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Tales told - a.k.a free reads > June 2015 Flash Fiction - 2 - B&W bench - WRITE 100 words

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message 1: by Kaje (last edited Jun 05, 2015 08:36AM) (new)

Kaje Harper | 17377 comments So here's the challenge : write exactly 100 words, no more and no less, about this picture. Evoke a mood, tell a joke, make it a poem... Anything you like.

100 words. A drabble of Flash Fiction.

Please mark your drabble with #2 or *2 (or a bold-letter title - those words don't count in the 100) or something in the first line so we can easily tell a Drabble from the comments. I'll link them as usual below.

Have fun. Don't worry about polish. Drabble away.





message 2: by Kaje (last edited Jul 01, 2015 07:16AM) (new)

Kaje Harper | 17377 comments reserved for links

Kaje

Riina


message 3: by Kaje (last edited Jun 12, 2015 09:51AM) (new)

Kaje Harper | 17377 comments #2

I love you, you love me
Lie down here for all to see

Touch my face, smile that smile
Hang out with me for a while

That girl sighs as she goes by
Sweet jealousy of you and I

That one gives a scornful glance
I grin and reach inside your pants

Her huff could blow a bonfire out
Yeah too bad, bigot, run and pout.

The court will soon give the okay
For us to share a name someday

So take your selfish little mind
And shove it up your tight behind.
We have a love you'll never find.


message 4: by Riina (new)

Riina Y.T. (ibxxxriina) | 469 comments Aw, that was cute! :)


message 5: by Mel (new)

Mel (melleach) Kaje wrote: "#2

I love you, you love me
Lie down here for all to see

Touch my face, smile that smile
Hang out with me for a while

That girl sighs as she goes by
Sweet jealousy of you and I

That one gives a ..."


:-) I always love your poems.


message 6: by Kaje (last edited Jun 26, 2015 07:40AM) (new)

Kaje Harper | 17377 comments LOL - I had fun :) Thanks.

And today was the day the court came through for the name-sharing; :D




message 7: by Tully (new)

Tully Vincent (tully_vincent) | 78 comments Nice, Kaje!!


message 8: by Kaje (last edited Jun 26, 2015 08:03AM) (new)

Kaje Harper | 17377 comments :)

I love the chance to play with words - you should try it sometime. 100 words is a nice short length, fast to do, and the exact number is just enough challenge.


message 9: by Riina (new)

Riina Y.T. (ibxxxriina) | 469 comments #2


"Did you have fun?" I asked Tray, holding my breath.

"Yes," he said easily.

I sent a prayer into the universe, relieved I hadn't scared him away.

"The cliff was fun, wasn't it?"

He nodded. "Wish I was like you, though."

"Tray." I said firmly, trailing a finger along his jaw. "If wishes were fishes..."

"Show me more of your world, Sapphire."

I grinned up, loving the challenging gleam in his eyes.

"You'll trust me?"

Tray called me fearless; but it was him who'd always been so unafraid.

"Without a doubt."

A smirk and he bent to kiss me sweetly.


message 10: by Mel (new)

Mel (melleach) Great, Riina. I want to know what happened next :-)


message 11: by Kaje (new)

Kaje Harper | 17377 comments Tantalizing sweetness. :) Thank you.


message 12: by Riina (new)

Riina Y.T. (ibxxxriina) | 469 comments Thank you Mel and Kaje. Happy you liked it :)


message 13: by Tully (new)

Tully Vincent (tully_vincent) | 78 comments Nice, Riina! Thanks.


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