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message 51: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments "Whatever, you're still a zombie."


message 52: by miriam (new)

miriam Omnomnomnomnom


message 53: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments "See? Perfectly good cupcakes."


message 54: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Is confused.


message 55: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Waits for Lena to die.


message 56: by miriam (new)

miriam Coughs and clutches throat dramatically. "Help me! I'm choking!"


message 57: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Does Heimlich maneuver on Lena.


message 58: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments "See? Just choking because she didn't learn how to swallow properly."


message 59: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Narrows eyes. "I'm not fooled."


message 60: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Liane wrote: " Soulmate
I will live and die never knowing your name

You will go through your life claiming the same

We could have been happy, together, hand-in-hand

Had we not been born in separate, far-away..."


This is amazing! I love how sad it is. That sounds masochistic, but it is often way too true in real life, at least the whole "soul mate" and "never meeting them" aspect.


message 61: by Krys (last edited Apr 02, 2013 05:15PM) (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Halcyonic, you scream
Ripped wings, bleeding lips
you were not the chosen one.

Apathy, unfamiliarity
Fear, a rhythm in your flawed heart
as you say, "Won't you...

talk to me?"

Strangers meet, part again
Re-meet. Is this not full-circle?

A clash of titans, the joke of fools
Where did all your wrath go?

No, you said.

Full-circle is a this:

Strangers meet, part again.
Re-meet. Learn to sing of comradeship,

of long nights, strange tears
habits and necessities
of brokenness and histories

it is written in the ink
of your veins

alongside laughter, squinting eyes
embarrassment, no boundaries
inside jokes, disappointment

saying, we are familiar.

When did you lose this? This perfect
imperfection that is
us.


(WHOOPS. that got longer than I wanted)


message 62: by miriam (new)

miriam Wakes up. "Sorry guys, I just had an allergic reaction to that cat" points at a black cat sitting under the table. Spots half eaten cupcake on the table. "Oh yum, a cupcake!"


message 63: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Jumps in front of Lena. "YOU HAVE TO STAY WITH US!"


message 64: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Scurries over in order to stay behind Emily.


message 65: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Pats Sevania's head.


message 66: by Krys (last edited Apr 03, 2013 09:09PM) (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
... Out of curiosity, isn't this more role play than freewrite? xD


message 67: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
That's what this place is for ;D


message 68: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Hey, we're still WRITING. As ourselves. Besides, free write is anything- right?


message 69: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments I didn't expect it to be quite this way, but I've been rolling with it.


message 70: by miriam (new)

miriam I didn't either but, it's fun!


message 71: by Belle (new)

Belle | 3 comments Leave one for me!!


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments Rikki (chaos in my wake) wrote: "Is it just me or do you get the best ideas when you're about to fall asleep. Or maybe you're home sick... BOOM ideas all around you. But no pen and paper. Not even anything that remotely close to e..."

Happens to me all the time. So I keep a notepad by my bed.


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments Cupcakes? Did someone say cupcakes? I could really use some sugar right now. And how ironic. I'm tired, but have to stay up doing homework, and a song by The Plain White T's is playing called I should have just gone to bed. I wish I had a choice.


message 74: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Gosh, does no one understand that all cupcakes that have anything to do with Taylor have something VASTLY wrong with them?!


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments Sevania wrote: "Gosh, does no one understand that all cupcakes that have anything to do with Taylor have something VASTLY wrong with them?!"

I'm new here :) thanks for the info!


message 76: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Saru (Queen of Bookland) wrote: "Sevania wrote: "Gosh, does no one understand that all cupcakes that have anything to do with Taylor have something VASTLY wrong with them?!"

I'm new here :) thanks for the info!"


You're very welcome. Although, he has been moving on to the black market zombie industry, so cupcakes may not interest him anymore.

Taylor? You there? Any opinion?


message 77: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments Sorry, I was planning/attending Prom. I'll tell stories when I'm not so emotionally overwhelmed. :D

My opinion is that I am even getting a little tired of black market work. Hazel caught me hauling bodies and was a little disturbed, even though she thought the fundraising aspect was very clever. So I think I'll stop. :D


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments Sevania wrote: "Saru (Queen of Bookland) wrote: "Sevania wrote: "Gosh, does no one understand that all cupcakes that have anything to do with Taylor have something VASTLY wrong with them?!"

I'm new here :) thanks..."


Oh, so that was why he was excited about my hands! :0


message 79: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Taylor [formerly Timothy] wrote: "Sorry, I was planning/attending Prom. I'll tell stories when I'm not so emotionally overwhelmed. :D

My opinion is that I am even getting a little tired of black market work. Hazel caught me haulin..."


Are you finally changing for the better? Congratulations, this is a step in the right direction! Saru, you may not have anything to worry about.


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments Sevania wrote: "Taylor [formerly Timothy] wrote: "Sorry, I was planning/attending Prom. I'll tell stories when I'm not so emotionally overwhelmed. :D

My opinion is that I am even getting a little tired of black m..."



