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Answer My Question
No, I'm afraid I'm boring :)Do you have a special and unique talent?
WRITINGNESS. But I'm also athletic and good with competitive debate and public speaking. I have an aptitude for memorization and history.
Answer my questionWILL YOU DO A 1X1 ROLEPLAY WITH ME
Oops. Forgot my question. How many knockoff goblins are there (only counting Hobgoblin as one)?
5WILL SOMEONE DO A 1x1 ROLEPLAY WITH ME?
If you find the right person, I'm confident.If you were to fight Superman, how fast could he beat you?
He couldn't beat me I have kryptonite
Uh-huh. Just ask Lex Luther how that strategy works, and how Supes can't fly away from you and shoot you with, say, lasers from his eyes, without coming nearly close enough for the kryptonite radiation.Good luck.
You need to ask a question.
Will you roleplay with me?
Sorry, no, I stink at roleplaying. I always go out of character and make jokes.Do you watch the twilight zone?
Once in a while, yes. I want to watch more. Do you watch Sherlock(BBC, not the American one)?
I've seen most of them.If you could pick any super power, what would the worst one be?
Animal humpong pheromones And MANIAC WILL YOU ROLEPLAY WITH ME?
What?No, thanks. I only do advanced roleplays now.
Dragon vs Hulk, would that be a good fight?
Ummmmm, don't know much about the Hulk (though I really want to get into comics and Marvel and that stuff more) but I'm still gonna say Hulk, cuz in the Avengers movie when Bruce Banner tried to kill himself, his Hulk self stopped him, so I figure it would be too hard for a dragon to kill him.Why do you like to read?
So many reasons.. Curiosity mostly. To escape reality, to travel different worlds, feelings, adventures that I cant have 'irl', friends.. Yep.Same?
Because I get to live, have an adventure with the characters, learn new things, it's sometimes an escape, but not always, and it gives me a connection with my friends. Just a couple reasons.What is the wildest, funnest, perhaps most embarassing thing you've ever done?
Hm... Most embarrassing, so many to pick...When I was a kid, I tried to care for a hard-boiled egg until it hatched, brought it in my backpack on a family trip, and the car still smells like rotten eggs.
Or maybe the first time the doctor asked for a urine sample, after I got back home, I thought they might want more, so I filled a Gatorade bottle.
There was some confusion later over the... Gatorade.
Do you like the villain's reason or actual villaining better in the story?
The villain's reason, cuz I like lots of backstory.Would you rather be a superhero, or a super villain, and why?
Oh. That thar's a toughie... I guess there's more job security being the hero, but the villain's a lot more fun.How cheap is it to inexplicably bring back dead characters?
Super hero, because VILLIANS NEVER WIN.Marvel or DC and why?
In the case of Sherlock Holmes, no one cares cause everyone back then wanted him back. Usually, it's a bad move that creates bad plot holes these days.Do you listen to k-pop (Korean pop, for those who don't know)?
I listen to a little bit of J-pop, if that counts for anything...What is your favorite music group/artist?
Flyleaf! I love them even after they got a new lead singer!What are you reading now?
The Poison Eaters and Other Short Stories, by Holly Black.Eragon, by Christopher Paolini.
The kite Runner, by Khaled Hosseini.
That Was Then, This is Now, by S.E. Hinton
Same?
The Birth of Venus by Sarah DunantThe Uglies by Scott Westerfield
How Not to Die by Jan Garavaglia
and Dither Farm by Sid Hite
If you could ask 1 question to a fictional character, who would it be and what would you ask?
Jacob from Mirrorworld. "Will you marry me?" xD
I'm kidding.
Really.
I don't think I'd need to ask anything because I'm already reading all about them.
Same?
Superman: "Why didn't you just shoot your own laser vision into Zod while he was trying to kill that family in Man of Steel?"If you had laser vision, you'd be looking for every excuse to use it, right?
I really wish I could say yes, but I don't think humans are capable of doing it right. We're too flawed.Have you ever had a righteous anger?
No, but I have been thoroughly pissed plenty of times before.Who's your OTP (One True Pairing, aka, who do you ship the most)?
Don't have one What do you think about this story
Prologue
On planet melgia ( a world that is million years ahead of us and is beautiful and has amazing things and because there so ahead in technology they help there allie planets
Kalel( Cal - Ell woke up and yells in his sisters ear" IT'S TIME FOR THE FIGHTGAMES" Kaia( Kia with a I saying its name) smiles and kisses her brothers nose and says to the tv" turn on FIGHTGAMES
" yes kaiiiaaaa " the tv turns the FIGHTGAMES on and Kaia winced" where is Soaren I'm going to kill him for making the tv call me that!"
