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message 101: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments I actually really like Azalea.

Okay how abut this:

Azalea (Zali) Jae


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments Max wrote: "There is a newspaper in my room and I do not like the sound of it fluttering around at the fan's command.

I should pick it up. Then again, I've always been the type to procrastinate. I yawn and o..."


i like this.
also, this is, like, my life. :/


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments Brigid *Flying Kick-a-pow!* wrote: "Saru (Queen of Bookland) wrote: "I would read it! Except the name... Carly Jae sounds like Carly Rae... Jepsen. CALL ME MAYBE."

That's exactly what I thought, hahaha."


*High Fives*


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments Sevania wrote: "I actually really like Azalea.

Okay how abut this:

Azalea (Zali) Jae"


That works too! I like it! :D


message 105: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Saru (Queen of Bookland) wrote: "Sevania wrote: "I actually really like Azalea.

Okay how abut this:

Azalea (Zali) Jae"

That works too! I like it! :D"


Okay. Now. Surname. It has to be something kinda catchy, and it's important because the story is basically about her family and stuff.


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments Hmmm... do you want it to be long? like a two word thing like Youngblood or Starkweather? Or short?


message 107: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Medium, I guess. Possibly medieval-sounding.


message 108: by Saru (Queen of Bookland) (last edited Jun 07, 2013 05:13PM) (new)

Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments Hmm... I have to think about that one.


message 109: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Yeah, me too. I found this list online a woe back so if I can find it again ill pick out some names.


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments A lot of times like for RP characters I go to this random name generator called Behind The Name. It lets you choose the ethnic background of the last name too:)


message 111: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Azalea Jae Cardonell
Azalea Jae Reviers
Azalea Jae Martell


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments I like the 2nd one :)


message 113: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments @Sev

This pitch sounds alright, but the attempted drama with "it will determine her future" is so overly cliche. What about her future will it determine?


message 114: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Well, basically I was thinking that the fifth mission for everyone is a major stepping stone kind of thing. It's still getting mapped out in my mind.


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments i agree with saru, i like the second name!


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments Sam~ on sleepless roads the sleepless go~ wrote: "i agree with saru, i like the second name!"

*High Fives*


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments Saru (Queen of Bookland) wrote: "Sam~ on sleepless roads the sleepless go~ wrote: "i agree with saru, i like the second name!"

*High Fives*"


*High fives back*


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments Great minds think alike Sam! :D


message 119: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments *joins in the high five party*


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments how do you high five two other people at the same time? this is getting complicated.


message 121: by Grace (new)

Grace (fives) | 1090 comments *wishes to join high five party, but that would be impossible!*


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments *Starts flailing arms in an attempt to high-five everyone*


message 124: by Grace (new)

Grace (fives) | 1090 comments *faints at all the attempts to high-five everyone*


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments *Throws water in Grace's face to wake her up and flails arms with Sam*


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments *grabs random person's arms and starts flailing them*


message 128: by Grace (new)

Grace (fives) | 1090 comments *Dances around crazily* Well, that escalated quickly.


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments It did.


message 130: by Sevania (last edited Jun 08, 2013 08:51PM) (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments High fives parties work in a circle. You high five one person with one hand and another person Witt he other hand.


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments Sev has enlightened us all.


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments Sevania wrote: "High fives parties work in a circle. You high five one person with one hand and another person Witt he other hand."

OHH.


message 133: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Jude wrote: "Of course. Sev is too clever for us."

I know :P

Anyway, now that we have that cleared up, ANOTHER HIGH FIVE PARTY!


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments Sevania wrote: "Jude wrote: "Of course. Sev is too clever for us."

I know :P

Anyway, now that we have that cleared up, ANOTHER HIGH FIVE PARTY!"


another one?! my arms are still recovering from all the flailing.


message 135: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Too bad! Now put your hands up to high five or I'll end up high giving your face. *malicious smile*


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments Sevania wrote: "Too bad! Now put your hands up to high five or I'll end up high giving your face. *malicious smile*"

Sev, that's really harsh. can i have a different punishment instead?
or, ya know, no punishment at all? that would work too.


message 137: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments You get no punishment if you have a high five party with me.


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments well, can we at least postpone the party? we can do it tomorrow. and more people will be awake to party with us. (because, let's face, i have no idea why i'm still awake at three thirty in the morning. every sane person is asleep haha.)
AND THEN I'LL TOTALLY BE A PART OF THE PARTAY.


message 139: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments THREE THIRTY IN THE MORNING SAM WHAT THE WHAT.


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments I KNOW RIGHT WHY CAN'T I FALL ASLEEP RIGHT NOW THIS SUCKS.


message 141: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments EAT SOME SUGAR THAT WILL MAKE IT ALL BETTER.


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments I ATE LOTS OF CHEWY CHIPS AHOY COOKIES AND THEY WERE DELICIOUS AND THEY DIDN'T HELP ME SLEEP. SO THAT'S A PROBLEM.


message 143: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments THAT DOES MAKE SENSE.

AT LEAST THERE IS NO SCHOOL TOMORROW.

ON ACCOUNT THAT IT IS SUNDAY.

AND SUNDAY IS A WEEKEND.

THEREFORE THERE IS NO SCHOOL.

I HOPE YOU CAN SEE MY LOGIC HERE.


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments I DO SEE YOUR LOGIC. BUT I HAVE TO DO STUFF TOMORROW AND I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO I'M GOING TO BE, LIKE, FALLING ASLEEP ALL THE TIME.
AND THAT'S BAD.
VERY BAD.


message 145: by Sevania (last edited Jun 09, 2013 12:41AM) (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments OKAY WELL GO TO SLEEP. SEVANIA COMMANDS IT. WHILE YOU ARE ASLEEP I SHALL WORK ON DREAMLAND. (I don't think the writing contest's gonna happen :( )


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments I SHALL TRY FOR YOU, SEV.
YES YES YOU SHOULD DO THAT SO I CAN READ THE AWESOMENESS THAT IS DREAMLAND.
aww i'm sorry:L next time you better enter though, kay? I AM COMMANDING YOU DO THAT.


message 147: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments I will enter next time. Promise. Are you running it?


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments not that i know of, hahaha.
how is it decided who runs the next one?


message 149: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments You volunteer, I guess. Or, whoever posts the topic first :P


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments oh, okay.
wait but didn't someone (i forget who it was) start the next contest but it was still the same time frame as the current contest accidentally? so i guess we just go with her prompt for next time and she runs it?


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