YAY! My hands are safe!


message 81: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments ((Lol…I'm just bored with being creepy. It's harder than it seems.))


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments Hmm, who would've thought!


message 83: by Sevania (last edited May 05, 2013 09:54AM) (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Taylor [formerly Timothy] wrote: "((Lol…I'm just bored with being creepy. It's harder than it seems.))"

Hmm... *uncertain*


message 84: by Sevania (last edited Jun 07, 2013 02:58PM) (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Alright. This is an idea I had a few days ago about a book to write. The description would go like this:


People die. A lot. That's just a fact.

Carly Jae is an assassin, just like the rest of her family. At sixteen years old, she has taken of lives of four people. Her fifth mission is an important one. It will determine her future. But the killing doesn't go as Carly Jae expects it to. Before she knows it, she's uncovering truths that were never included in her extensive training - truths about her family and her history.

Blood runs deep, but secrets run deeper.


What do you guys think? Does it sound intriguing? Clichéd? Would you read it? I haven't actually started writing it, but I probably will.


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments I would read it! Except the name... Carly Jae sounds like Carly Rae... Jepsen. CALL ME MAYBE.


message 86: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments ACK.

I totally didn't realize that.

Hang on a sec *goes to brainstorm names*


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments Okay! Let me know the new and improved name!


message 88: by Sevania (last edited Jun 07, 2013 03:39PM) (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Okay. Making a list here. Tell me which you like?


Kadira
Runa
Azalea (Zali for short)
Zila
Aedh (pronounced Ide, I'm pretty sure)
Kalida
Sira

(Will be continued)


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments So far, I like Kadira. I feel like it fits your storyline, for some reason. :)


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments I have a story idea I'm really happy with, but I'm nervous to share it, because I'm afraid it'll get stolen. Not from one of the regulars to this group, but by some sinister group member who lurks in the shadows, steals ideas, writes books based on the stolen idea and gets published. I'm paranoid, I know. :P


message 91: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments There's always private messaging, if you want to :)


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments True... very true. I shall message thee Sev! :D


message 93: by Katarina (new)

Katarina | 491 comments I like the name cattaleya but I guess that doesn't really matter....


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments Stream of conciousness(This is gonna be weird):

my lips feel warm. The pickles were spicy. Oh wait that was cucumbers. Why can I not type today? I like pie. The pie. You sir, are not A PIE. Your are THE PIE. I hate mosquitos. My eyes feel weird. UGH AS AFOREMENTIONED I CAN NOT TYPE TODAY. Cake! Cake! My brother is watching regular show haha. I should watch, too. No, I should read. MERGH. Lalalala it's funny how little goes on up here in my mind. Haha, Jon Cozart is so funny. After Ever After man, you gotta love that video. ERGH one of those floatie things is in my eyes and It's like a dot go away dot you are an outcast. My eyes are weird. Eyes turn things right-side up, but they originally see them upside down. What would happen if I turned my eyeballs upside down. I like to laugh. Why am I so itchy. Haha, sounds like the guy on TV said Meh. I love that. Meh. AH I SO ITCHY. I want to watch Despicable Me 2! LOL, that America's Got Talent audition Miu Miu Gaga! AH THE A KEY IS JAMMED ANNOYING. :P

And that ladies and gentlemen, is a view inside the mind of a genius. ;)


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments Sevania wrote: "Alright. This is an idea I had a few days ago about a book to write. The description would go like this:


People die. A lot. That's just a fact.

Carly Jae is an assassin, just like the rest of he..."


i would totally read that. just saying:D


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments Saru (Queen of Bookland) wrote: "Stream of conciousness(This is gonna be weird):

my lips feel warm. The pickles were spicy. Oh wait that was cucumbers. Why can I not type today? I like pie. The pie. You sir, are not A PIE. Your a..."


that's quite, erm, interesting. :p


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments I told you it would be weird haha:)


message 98: by Katarina (new)

Katarina | 491 comments Erm... I wrote a rough draft of a story and it's on here under non fiction and it's called part of my short story


message 99: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Saru (Queen of Bookland) wrote: "I would read it! Except the name... Carly Jae sounds like Carly Rae... Jepsen. CALL ME MAYBE."

That's exactly what I thought, hahaha.


message 100: by punkasaur (new)

punkasaur There is a newspaper in my room and I do not like the sound of it fluttering around at the fan's command.

I should pick it up. Then again, I've always been the type to procrastinate. I yawn and open another tab. I should check on YouTube. Another video's bound to be up by now, one good enough to fill my headphone-less ears . . . right?

The gods of luck are not by my side. My subscription feed has nothing new.

My shoulders droop and I hold back a curse. Okay. That's over with. Maybe I should catalog all my books onto Goodreads? My eyes hover to the tiny clock at the bottom of the screen. I curse. Lamp! Only five minutes till guitar class. I'm not even prepared yet.

. . . And yet, here I am, typing away random stuff into a club. I wonder once more whether I hit my head too hard when I was younger and slowly edge away from my laptop, getting ready for the day.


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