Soaren was Kaia and kalels 15 year old brother. Kaia was 13 and kalel was 7 ." Sissy he managed to fake as a 18 year old and join the fightgames. Kaia gets a face of worry and sits down and rocks back in forth Kalel hugs her
* at the fighting arena*
Soaren held 2 energy blades in his hands and a man walks out he was big and muscular and had 2 alien dogs so were purple and had sharp teeth and wings .
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The dogs flew out at Soaren and he ducked and slammed the 2 swords into one of the dogs stomachs and then spread his arms and the dog was killed. The second clamped into soaren's arm but he jerked back and sliced him with the laser blades .
The man charged with a laser axe but Soaren slid under the man and slammed a sword into his crotch and then stood up and slammed the swords into his neck and then cut his head off. Kalel cheered but Kaia winced.
The head man of the Fightgames bolts up" THIS KID KILLED LAST YEARS RUNNER UP"
Soaren laughed" oh so was he the runner up to the second to die last year."
The head man valentine laughs " AWWW funny and a amazing fighter"
The father of the three children had snuck in" SOAREN I CAN'T BELIEVE HE DID THAT" Kaia flinches " D dad" Inocent kalel jumped up " DADDY SOAREN IS GOING TO WIN I KNOW IT!!! Dad nodded" he is a kristian of course he will!!!!
Kaia jumped up and hugs her dad crying " dad I love my older brother a I don't want him to die" the father frowns" he won't I promise sweety "
Soaren's next match was between the burglar Soaren's next match was between the burglar from planet drogon his name was jerald. Jerald had many knifes made of the sharpest steel and hatchets made of the steel and other weapons. Soaren stomps over the weapons were thrown by Jerald but he dodged " I have trained since I was 3 " he screams and slams a sword into a hatchet and sliced through it. Soaren focuses then his body glows red and he kicks Jerald and he goes flying then he tackles him and slams one of the laser swords through his heart.
The hours of matches went through till the last match at midnight " this will continue tommorow Soaren go get some rest" he says and closes his eyes
Soaren goes home and walks In kalels and Kaia's room they lived in a huge house but Kaia wanted to share a room with kalel and he was fine with it . He accidently walked in there then layed on Kaia's pink bed and curled up and fell asleep.
Kaia stretched when she woke up next to kalel in his bed . She must have fallen asleep watching the fight games . Then she realizes what if soaren's dead but then she looks at her bed and sees him curled in her pink blanket asleep . Kaia kisses kalels head then stands up and kisses soaren's head and whispers in his ear" wake up big brother" his eyes flutter and he wakes ... He never was a deep sleeper . Kaia hugs him tight " I was worried about you yesterday" she says tears forming in her eyes . He hugs her back" you know I would be fine what was it that father said that gave us a advantage sister?"
She nods and then quotes" axel the first child had the power of time control . Soaren the second child has the power of supeor strength strength . Kai the third child has the power of supeor smarts . The fourth child has the power of destruction ." Soaren nods and says" see nothing to worry about Kaia Im fine in those games ." Kaia sighs " brother I'm the smart one ... Your chances of winning agaisnt last years champion is 20 to 100" Soaren stretches and says" I destroyed Jerald pretty easily didnt I and I only used some of my inner strength" Kaia sighs and walks away and goes into the kitchen and says" one bowl of malfeasfent flakes please " a bowl of cereal raises from the table and she sits down and starts eating .
Soaren was walking into the kitchen and says" 12 PEICES of bacon how I like it" bacon starts to cook.
Kaia giggles" I can't believe you eat a food that people hundreds of years ago ate... Also it's made of What humans call pig and what we also call them" Soaren looks At her" on earth almost everybody loves bacon and we are a race that looks just like humans and are planet is like theirs just way ahead of them" Kaia nods then says suddenly" Soaren I miss axel". Soaren looks at the ground with a extremely sad look" I do to sis. He was the first super melagian " Kaia hugs Soaren but knocks her cereal over and it spills all over the ground but it is cleaned by the high tech house . Kelal walks in" I SMELL BACON!!!!!!! BACON BACON BACON BACON BACON BACOB" Soaren laughs" I've seen a earth commercial and they had a dog who said the exact same things " Kaia giggles" kelal is our little doggy "
" no I'm not" the bacon finishes and Soaren grabs six PEICES and kelal grabs 6 and they chew it down then soaren's says" the whole family gets front seats right where you can see the battle perfectly and your allowed to come into the locker rooms where many warriors are going to be because its a training fesilaty to" Kaia grins " so we get to go into the boys locker rooms to " Soaren Nods" yes but Kaia you better not go in there!" Kaia smirks" no promises I mean have you seen the teenage traines mmmmmm" Soaren storms out to the arena to get ready. Kelal runs in the bedroom of his mom and dad and jumps on their bed" DADDY MOMMY WE GET FRONT SEATS IN THE FIGHT GAMES!" Inge the mother smiles " wich relative of ours Is competing in the finals" Harold the father rolls out of bed and walks into the bathroom . Kelal jumps up " SOAREN IS MOMMY" Inge bolts up and screams in anger" WHAT IM GOING TO KILL THAT BOY .. If he doesn't die in the Arena" she starts to cry . Kaia ran in and picks kelal up and sets him outside the door then walks in and closes it" mom Soaren is doing fine.. Is it because of axel... Mom he died of a fire not in the fight games." Inge nods" I know but the fight games is a even worse way to lose a child " Harold walks out in says" Soaren will be fine.. All final fighters in the games get armor laser swords and multiple guns . Laser knifes and other weapons depending on their fighting style and sweety he has his powers " Inge makes Kaia go to the fight games with kelal .
