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June 2015 Flash Fiction - 1 - guys under the moon - WRITE 100 words
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#1His Oberon was perfect - British accent, each consonant clear as glass, each vowel rounded – I could've drowned in the liquid chocolate sound of his voice. And tonight, finally, it was my turn to be beside him.
Thank goodness for food poisoning. Also for a month of watching from the wings, practicing, because when I stared into Sylvester's face my brain melted. Reflexes saved me.
When the curtain fell, I waited, not moving.
Then he said, in flat, drawling Midwestern tones, “Hey, wanna go for beer?”
Old dreams died... but the new ones might be even better. “Sure,” I said.
Kaje wrote: "#1His Oberon was perfect - British accent, each consonant clear as glass, each vowel rounded – I could've drowned in the liquid chocolate sound of his voice. And tonight, finally, it was my turn ..."
Very nice, Kaje.
#1“Where's your shirt?” Akryn asked, his voice dark and demanding.
“In a ditch, soaked in blood,” I said with a shrug.
“They'll try again.”
He still wouldn't look at me.
“I'm ready.”
Akryn stayed quiet. I reached for his hand.
“I am,” I said more firmly. “You know I am.”
My fingers brushed his.
“They're strong, Dreyz.”
His thumb wound around mine.
“I'm stronger,” I insisted, knowing he would eventually give in and let me fight.
I wouldn't leave his side.
His voice was cold, his eyes dangerous when our gazes finally met.
“Don't you dare die on me.”
“Never.”
Mel wrote: "This is great, Riina. Thanks for sharing."Thank you, Mel. I'm happy you liked it :)
Ooh, great feels, Riina :) I like the mood of it.
Kaje wrote: "Ooh, great feels, Riina :) I like the mood of it."Thank you, Kaje! :) I'd love to write more but I just know I'll never finish it. It's so hard to stick with a story :/
Riina wrote: "Kaje wrote: "Ooh, great feels, Riina :) I like the mood of it."Thank you, Kaje! :) I'd love to write more but I just know I'll never finish it. It's so hard to stick with a story :/"
Sometimes it's fun to just throw bits out there. Sometime you'll hit one that won't let you stop, and that's the story you'll write.
100 words. A drabble of Flash Fiction.
Please mark your drabble with #1 or *1 (or a bold-letter title - those words don't count in the 100) or something in the first line so we can easily tell a Drabble from the comments. I'll link them as usual below.
Have fun. Don't worry about polish. Drabble away.