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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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I should pick it up. Then again, I've always been the type to procrastinate. I yawn and o..."
i like this.
also, this is, like, my life. :/

That's exactly what I thought, hahaha."
*High Fives*

Okay how abut this:
Azalea (Zali) Jae"
That works too! I like it! :D

Okay how abut this:
Azalea (Zali) Jae"
That works too! I like it! :D"
Okay. Now. Surname. It has to be something kinda catchy, and it's important because the story is basically about her family and stuff.



This pitch sounds alright, but the attempted drama with "it will determine her future" is so overly cliche. What about her future will it determine?

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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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*High Fives*
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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*High Fives*"
*High fives back*
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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OHH.

I know :P
Anyway, now that we have that cleared up, ANOTHER HIGH FIVE PARTY!
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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I know :P
Anyway, now that we have that cleared up, ANOTHER HIGH FIVE PARTY!"
another one?! my arms are still recovering from all the flailing.
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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Sev, that's really harsh. can i have a different punishment instead?
or, ya know, no punishment at all? that would work too.
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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AND THEN I'LL TOTALLY BE A PART OF THE PARTAY.
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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AT LEAST THERE IS NO SCHOOL TOMORROW.
ON ACCOUNT THAT IT IS SUNDAY.
AND SUNDAY IS A WEEKEND.
THEREFORE THERE IS NO SCHOOL.
I HOPE YOU CAN SEE MY LOGIC HERE.
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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AND THAT'S BAD.
VERY BAD.

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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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YES YES YOU SHOULD DO THAT SO I CAN READ THE AWESOMENESS THAT IS DREAMLAND.
aww i'm sorry:L next time you better enter though, kay? I AM COMMANDING YOU DO THAT.
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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wait but didn't someone (i forget who it was) start the next contest but it was still the same time frame as the current contest accidentally? so i guess we just go with her prompt for next time and she runs it?
Books mentioned in this topic
The Ask and the Answer (other topics)The Princess Bride (other topics)
Flock (other topics)
The 5th Wave (other topics)
Jellicoe Road (other topics)
Okay how abut this:
Azalea (Zali) Jae