoying kid who filled in as part-time mascot stepped up to Alex. "I- I heard you killed someone earlier with your foot?" A ridiculous question, one probably unwarranted considering he had heard it from this girl who had it out for him.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex stopped as he was about to close his locker door with the rest of his equipment in his other hand and an growl like sound came from him that sounded like an very big and angry wolf growling and the equipment in his hand fell down to the floor with an loud clatter as in a blink of an eye he was suddenly holding the mascot by the front of his costume several feet in the air with one hand easily. He looked up at the mascot and said "I'm not in the mood for ridiculous questions coming from you, the person who told you that or anyone else." with the anger clear in his voice and face when his eye color suddenly changed from an warm and dark choclate brown to the erie color an eclipse, http://www.eyesbright.com/images/prod..., and their appearance changing so they resembled the eyes of an wolf before changing back to normal though the anger was still in his eyes


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"Oh... My god..." The mascot kid's voice was squeaky and fear-filled as he stopped his squirming to stare at Alex's eyes, though the wonder of their change had already passed. "Your... Eyes, Alex..." They were making quite a scene, and Jordan's attention was attracted yet again.

The bigger guy ran over and pulled Alex's shoulder back, pushing the two apart as Jordan gave a confused look between Alex and the mascot. "What the hell is going on, Alex?" he said in an almost-growl, standing as almost a protectant for the kid from his friend. Attacking a locker was one thing, but a person? Something was seriously wrong.


message 41: by Carlos (last edited Jul 30, 2015 05:44PM) (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex faced jordan and another growl came from him like the one from a few seconds earlier as he towered over his friend by just an inch when the angier from earlier dissapeared and he took an step back as he murmured "I don't know what your talking about." then he turned around and picked up his equipment before putting it on except for his helmet and walked out of the lockers out into the hallway refusing to look at anybody else. In truth he really didn't know what was happening to him and it scared him a bit quite frankly.


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Murmurs arose from the other players in the locker room, Is he growling?; What the hell is his problem?; I heard he's been on steroids- at that last one Jordan turned around and gave the ugliest, meanest look he could before pulling on the rest of his football gear and heading out, holding onto his helmet. The rest of the team followed quick after, but Jordan lagged behind in the hallway for a bit, trying to figure out what could possibly be going on. True, it seemed like Alex had started on drugs, or maybe had a withdrawal, but was it likely? As far as he knew his friend wasn't a druggie. The rumors were ridiculous. He waited another beat before jogging to catch up out in the field.


message 43: by Carlos (last edited Jul 30, 2015 07:25PM) (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex had already got to the field and was in the middle of talking with the teams coach. By the way alexs hands were moving and the aggitation on both of their faces they seemed to be arguing until Alex noticed the others coming and without another word he turned away before walking towards the rest of the team, agitation on his face as he put on his helmet.

https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedi...


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The field had an air of agitation settled around it as Moira settled onto her usual bench, a couple of their other friends already waiting there, talking in hushed tones. They broke away from being bent towards each other and stopped their whispering when they noticed the goth sitting with them. She plastered on a smile and asked, "What're you two discussing?"

They shrugged and mumbled excuses, turning away from her and fixating on a point past the field. Moira scowled and muttered, "I thought so," as she waved at Jordan as the team rallied up. In the distance the bus with the other team loaded onto it killed its' engine in the school's parking lot.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex stopped in front of the others and glanced up at the moon before looking at them again and said "Alright. Coach said that to save the new play we've been practicin for the last quarter of the game and just do the plays we been doing the past few games." then he turned around again but then stopped and looked at them again then said "And I'm sorry for acting how I have been for most of today though its not due to steroids as i dont take them. Just havent been feeling myself today." He was mostly apologizing to Jordan and when he mentioned steriods he had looked at every person that had said it in the eyes to let them know he had heard everything.


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How could he possibly know that? It's not like he's been paying attention to the goings-on of today, was somewhat of the thoughts of a few of the teammates. Jordan gave Alex a solemn nod to let him know he understood, though he truly didn't. He hadn't seen anything like this -ever. But he wanted to support his friend, and he truly hadn't hurt anyone, so what reason fid he have to be afraid like the rest of their team? Screw that, the rest of their school? Even a few teachers could have been heard whispering about the oddity that had been of Alex that day.

After Jordan gave them a menacing scowl, a few more teammates spoke their support for Alex. Crap like, 'We wouldn't think you'd been on drugs anyway, man', even out of the mouths of the traitors, which earned an eyeroll from Jordan.

((To be honest, I don't know anything about football. Mind if he turns sooner rather than later on in the game?))


message 47: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (I kind of dont either since its been a while since I played football lol and we could skip to the last quarter of the game if you want since thats when i was planning for him to turn a bit)


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((I just never pay attention. Sounds good to me.))


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (Okay)

An hour later, Alex was running back to the teams side of the field with an grin on his face as he went though he didn't appear to be coming close to slowing down, being tired or exhausted like most of the team and the people on the schools side of the stands cheering. He had just helped jordan score a touchedown and now they were a point ahead of the other team meaning that they just needed to score one more to win the game.


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When Jordan caught up to running alongside Alex, he clapped him on the back, his breathing ragged as he said, "Nice going!" Though it wasn't sarcastic at all. He had noticed that Alex hadn't seemed to slow down at all, and one pointed glance at Moira showed she had been thinking the same thing. Even though it was a stupid move on the team's part, Jordan told Alex, "Hey, why don't you go take a water break? We'll bring in Jackson for a few." He started to wave the other guy over.


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