Soaren put on his metal armor and slid guns and knifes and swords imo his holsters and other things that came with the armor . A big strong man with all the same things but bigger came and up close Soaren could see he had hard purple skin and wide blue eyes " good luck kid . You might win I've been watching you . You took down people that this words Greatest fighters have trouble with " he puts out his hand and Soaren shakes it and says" good luck to you sir" kelal came up and gawked" THOR LAST YEARS CHAMPION" Kaia went into the boys locker room and flirted with some of the guys.
Thor turns and smiles at the kid" last kid I saw your age was scared of me because I'm a alien who looks a little scary " kelal shakes his head " I don't think your scary and I think your awesome" Soaren nods" he has posters of you " Thor gulps" he's your brother ...." Soaren nods. Thor stares at him he had been there when kelal was born and was told that him and older siblings had abilitys like this and knew thier names and powers because he was friends with the father" what's your name kid " he asks Soaren. Soaren smiles" oh me I'm Soaren and the little ones kelal" Thor's eyes widen this match was going to be hard . Kelal hears his mother calling and goes to her .
Your exposition was... nothing, and you seem to have taken the names from a bunch of different stories, like the Guarians of Ga'hool (or however you spell that) for Soaren and Norse Mythology for Thor. You have no real punctuation and there's nothing to explain anything other than, "TIME FOR THE FIGHTGAMES." Are we in an alternate world? Is this a combination of all stories? Is this a TV show, if so, is it a live broadcast on said alternate world or a different planet? And your characters' dialogue exists only to shout or move the plot forward. But I think the worst thing was the grammar. It didn't flow because of the lack of proper commas and periods, but above all it's a very good rough draft... after you add in the explanation for what on earth is happening. Is it another Hunger Games thing? Children die there, so it seems like that, though they have purple skin, so it's not in our world... Oy.
What type of fiction grabs you and pulls you in?
FantasyWhat's on your feet right now?
Nothing.A main character you wished you could punch in the face?
Christian Grey, of course! >:DHow long is the longest story you've written?
@Maya Ha nice question.Bella Swan, Katniss Everdeen and Number Four.
I like Number Four but he can be annoying, and Katniss, well I like her too but hate her a bit more.. And I don't think Bella needs an explanation.
@Anastasia 52, 238 words exactly.
Something you've strangely always wanted to do, but know you will never be able to?
Get a tattoo.What's one thing you would want to do when you're older, before you get tied down to a job or a family?
Visit New Zealand!Are you doing NaNo this year?
Maybe, I was thinking of trying. What is your favorite book written by a foreign author?
Um... I guess it's the Harry Potters, but I might be wrong. I don't know the ethnicity of most of the authors I read from...Oh! Artemis Fowl, maybe. Or the Harry Potters. I can't pick, it's like choosing my favorite son. If I had son.
Would you rather serve in heaven or reign in hell?
Uh, serve in heaven.Do you watch AGT?
I prefer BGT. Do you know what these numbers are- 528 491, without looking them up? :P
Yes, they're 528 and 491. You can't ask for a more specific definition than that.Should you be taken over by a demon, how scared would thou be (scale of 491 to 528)
Hallee do those numbers have anything to do with the movie inception. Those numbers have something to do with a safe don't they.
Yes! Its the combination from Inception ;D5 2 8 4 9 1. lol As you can guess, I love that movie..
Yes inception is a good movie I like it too.
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@hallee good movie. :D@maniac i don't believe in demons.
if you had an hour to do whatever you wanted right now, what would you do?
Read. What was the last book you read and what did you think?
The Ask and the Answer - Patrick Ness and asdfgjklmlmdlvmlsd.Same?
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